The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Dash was genuinely excited now. "What was it that you did? I'm down for an adventure story." Dash said. "You're always full of good stories, like that time you told me you did a sonic rainboom." Dash laughed. "These ponies were.....the heroes of Equestria, so we've heard anyway." One horse said. "They will most likely come for their friends, but what they do not understand, is that there must be death." Death replied. "Well then, we must prevent them from reaching Tartarus." The other horse said. Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Siren smiled. "Why bother? I have so much fun here, tormenting my fellow prisoners. No one gives me trouble for it, but it sure can get boring" She said with a smile. "You are planning to go even further? Well that sounds like an adventure, Ive had enough of these boring old sinners, I want something new." Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "I'm going to the ninth ring, in truth it's what I will face my punishment" steel said "but i plan to make another deal when the devil and if you want you can join me"steel said he liked this mare and since he decided that moonbeam was most likely dead he wouldn't mind keeping her around my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "Making a deal with the devil huh? I never thought of that. I wouldnt mind getting out of here, thats for sure" She said with a smile. "You wouldnt mind taking a little ol mare along for the ride would you?" She asked, swishing her tail around. "This place has worn out its charm, I'm looking for something bigger, better" Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geek0zoid 1,468 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (edited) @@Grand_Finale,@, "Well, actually, I've never really committed a crime." Light confessed. "Why am I here? Well, I gave up my life to save another's. I worked with Blasted Nova and his friends when I was alive. They stopped the trotter outbreak, ya know." He said joyfully, but with a little sorrow. Stephan walked to Rainbow Dash and laughed with her. "Yeah, I guess I'm a pretty good storyteller." He joked. "Well, you see... I actually died today." He confessed. "My death released a demon named Dread, who seemed to know us personally. He wanted us to take him back to Zycrin in a possessed sword I found during the outbreak in exchange for my life." Edited October 20, 2013 by StevenEarthPony Signature made by: Rainbow Skywalker My little YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GeekySteven (Game (Mostly) and Pony Reviews) (Yes, I'm actually active) My Johari Window thingymabob :http://kevan.org/johari?name=StevenEarthPony ASK ME A QUESTION OR TWO!:http://mlpforums.com/topic/85648-ask-steven-anything-you-want-he-loves-answering-your-questions/#entry2228380 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "You died? What do you mean, you died? You're here." Dash said, confused at what he was saying. There was no way a pony could die and then come back to life, that was just silly. "Although, that's kind of what happened to me, but the thing is, our love saved me, who is this dread guy?" Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "no i wouldn't mind but to get there we have to endure the punishment from every ring"steel said "so as long add your ready we can go wait I need to talk with somepony first"steel said as he began scanning the crowd for starswirl steel had talked to him before on his first passing and needed him to something for him ((do any of you want to control starswirl for afewposts)) my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "Mm, that sounds sweet and all, but I'm not one for sappy stories. I was executed, y'know, by the royal gaurds? It seems my behaviour was bad, so killing me seemed the best way to fix it. Its a good thing I dont keep grudges. Oh wait, I do" She said, though never dropping her charming appearance and voice Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geek0zoid 1,468 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 @@Grand_Finale, @, Light's mood went down at the mare's little tale. Tartarus obviously wasn't his place. He just hoped he didn't get himself there for nothing. "So, what do you do around here? You said that you do something with prisoners. Do you, like, torture them or something?" He asked. "Dread was pretty much death itself he had the ability to bring me back to life, but only if we brought him back to Zycrin." Stephan explained. "When we finally brought him back to him, he reanimated Zycrin's corpse and used it as a puppet of a sort. He commanded him to attack us, and I was soon coming face-to-face with my former rival." Signature made by: Rainbow Skywalker My little YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GeekySteven (Game (Mostly) and Pony Reviews) (Yes, I'm actually active) My Johari Window thingymabob :http://kevan.org/johari?name=StevenEarthPony ASK ME A QUESTION OR TWO!:http://mlpforums.com/topic/85648-ask-steven-anything-you-want-he-loves-answering-your-questions/#entry2228380 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Steel chukled "hey light I wouldn't go around saying your a good guy here in limbo you should be fine but past that guardian you'll get killed overcame over and over because you'll be right back here" steel said "and if you want you can stay here in limbo unless you want to get your life back" my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "Oh, torture? No no no, that was only something I did back home. No, I just play with their fragile little feelings is all. You'd be surprised how much guilt these supposed criminals carry around with them." She said casually, brushing off some dust that had settled on her hat. " I have to do something to keep myself entertained" Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (edited) "Well, that's an interesting story, but one that'll have to wait for some other time, I'm very tired. But before you leave, can I get a little kiss, just a little one." Dash batted her eyelashes at Stephan. -The next day- (I wouldn't think time passes in Tartarus so you guys are good.) Starburst woke up next to Caramel, they were cuddling? He moved as slowly as he could trying not to wake her up. He put on his cape and hat and walked out the door. He wondered, did they fall asleep right away, or did something else happen?No, stop that, nothing happened, you wouldn't take advantage of her like that. Star Swirl sat near a wall, he had nothing to do except think. He had been left to rot in Tartarus by Celestia over a thousand years ago. Edited October 20, 2013 by ShyFlutters Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 @@Grand_Finale -the next day- Moon was the first to wake up, yawning and stretched out. She stopped from the small pain the stitches gave her, but felt good enough to walk carefully so she did just that. Because of it, she was able to walk without any trouble and proceeded into Grand's room. "Rise and shine my little cutie pie! Today's a wonderful day, since Zeta convinced me to donate a certain something so I can have all the love I want~ From stallions at least, without getting pregnant. Sound pretty fancy~?" Meanwhile, Zeta woke up slowly and rubbed his eyes. The first thing he wanted to do was check on Grand, but he heard Moon upstairs and didn't want to disturb the two. So he walked into the kitchen, starting to prepare a little something of his own cooking knowledge. An egg sandwich to be exact, which he made from two English muffins and a sunny-side-up. A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Steel had almost givin up when he saw starswirl "come on after this I'm going for the second ring" steel said as he walked over to starswirl "hey starswirl how you doing"steel asked as he sar down beside him he had a plan for starswirl so his life wouldn't be so bleak my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (She can't donate her uterus, I don't think that's how it works) Grand woke up sleepily. "Yes, good morning Moon. That sounds like a lovely idea for you" she said, making her way to her vanity where she began styling her mane. "It's good to see you walking again, you seem much healthier" Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geek0zoid 1,468 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 @, @@Grand_Finale,@, At that moment, Light became a little bit more scared of this white mare. "I guess criminals aren't as light-hearted as others make them out to be." He said. "I'm sure it keeps you busy though, right?" Stephan leaned in and kissed Dash on the forehead. "Night, Dash." Stephan then walked back to his house to get some rest. He had enough excitement for one day. -the next day- At the moment Stephan woke up, he went down to Fire's house, where he supposed Moon was. He wanted to ask her about Sirius. Signature made by: Rainbow Skywalker My little YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GeekySteven (Game (Mostly) and Pony Reviews) (Yes, I'm actually active) My Johari Window thingymabob :http://kevan.org/johari?name=StevenEarthPony ASK ME A QUESTION OR TWO!:http://mlpforums.com/topic/85648-ask-steven-anything-you-want-he-loves-answering-your-questions/#entry2228380 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (She can't donate her uterus, I don't think that's how it works) Grand woke up sleepily. "Yes, good morning Moon. That sounds like a lovely idea for you" she said, making her way to her vanity where she began styling her mane. "It's good to see you walking again, you seem much healthier" (( I looked it up, you can I think. Maybe, eh.. )) "Oh yeah, I forgot I could walk! It's so excit- ow.. Except I cant move much around." Moon replied, then walked carefully to Grand and hugged her from behind. "My my, you're a little dirty! Maybe you should take a shower, I can help wash your body~" A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Siren smiled at the scared stallion. "You seem on edge dear, don't be. At least not yet, you're a little boring to go after anyways" she said before looking at the magical pony. "I see your still sulking about" Grand looked at her. "We're going to Tartarus, I don't need to look the part, and I wouldn't need any help if I did. Now let's get some breakfast ready" she said, heading to the kitchen Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (edited) (I think what Sirius is talking about is more of a surrogate mother type of deal.) Starburst went to wake up Fire and Missy, but was stunned when he walked in and saw what he saw. He closed the door slowly behind him, not blinking as he walked out into the living room. Star Swirl turned to Steel."It is you, once again, what do you wish of me now, nuisance." Star Swirl asked in a grumbly voice. "What do you want, Siren? I have little patience for your games." Edited October 20, 2013 by ShyFlutters Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Siren smiled at the scared stallion. "You seem on edge dear, don't be. At least not yet, you're a little boring to go after anyways" she said before looking at the magical pony. "I see your still sulking about" Grand looked at her. "We're going to Tartarus, I don't need to look the part, and I wouldn't need any help if I did. Now let's get some breakfast ready" she said, heading to the kitchen Moon let go of her and followed behind, a little worried now that they were going to hell. "You're, you're going there? But why? I mean, isn't that just a legend or something?" In the kitchen, Zeta finished eating his egg sandwich and saw Grand coming in, giving her a big hug as she entered. "Hey honey, are you ready to save the day?" A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "don't be like that all I need is for you to watch for a couple of ponies that may show up, my firebds may come here to try and save me, one is part of your family her name is Missy im sure you can use your magic to find out what she looks like anyways they will be in a group if they show up tell then what they must do to get out"steel said my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geek0zoid 1,468 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 @,@@Grand_Finale, @, Light slightly took offense to that. Science and smarts were NOT boring. He then turned to this Star Swirl pony. "Wait, you know Steel? From where?" Light asked him. Stephan ran to Fire's house. Being a bit rude, he entered without knocking, as always. "Moon, is it fine if I see your daughter? I just want to say sorry for yesterday's events." He said. He then looked at Zeta. He tried to smile to the fact that he was happy with Grand, but he just couldn't for the moment. Signature made by: Rainbow Skywalker My little YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GeekySteven (Game (Mostly) and Pony Reviews) (Yes, I'm actually active) My Johari Window thingymabob :http://kevan.org/johari?name=StevenEarthPony ASK ME A QUESTION OR TWO!:http://mlpforums.com/topic/85648-ask-steven-anything-you-want-he-loves-answering-your-questions/#entry2228380 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (edited) "You speak of Missy Starlight, the one who was abandoned by her parents when she was 6 years old, for the mere fact of being born into the world as a non-royal alicorn. I shall watch for her. An alicorn is a precious being, a powerful being, one which must not be trifled with, no matter what you do." Star Swirl began to ramble. "I could not ascend, I couldn't figure out the secrets, no, Star Swirl was not smart enough, the princess tricked Star Swirl." (Imagine him like Septimus from Skyrim.) Edited October 20, 2013 by ShyFlutters Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Steel rolled his eyes "thanks and light I met him the first time I died"steel said "alright siren you ready to go"steel asked as he statred walking away he would have to tell then about what they would face in the next ring,where lustfull ponies are punished my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Siren rolled her eyes. "That's enough Grandpa, thanks though. I'll be seeing you" she said, placing her hat back on her head. Grand sighed. "I suppose as ready as I'll ever be" Caramel woke up tiredly and brought herself downstairs. "Good morning everypony, ready to go?" Grand looked at her. "Your staying here with glint and Sirius Caramel" Caramel looked at her. "What? No, I want to-" Grand stopped her. "The decision us final" Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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