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"WELL IM FROM A DIFFERENT DIMENSION, WHERE, ALL MY FAMILY MEMBERS THINK I AM DEAD!" He yelled at the top of his lungs.

"Sorry about that." He said, shying away.

"Im not normally this loud. Oh, and forget what i said. That NEVER happened. Understood?"

He said, hopefully.

Emerald started at him, wide-eyed. "Um...yeah...Okay.." she sounded scared.

 

A growling comes from outside, Missy closes the door with her magic and peeks out the window.

"What are those things?" Missy asks. There are pony-sized creatures with red eyes and wings, stalking the streets. A purple pegasus appeared out of a doorway, she screams and is quickly taken by one of the creatures, a flash of green and she's gone.

Emerald cursed under her breath. "I don't know, but we will have to find a way across without attracting their attention. Maybe one of us could distract them while the rest of us run to the other side?"

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"We shouldn't do anything rash, we should hide in here while it's still safe. We're in a library aren't we, the largest source of knowledge in Pontville, i think we should get reading." Missy said. "We should be able to find something out about these creatures."

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"We shouldn't do anything rash, we should hide in here while it's still safe. We're in a library aren't we, the largest source of knowledge in Pontville, i think we should get reading." Missy said. "We should be able to find something about about these creatures."

"That's a better idea. Okay, I'll look over here-" *points to the section to where she had dispersed into before* "Is that cool with you guys?" *sees something on the section she wanted to inspect, and grabs it off the floor* "This is the book I threw down when you fell, Missy!"  


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"I'll just go check over here," pointing towards the mysterious creatures section. He wandered over and saw a book sticking out about Discord. "Hey guys? What's Discord doing over in the mysterious creatures section? Shouldn't he be in the famous ponies throughout history section?"


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"Maybe not." Missy replied. "Discord is a draconequus, a very rare type of creature, Discord is the only one of his type, he's the spirit of chaos. Though i don't know what he would have to do with this, those creatures look like changelings, they don't seem to be anything chaotic."

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"I say we beat the tar outta them!" He joked.

"Lets crack open that book! We might need the information, and until its safe, Dont go outside."

He suggested.

 

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"Maybe not." Missy replied. "Discord is a draconequus, a very rare type of creature, Discord is the only one of his type, he's the spirit of chaos. Though i don't know what he would have to do with this, those creatures look like changelings, they don't seem to be anything chaotic."

"And the book was pulled out..." Al Capony replied. "There might be some connection, possibly not though, and it doesn't seem like a changeling's style to kidnap ponies without disguising themselves as them. Something fishy is going on, I don't like it. Can we head to the boutique? I don't like this outfit."


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"I'm afraid we can't, we can't risk going into the open, not with those things lurking around in broad daylight." Missy yelled. "Sorry for shouting, but i'd rather keep casualties to a minimum, we don't have time to worry about and outfit." A line which Missy knew Rarity wouldn't like if she heard it. 

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"Do you have anything I can change into here then? I'm one of those ponies who can't stand staying in the same clothes for too long. And look here, that drawing looks like one of those creatures," Al Capony said, handing the book to Missy. "I'd suggest when we get a break, grab all the books we can on the subject, saddle up, and get to my bomb shelter." 


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"Do you have anything I can change into here then? I'm one of those ponies who can't stand staying in the same clothes for too long. And look here, that drawing looks like one of those creatures," Al Capony said, handing the book to Missy. "I'd suggest when we get a break, grab all the books we can on the subject, saddle up, and get to my bomb shelter." 

"We can't just hide! We have to find a way to stop Discord." Tears were spilling out of Emerald's eyes. She couldn't bear to think what might happen if it was Discord who had taken her Aunt. She could be dead by now, or in lots of pain. Or being tortured! Emerald looked away from the other ponies, and cried harder.


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She could be dead by now, or in lots of pain. Or being tortured! Emerald looked away from the other ponies, and cried harder.

 

"Hey, don't cry, I can't stand to see pretty mares cry..." Oh buck, did he just say that out loud? "Ahem, anyways, we don't have to hide, but I think we'll be safer from these... things back at my bomb shelter. It would take an atom bomb to even dent the thing, it's our best bet if we want to live to save your aunt." 


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"I suggest we wait until nightfall, that way we can get around without drawing too much attention to ourselves, and before you say "why can't we teleport there?", i can only teleport to places i've been or know. I've never been to your bomb shelter before, so my magic is no use." Missy explained. "We don't know that Discord has done anything, this could be anyone's doing."

 

(Atom Bomb's don't exist in Equestria, or at least i hope not.)

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"Hey, don't cry, I can't stand to see pretty mares cry..." Oh buck, did he just say that out loud? "Ahem, anyways, we don't have to hide, but I think we'll be safer from these... things back at my bomb shelter. It would take an atom bomb to even dent the thing, it's our best bet if we want to live to save your aunt." 

Emerald shook her head. "No it's not. I don't know about you guys but I have sompony I love out there, and I don't care about dying, that's all i've ever expirienced. So I am going to go out there and kick some changeling flank." Emerald kicks the door open angrily, but there are tears running down her face and runs outside.

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Emerald kicks the door open angrily, but there are tears running down her face and runs outside.

 

"Somepony better go with her," Al Capony said, rushing out the door after her, tossing the book to Missy. He yelled "Wait, hold up, where are we going? What's the plan?" To Emerald.

 

(OOC: Filling in characters. Eeyup, filling in characters. Keep on filling in characters.) 


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Missy runs quietly after them reading the book. She comes to a realisation.
"Guys?" She whispers. "Don't make any loud noises, these creatures are attracted by sounds. Don't ask me how that works because i don't know, the book doesn't say." Flipping through the book about Discord.

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"Somepony better go with her," Al Capony said, rushing out the door after her, tossing the book to Missy. He yelled "Wait, hold up, where are we going? What's the plan?" To Emerald.

 

(OOC: Filling in characters. Eeyup, filling in characters. Keep on filling in characters.) 

Emerald looked at him. "I'll distract them so have enough time to run across. Then I'll somehow fight my way over. Okay?Fight them if you need to. " Emerald didn't wait for an answer. Two changelings were quickly advancing on Emerald and Capony. Emerald immidetly began punching and hitting them. "GO!" she yelled to Capony."

Emerald flipped both changelings over on their backs, they attempted to zap Emerald with their magic but she was to quick for them. Emerald had grabbed a piece of broken glass nearby, and their magic was reflected onto them. The changeling's spell had covered them in a mess of a sticky green goo. Emerald smirked, but than felt a warm breath on the back of her neck. She did a backflip and was faced with 5 more changelings. 


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"GO!"
 

 

"You obviously have no idea who I am," Al Capony said, pulling out a pistol with his magic, shooting a couple of his targets dead in their tracks with a shot through the skull, right in between the eyes. "I was a royal guard, and I was the head of my department, crowd control." 

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This was time for some quick thinking. Missy charged her horn, this was a complicated spell, teleporting one pony was hard enough, but teleporting 4? That was going to be almost impossible. Missy's horn exploded in a flash of magic and the ponies were gone.

 

They appeared in Rarity's boutique.

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They appeared in Rarity's boutique.

 

"Aw, right as it was getting fun! Oh SWEET! We're in the Boutique, I'll be out in a minute," said Al Capony, grabbing a turtleneck and a sports jacket. Within a matter of seconds he hopped out of the changing room, looking somewhat like a private investigator. "Ah, much better than that drab old disguise. So know do we go to my bomb shelter?"

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"We can get there, but you have to be more careful this to,e. we can't risk something like this happening again, in case one of us gets taken by these creatures, the book refers to them as "Children of Chaos." They are definitely the product of Discord's chaotic magic."

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"Children of Chaos."

 

"Fitting name, let's settle down for a few minutes. Grab anything that could be of use, it's a long walk, I'd teleport us there, but I don't know the spell. We have to be ever vigilant, nopony can make any noise, capiche?" Al Capony said. "You have 5 minutes to gear up."

 

(OOC: I'm going to be afk for at most 10 minutes, doing some homework.) 


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"Fitting name, let's settle down for a few minutes. Grab anything that could be of use, it's a long walk, I'd teleport us there, but I don't know the spell. We have to be ever vigilant, nopony can make any noise, capiche?" Al Capony said. "You have 5 minutes to gear up."

 

(OOC: I'm going to be afk for at most 10 minutes, doing some homework.) 

*They noticed that Emerald wasn't with them*

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As Emerald walked, she mumbled to herself angirly. "How dare they ditch me..." She said, even more tears spilling down the sides of her face. "First time I had friends and they act like jerks, ditching me like that."


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"How dare they ditch me..."
 

 

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"Alright, everypony ready? Wait, where's Emerald?!?!?!?!" Al Capony exclaimed. "Oh my Celestia, where is she?" He yelled to Missy with hostility in his voice. "How DARE you leave anypony behind. I'm leaving to look for her, follow this map to get to my bomb shelter," he said, tossing the map to Missy then running out the door.


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"Alright, everypony ready? Wait, where's Emerald?!?!?!?!" Al Capony exclaimed. "Oh my Celestia, where is she?" He yelled to Missy with hostility in his voice. "How DARE you leave anypony behind. I'm leaving to look for her, follow this map to get to my bomb shelter," he said, tossing the map to Missy then running out the door.

 

Emerald was walking in the Everfree forest. The cuts on her forelegs made it almost impossible for her to walk. Emerald was panting, she had been walking like this for awhile. Emerald sighed, and layed down on the grass. Her forlegs were killing her.


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Richard went quiet.

"I will go and look for her also." He said, calmly.

"I've got a bone to pick with them anyways."

He laughed maniacally.

He left.. not following Capony, he notices one of them coming at him.

That one, had his food.

"You..." He said, staring it down.

"Give me my food, and you wont get hurt."

Richard demanded.

The Chaos child, rushed him.

"A fighter, eh? Well! HOPE YOU LIKE THE TASTE OF DIRT!"

He said, while bashing it to the dirt.

That made it pissed.

It unleashed a barrage of attacks.

All but the last one missed.

"URF!" Richard said, as one leg was cut, just slightly.

"EMERALD!! HELP!!"He yelled hoping she could hear, While trying to not get hit by the magic.

"MISTY SCREWED UP THE SPELL! IT ACCIDENTALLY LEFT YOU!" He yelled, as he dodged another bolt of magic.

'Please..'

He thought as another bolt was fired, just missing him.

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