Milk Wave 454 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 @, Stephan got back up to his hooves and had angry eyes directed at Zeta, but kept a smirk on his face. "I already got enough of that stuff from Fire Horn earlier." He said in a cocky tone. "Let's see which one of us wants her more, then." Stephan dashed up to Zeta and began delivering quick but effective blows to Zeta's face. He ended the combo with a kick to Zeta's chest, sending him flying through the door where Grand was suppost to be kept in. The last blow that sent him to the door didn't bust it down like normal, but left a decent crack in the wall. And when getting up, he heard something coming from inside. A sound of kids screaming away, something that was unusual. "Ugh, stay here asswipe." He said, entering through then shut and locked the door behind him. What he noticed was an open window where he saw Grand far off into the distance and slammed his hoof down. She escaped. No matter, since she cant get far anyways. Zeta thought, climbing over the window and leaped to where the party was held at. @@Grand_Finale What he saw was quite funny, but he quickly grabbed both Grand's (Grabs) hooves and held them in place before being able to smash any more of the cake. "Now baby, lets settle down shall we? Not like if the ponies are scared, you should be too hm~?" A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Grand elbowed zeta in the side before continuing to kick the presents off the table. " THIS SHOULD BE MY PRESENT" she yelled as she punted a doll across the park. caramel watched uncomfortably as her sister ruined a little kids birthday party. "Yeah, we really need to stop her" Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Grand elbowed zeta in the side before continuing to kick the presents off the table. " THIS SHOULD BE MY PRESENT" she yelled as she punted a doll across the park. caramel watched uncomfortably as her sister ruined a little kids birthday party. "Yeah, we really need to stop her" It didn't hurt much where he was elbowed at, but released Grand in order for her to rage onwards before tackling her to the ground and put her in a headlock. "It seems like you're not listening to me. Maybe this might teach you a lesson." He said before tightening the grip on his headlock and forced her body weight on top of her so she couldn't move. A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Zeta ran past Missy and towards Grand, he then proceeded to mount her, basically. "Hey, Zeta, get away from her." Missy yelled, running at Zeta and pushing him out of the way. "Stay there, you horny little stallion." Starburst ran over to Grand and picked her up with his magic. "I have an idea. Caramel, we're going to see Rarity." Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Steel laughed "well let's get this show going"steel said as he landed on a cloud that would be the starting and finish line "hey guys set up a party for when I win and Make sure to invite everypony so that nopony will be left out of the glory of me"steel said my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geek0zoid 1,468 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 (edited) @, Stephan ran up to Zeta and turned him around so he was facing him. "I'll never have her, huh?" He raised one of his front legs in the air and was about elbow him in the cranium. "Goodnight, asshole." He elbowed Zeta in the head, causing him to fall to the ground and slightly fracture his skull. Edited October 1, 2013 by Stevenearthpony Signature made by: Rainbow Skywalker My little YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GeekySteven (Game (Mostly) and Pony Reviews) (Yes, I'm actually active) My Johari Window thingymabob :http://kevan.org/johari?name=StevenEarthPony ASK ME A QUESTION OR TWO!:http://mlpforums.com/topic/85648-ask-steven-anything-you-want-he-loves-answering-your-questions/#entry2228380 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 @, Stephan ran up to Zeta and turned him around so he was facing him. "I'll never have her, huh?" He raised one of his front legs in the air and was about elbow him in the cranium. "Goodnight, asshole." He elbowed Zeta in the head, causing him to fall to the ground and slightly fracture his skull. After being knocked off, he struggled up but only had a split second to see what was going on before his vision blurred when he was hit in the skull. It impaired his movement for the time being, but in his blurred vision he could see Grand being picked up by magic and tried reaching for her. It was useless, since the more he did the more it hurt his head to. Eventually he did his best to try crawling, but that made it hurt so badly that Zeta had to give up. "Grand, no.. You're mine, so don't leave me.. Why are you leaving me, why? Is it because of that damned Stephan? Is it because, i'm not... I'm not good enough?" A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Starburst ran into Rarity's boutique. "Aunt Rarity, we need your help." Starburst brought in Grand. "Of course, darling, what do you need?" Rarity asked. "We need.....well, a dress, a unique one, you can't ask why. It's for her." Starburst pointed to Grand. Rarity placed her red glasses on her nose. "Well, I'd best get to work, shouldn't I?" Rarity said. "The only party will be for me!" Rainbow Dash yelled back, man this was good, she hadn't felt so alive in years. Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geek0zoid 1,468 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 @, Stephan bent down to Zeta and sighed. "Pitiful. Whatever happened to you, Zeta?" Stephan asked him. "You've been corrupted by desire and greed. We used to be pals. Bros. There's more than just Grand." He raised Zeta's head up. "I went back on my words, but I promise I'll live up to them now; From now on, no mare shall ever get in the way of friendship." Signature made by: Rainbow Skywalker My little YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GeekySteven (Game (Mostly) and Pony Reviews) (Yes, I'm actually active) My Johari Window thingymabob :http://kevan.org/johari?name=StevenEarthPony ASK ME A QUESTION OR TWO!:http://mlpforums.com/topic/85648-ask-steven-anything-you-want-he-loves-answering-your-questions/#entry2228380 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 @, Stephan bent down to Zeta and sighed. "Pitiful. Whatever happened to you, Zeta?" Stephan asked him. "You've been corrupted by desire and greed. We used to be pals. Bros. There's more than just Grand." He raised Zeta's head up. "I went back on my words, but I promise I'll live up to them now; From now on, no mare shall ever get in the way of friendship." Zeta looked to his eyes, spitting out a little on him before losing his grin. "Grand, that means I have nothing.. Ur, my head... What's going on?" As soon as he said that, his head started to hurt more from losing his greed. The glowing soul started to show at his mouth, but he did his best to keep it inside there before somepony got a jar. A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 "you wish you could best me"steel said with a laugh he spread his wing and git ready for the race "can we'd hurry this up I have aawesome life I'd like to get back to"steel said "I know you doing have a life so maybe once this is over if you beg I'll let you hang out with me" my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 As soon as grand saw the dresses her eyes lit up. "They're all MINE" she cackled as she tried to grab them, but the magic surrounding her prevented her. She glared at the pony holding her. "LET ME DOWN! Those dresses belong to ME! I DESERVE them" she screeched as she fought against the magic to get her hands on a dress (sorry, grocery shopping for my mom right meow) Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 "If you behave, I'll consider it." Starburst replied. Missy walked over to Zeta with a bottle. (They're just getting fucking passed around.) She put it over Zeta's muzzle, capturing the spirit inside. "How do you feel now?" Missy asked. "Ready, get set, go!" Twilight said. Rainbow Dash unsurprisingly set off much faster than Steel. Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Steel seen he was losing so he went higher into the and when the group couldn't see them steel dove at rainbow dash when he got somewhat closer he pulled out a throwing knife and threw it at her wing it sliced her wing open"you won't win I'm the best not you"steel yelled my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 "If you behave, I'll consider it." Starburst replied. Missy walked over to Zeta with a bottle. (They're just getting fucking passed around.) She put it over Zeta's muzzle, capturing the spirit inside. "How do you feel now?" Missy asked. "Ready, get set, go!" Twilight said. Rainbow Dash unsurprisingly set off much faster than Steel. "Urr, uh... Wha? What happened? And why does my head hurt so bad?" He said to Missy curiously, noticing his sight was blurry and he felt weak. "All I remember was trying to help Grand from malnutrition, then I black out and end up like this. And in fact, where is Grand? Where is the rest of the ponies?" A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Rainbow felt the pain in her wing, but kept going and kept ahead of Steel. Missy patted Zeta on the head. "Don't worry, Grand's in capable hooves. She's with Starburst and Caramel." Rarity was finished, it was done. "Grand, this is for you. It is a unique dress that nopony else will ever get to have, it's just for you." Starburst said. "I still don't know what you're trying to do, but anyway, here it is." Rarity said. Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Grands eyes grew wide as she grabbed it and put it on. "This dress is... Magnificent!" She squeaked as she twirled around in it, incredibly happy. "Ooooh thank you thank you thank you!" She squeaked as she continued to spin around and around, eventually falling over. She simply giggled and hugged herself Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Rainbow felt the pain in her wing, but kept going and kept ahead of Steel. Missy patted Zeta on the head. "Don't worry, Grand's in capable hooves. She's with Starburst and Caramel." Rarity was finished, it was done. "Grand, this is for you. It is a unique dress that nopony else will ever get to have, it's just for you." Starburst said. "I still don't know what you're trying to do, but anyway, here it is." Rarity said. He nodded slowly, smiling away at hearing what Missy had spoken. "That's good to hear then. Once I figure out why my head feels so sore, then I want to see her again and tell her i'm sorry for all the things that I caused for her. There's been pressure buildup, and I need to release it all." A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 When rainbowdash didn't slow down he threw another knife at her other wing and sliced it but he didn't stop there he threw a second one that pieced her wing "let's see you win now"steel yelled ((I'm planing on having steel win but then everybody starts talking bout how he cheated and stuff abd that tajes the pride from his win thus fixing him)) my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 (edited) Rainbow passed out from the injuries, she crashed into the fountain in the middle of Ponyville, turning the water red. Starburst placed a bottle over Grand's muzzle, the spirit getting ejected out through her mouth. He had lust and envy with him, only thing left to do was..... Starburst heard a crash from outside, he ran to see what it was. "Aunt Rianbow Dash!!!" Starburst yelled, running over to her and fishing her out of the water. Edited October 1, 2013 by ShyFlutters Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Grand rubbed her head and sat down, mostly due to lack of energy. "How did I end up here? Oh what a lovely dress!" She smiled and looked up to see rarity, only to completely freeze. Rarity was one if grand biggest idols. "Oh dear... Hello ms. Rarity" she said nervously. Caramel simply picked up her sister with her magic and began carrying her back to the hospital. "Caramel, how did I get out here? The last thing I remember us seeing Stephan and then... Everything went black" Caramel just sighed. "It's a long story" Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Steel finished the race with a smile "I told you I'd win I'm the best at everything lets get thulis party started"steel yelled then noticed that everypony was looking at rainbowdash "she lost I'm the best so why ate you so concerned with her"steel asked my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 (edited) "Come on Aunt Rainbow, wake up...come on!" Starburst said. Rainbow awoke slowly, she looked upat Starburst. "Hey kiddo, what heppened, did I lose the race?" Dash asked, then she remembered, getting up and glaring at Steel. "Him he saboatged it, he tried to kill me, to win a race." "Why hello dear. Uhhh, so I hear you are a fan of my work." Rarity said. "I've seen you in a few performances, I think we're going to be good friends, you and I." Edited October 1, 2013 by ShyFlutters Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Steel finished the race with a smile "I told you I'd win I'm the best at everything lets get thulis party started"steel yelled then noticed that everypony was looking at rainbowdash "she lost I'm the best so why ate you so concerned with her"steel asked my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 1, 2013 Share October 1, 2013 Grands eyes grew wide as she was carried out of the boutique. She squealed. "Raritys seen my shows! RARITY has seen my shows!!" She giggled and smiled like a child. Caramel just rolled her eyes and plopped her down in the hospital. "Yes, she's going to need a room" the nurse gladly brought Grand into a new room and helped her into the bed Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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