visual art What do you guys think?

[Huntress 94]

So I just threw something together this morning and I was wondering what you guys think? Is it bad, good, etc. any feedback is good.

Edited August 30, 2013 by PictureCrisps

[Rockymoo 2,137]

I'd make "Velocity" a different shade. You have to squint at it for a few seconds to make out what it says since it really blends in with the background.

Or better yet, make it say "Electric Boogaloo" instead. Much cooler.

[DaReaper 1,945]

I agree with trisky I barely seen velocity but other then that it looks pretty cool. Except now i gor Breakin 2 Electric Boogaloo stuck in my head

[~Rule 63~ Lyeco 527]

It's is pretty nice, I guess. I am also guessing that could be your Science Homework? . Anyway nice effects

[King 5,626]

It looks rather nice, very nice colour theme. As others said, velocity is harder to see, but other then that, nice work :3

[Dsanders 5,750]

Like others have already mentioned, I'd say that though the Electric looks perfectly fine, the Velocity could be either bigger or a different sort of color.

 

Or you could just go with what Tricksy said.