The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Missy woke up. "Come on, wake up, we've got things to do." Missy said to Fire. "And I think I'll just stick to sex with mares, I don't want to get pregnant again." "Fine, less for me, more for you, that seems fair." Fire said. "Mum, I'm staying here, I have to look after Glint, don't worry like you always do, just go save Steel and Light and we'll be fine." Starburst said."Well, alright then." Missy said. Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (edited) @ @@Grand_Finale Moon looked at Stephan and was a little concerned at first, but thought for a bit and nodded. "Alright Stephan, you can go see Sirius. Just, don't hurt her or anything okay? I love her with all my heart, since she's my only daughter." Zeta giggled at Grand's response to her sister. "I would respect her decision Caramel. You're a young girl, and you deserve to be safe. Trust me, we'll all come back without a scratch. Isnt that right Grandy~?" He said and nuzzled her cheek. Edited October 20, 2013 by Sirius Crescent A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geek0zoid 1,468 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 @,@@Grand_Finale,@@dashian500, Stephan walked out of the house, glad to be out of there. He couldn't stand seeing Zeta coo all over Grand. It was like he was a totally different stallion. He then proceeded to the hospital. Light turned around to see Star Swirl. He seemed intimidating to him. "Ummm... guys, wait up!" Light yelled, running after Steel and Siren Signature made by: Rainbow Skywalker My little YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GeekySteven (Game (Mostly) and Pony Reviews) (Yes, I'm actually active) My Johari Window thingymabob :http://kevan.org/johari?name=StevenEarthPony ASK ME A QUESTION OR TWO!:http://mlpforums.com/topic/85648-ask-steven-anything-you-want-he-loves-answering-your-questions/#entry2228380 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Caramel looked at zeta strangely before sighing. "Yeah, fine whatever" she said, sitting down on the couch Grand smiled at Zeta before going to the kitchen. "I'll make some breakfast for everyone before we head off" she said, grabbing some eggs and trying them up Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (edited) "then don't be slow"steel said when he reached the guardian steel turned to siren and light "okay past this door are the most lustful ponies in history the will try to have sex with as you go just move fast and get to the other side"steel said then shuddered a bit as he recalled what happened last time a stallion had tried to mount his face... ((yes his face steel wasn't pleased he chopped the stallions stallionhood off)) Edited October 20, 2013 by dashian500 my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "Caramel, are you OK? You seem kind of annoyed." Starburst asked. "Did something happen last night or.....?" Missy walked out whistling a tune (again My Little Pony theme). "Glint is in her crib, just keep an eye on her Starburst." Missy was getting her saddlebag on. "You know I will, don't worry about Glint." Starburst responded. "Hmm, I am very interested to meet this Missy Starlight, I wonder if she'll remember me." Star Swirl grumbled to himself. Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (edited) Siren smiled. "ooooh, that sounds fun. I don't know why I never visited before" she said before laughing. She turned to light. "You ready for this deary? You don't look like your used to so much sinning" she hissed in his ear. " no worries, I'll keep your innocence nice and safe, corrupting you will be my job" Caramel looked at starburst. "No, nothing happened. Grand just won't let me go with everyone to Tartarus" Edited October 20, 2013 by Grand_Finale Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Caramel looked at zeta strangely before sighing. "Yeah, fine whatever" she said, sitting down on the couch Grand smiled at Zeta before going to the kitchen. "I'll make some breakfast for everyone before we head off" she said, grabbing some eggs and trying them up Zeta nodded, surprisingly turning on another burner and began to cook some eggs. "I've already ate my breakfast, so why not I help? I remembered that before, I used to make my own eggs and such anyways, just a nice deed to you honey..~" Moon heard the conversation going on and realized. "Wait, hold on. You like Grand now? Don't be saying you like my Grand, cuz she's mine!" "Heheh, sorry Moon. I think she's a little more interested in me right now, that is unless you have some sort thing for girls as well." He teased. A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Steel turned to the guardian "open the door"steel comannded the guradian did since his job was to make sure none left the second ring to entervrhe first steel walked in and saw tons of ponies and other creatures having sex with and molesting eachother my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geek0zoid 1,468 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 @@Grand_Finale,@, Light shrugged. "I've been through enough shit up their. I've seen a lot of evil and I've fought against a lot of evil. I think I can take it." He said, trying to sound courageous. Stephan went to Sirius' room knocked on her door. "Sirius? It's me, Stephan. I know you might not want to see me right now, but could I at least talk to you?" Signature made by: Rainbow Skywalker My little YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GeekySteven (Game (Mostly) and Pony Reviews) (Yes, I'm actually active) My Johari Window thingymabob :http://kevan.org/johari?name=StevenEarthPony ASK ME A QUESTION OR TWO!:http://mlpforums.com/topic/85648-ask-steven-anything-you-want-he-loves-answering-your-questions/#entry2228380 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "Well, I'm staying here with you now, I have a feeling I won't be needed in the long run anyway, so I'm all yours for the rest of the day." Starburst said, kissing her. "Also, mum, couldn't you roll of of dad before falling asleep."Missy turned around to Starburst and looked slightly embarassed. "Just because I'm your mother, doesn't mean I am not allowed to have sex." Starburst buried his face in a cushion. Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Siren laughed. "You've fought against evil, but have you ever given it a try? I think you might like it" she said, walking into the room. She crinkled her nose. "Now isn't that a smell? Well let's continue in then" she said, kicking a lustful pony charging at her in the groin Grand smiled. "How nice of you Zeta" she said, grabbing some plates and putting the eggs in them Caramel smiled and giggled at Starbursts reaction. Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (edited) "Can I talk to you, Caramel? I'm not even sure we should talk about it right now, but It's niggling at me." Starburst said, gesturing for another room. Missy shuffled over to him and put her muzzle to his ear. "Did you ask her yet?" Missy whispered. "None of your business," He whispered back politely, patting Missy on the cheek a few times, getting a scowl from her, Edited October 20, 2013 by ShyFlutters Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Steel walked in and side stepped a mare that was trying to rush him he walked up beside siren them a mare come from behind him she went under him in an attempt to get his satllion hood when he noticed her he took flight and then dropped onto her stomach "so as much fun as you tought it would be"steel asked siren my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geek0zoid 1,468 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 @@Grand_Finale, Light took a whiff of this smell. It made his face turn a darker shade of green. "It smells like death... and a bonfire... mixed together." He muttered. He then saw Siren kick a sex-hungry pony in the groin. His eyes widened in surprise. "Heh. Looks like you don't screw around." He chuckled. Signature made by: Rainbow Skywalker My little YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GeekySteven (Game (Mostly) and Pony Reviews) (Yes, I'm actually active) My Johari Window thingymabob :http://kevan.org/johari?name=StevenEarthPony ASK ME A QUESTION OR TWO!:http://mlpforums.com/topic/85648-ask-steven-anything-you-want-he-loves-answering-your-questions/#entry2228380 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Siren smirked. "You learn a few tricks after spending some time down here. And what's the fun in romance if there's no chase, hmmm?" She said, stepping over a pair of ponies. "I don't know about you but these ponies got pretty lucky in their punishment" she said, smiling Caramel nodded and followed Starburst into the next room. "What's up Starburst?" Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "Like I said, this is going to make me sound weird, but.... is it important enough to tell anypony about? I know we aren't engaged or anything, but.... should we wait until after Steel and Light have been saved or should we tell everypony now?" Starburst was kicking himself on the inside. "I hate you, you always make things worse for yourself, the more you say and do." Little Starburst said. Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "yes you would think from what I understand is they can only do the act they hated most" steel said as he stopped and tripped a stallion that was running at him he was about to start walking when out ofthe corner of his eye he seen a mare diving for sirens flank he flicked a knife at the mare and it hit her in the eye my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geek0zoid 1,468 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 @@Grand_Finale,@@dashian500, Light looked down at the ponies on the ground. They looked like they've been beaten and whipped, because they were making a bloody mess all over the floor. He decided to walk around the ponies. "Sheesh, if that's a low degree of punishment, I'd hate to see a high degree." He was becoming more frightened by the place every minute. Signature made by: Rainbow Skywalker My little YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/GeekySteven (Game (Mostly) and Pony Reviews) (Yes, I'm actually active) My Johari Window thingymabob :http://kevan.org/johari?name=StevenEarthPony ASK ME A QUESTION OR TWO!:http://mlpforums.com/topic/85648-ask-steven-anything-you-want-he-loves-answering-your-questions/#entry2228380 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 @@Grand_Finale,@, Light shrugged. "I've been through enough shit up their. I've seen a lot of evil and I've fought against a lot of evil. I think I can take it." He said, trying to sound courageous. Stephan went to Sirius' room knocked on her door. "Sirius? It's me, Stephan. I know you might not want to see me right now, but could I at least talk to you?" Sirius was awake by then, looking upwards and twirled around some needles above her with her magic. Once she heard Stephan knock, she set them down in its rightful place and sighed. "It's alright mister Stephan, you can come in. Be warned though, there's something odd that was stuck in me since I cant go anywhere and it feels like it's in a bad spot." A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "We can tell everyone after, I think them going off to Tartarus takes priority right now " she said, hugging him. "After we can tell them all" Siren smiled. "Not bad. Well, this one isn't as bad as some of the others, I can only imagine what wrath will look like" she said. "You keeping up, goody two hooves?" She called behind her Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashian500 194 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 Steel speed up "hey did you know a mare just tried to bury her face in your flank"steel said as he pulled out good daggers and stabbed a mare that looked like she was 13 he sighed "such a going mare here its a shame" steel muttered as he matched sirens pace my ocs stained steel demon blood lawleit pronounced law le it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk Wave 454 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 @@Grand_Finale Soon, the eggs were cooked to perfection. He slid them all on a plate and set the table, waiting for everyone to come eat. "It's quick having two ponies isn't it, Grandy?" Zeta said to her and decided to give a small kiss to Grand on the lips. It felt good to finally do something like that again, especially doing it to the girl he loved oh so much. A shoutout to Dr-Whooves for making this sweet thing~ Anyway, go ahead and visit my http://mlpforums.com/user/380-sirius-crescent/'>About Me page for my characters :3 Engaged to Steel Crescent as of 5/1/2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ponyville Critic 304 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 (edited) Starburst nuzzled into Caramel. "That reminds me, there's something I want to give to you, I left it back in my hospital room. Come on, follow me." Starburst ran off to the hospital. Fire eventually came out of the room. "Fire. Starburst and Caramel are staying here to look after Glint while we're away in Tartarus, I think I should be more armored than this, but, we don't have anything." "Actually, I think we do." Fire said. Edited October 20, 2013 by ShyFlutters Star Gazer: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810 Thorough Study: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thorough-study-r9413 My review channel on YouTube, you should check it out: [link] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Finale 529 October 20, 2013 Share October 20, 2013 "Age is but a number here dearie, I was 17 when I was executed. A sinners a sinner, regardless" siren said, never dropping her smooth and charming appearance Grand smiled. "Alright everypony, come grab a plate" she called, putting the plates of food on the table Caramel smiled and laughed as she chased after Starburst. Grand FInale:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/grand-finale-r3742 Caramel Corn:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/caramel-corn-r4029 Tarot:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tarot-r4090 Siren Song:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/siren-song-r4586 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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