Guest September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 "Banished, forgotten, alone,....centuries pass and centuries go, and still i am left, with a burning hole...." Hello, this is a song i made, well i have been slightly depressed for the past few days,..so i made this song, i dont like it :/, but that's just my worthless opinion. Well anyway here's the song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b748707RIV8 well....enjoy, i guess i'll just go sit in a corner....thank you for taking the time and listening to this..errrr "song" genre: piano something.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunas Husband 2,778 September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 I couldn't hear all of it, truth be told it made me cry, still crying now. Because past few day have been really hard on me too. Lost my wife of 6years, lost a great friend just the other day and now My mother is dying... but the song is very lovely and beautiful, when I'm not feeling so down I'm have to play all of it. but over all I LOVED IT! 1000/10 "Does not matter what they say, my sweet love! I love you! and always will." ~Princess Luna Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 I couldn't hear all of it, truth be told it made me cry, still crying now. Because past few day have been really hard on me too. Lost my wife of 6years, lost a great friend just the other day and now My mother is dying... but the song is very lovely and beautiful, when I'm not feeling so down I'm have to play all of it. but over all I LOVED IT! 1000/10 Oh...i..i'm sorry, i am so sorry, i know whatever i say it wont help, but if you need to talk you can always talk to me, i would be more than happy to help. Again, sorry for your loss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jokuc 8,174 September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 (edited) First off, I'm sorry to hear you've had a hard time. *hug* I hope it'll be better soon. Anyways, stop saying that your music is bad. This is very well done music, you know how to get/make (whatever you do (I mean some people make their own sounds and some use sounds that's already inside the programs)) your sounds, and you know how to use them. The song sounds very cool but you know, many people gets "fooled" by it's great sounds and style. However the song overall is okay. It's not how you've made it that's the problem, it's mostly that, as I've said for one of your other songs, you need to make the "melody" more interesting. Now in this one you had a pretty good melody a few times, but some parts of it was a bit meh. But since you're this good at creating things, I'm sure you will make something amazing sometime. Actually, it would be very cool if you could come up with a good lyrics, or get someone to help you do, and then ask a famous brony, preferably a girl since it fits better with this type of music (no I'm not hating on men <3 ). Really, aim big and see if you can do this and I'm sure you'll get popular or something if you just can create a very good song. Edited September 25, 2013 by Jokuc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 (edited) First off, I'm sorry to hear you've had a hard time. *hug* I hope it'll be better soon. Anyways, stop saying that your music is bad. This is very well done music, you know how to get/make (whatever you do (I mean some people make their own sounds and some use sounds that's already inside the programs)) your sounds, and you know how to use them. The song sounds very cool but you know, many people gets "fooled" by it's great sounds and style. However the song overall is okay. It's not how you've made it that's the problem, it's mostly that, as I've said for one of your other songs, you need to make the "melody" more interesting. Now in this one you had a pretty good melody a few times, but some parts of it was a bit meh. But since you're this good at creating things, I'm sure you will make something amazing sometime. Actually, it would be very cool if you could come up with a good lyrics, or get someone to help you do, and then ask a famous brony, preferably a girl since it fits better with this type of music (no I'm not hating on men <3 ). Really, aim big and see if you can do this and I'm sure you'll get popular or something if you just can create a very good song. Thank you for your opinion and thank you for taking the time to listen to my song, hmmmmm i havent thought of adding vocals to my songs,..well...would definately have to try that out sometime, i could get my sister to sing, she's a good singer (trained). Hmm, i should try yeah. Thank you again. I always appreciate opinions and yours is no exception. oh and another thing,...thanks for the hug *hugs back* Edited September 25, 2013 by Guest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jokuc 8,174 September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 Thank you for your opinion and thank you for taking the time to listen to my song, hmmmmm i havent thought of adding vocals to my songs,..well...would definately have to try that out sometime, i could get my sister to sing, she's a good singer (trained). Hmm, i should try yeah. Thank you again. I always appreciate opinions and yours is no exception. oh and another thing,...thanks for the hug *hugs back* Really, try it it would be amazing and you would certainly learn much more. It's hard to do music that fits to the vocials sometimes, so it'd be a challenge for you. But you're good enough to do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 Really, try it it would be amazing and you would certainly learn much more. It's hard to do music that fits to the vocials sometimes, so it'd be a challenge for you. But you're good enough to do it. You really think so? That..well, it's amazing someone thinks i'm capable of doing a vocal song, thank you. Damn wish i became a brony sooner,..would have met such supporting people sooner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrilliantVenture 334 September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 (edited) Like this a lot! Reminds me of my own classical work...I'd love to do a collab sometime! Maybe something ambient and melodic... On the other hoof...I'm sorry that you're going through a hard time...hopefully things get better for you... *Edit* THAT'S WHERE I RECOGNIZED IT... It reminds me of Evanescence - My Immortal No wonder I liked it! I love Amy Lee's work...(her old work at least) Edited September 25, 2013 by BrilliantVenture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 Like this a lot! Reminds me of my own classical work...I'd love to do a collab sometime! Maybe something ambient and melodic... On the other hoof...I'm sorry that you're going through a hard time...hopefully things get better for you... *Edit* THAT'S WHERE I RECOGNIZED IT... It reminds me of Evanescence - My Immortal No wonder I liked it! I love Amy Lee's work...(her old work at least) You...you would like to do a collab O.O, i...wow that, well someone would actually like to do a collab with me =), thank you, also,,,i fell honored that it reminds you of my immortal that song is insanely good, the piano is just well,....incredible, the emotions,...it's undescribable. Thank you for taking the time and listening to my song =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinyl Scratch. 605 September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 *me listening, doesn't relize its finished for like 10 mins* i guess it put me into deep thought, not many things can do that to me, amazing song, it is now my thinking song :3 "I want to live on mars so I'm closer to the stars." - Deltron3030 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrilliantVenture 334 September 25, 2013 Share September 25, 2013 You...you would like to do a collab O.O, i...wow that, well someone would actually like to do a collab with me =), thank you, also,,,i fell honored that it reminds you of my immortal that song is insanely good, the piano is just well,....incredible, the emotions,...it's undescribable. Thank you for taking the time and listening to my song =) no problem at all man! What I've highlighted in bold there is the exact reason I wanna collab with you...because you see music as emotion...not many artists see that these days...I love people that do, because it shows they're gonna put their souls into the music...it's not just about popularity or how many likes on facebook you can get...it's about sharing a part of yourself with the audience...and I believe you've really done that here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virulence 254 October 7, 2013 Share October 7, 2013 I really really like this. It is very sad, but I like it. It's calming too for studying or writing in my opinion. Great work, and keep making music /) Signature by: http://mlpforums.com/user/17005-littlerawr/ My OC's: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/virulence-r4617 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/euphony-r4536 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest October 8, 2013 Share October 8, 2013 I really really like this. It is very sad, but I like it. It's calming too for studying or writing in my opinion. Great work, and keep making music /) Well...this post came out of nowhere XD, thank you, i will most definatly keep making music, i'm making a song for FeatherGem's video...i'll upload it probably , thank you again.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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