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I guess i have to make another thread?

I can update my old one and i dont know why... Seems like nopony knows why.

 

Anyways....

 

My first one. I am really happy with this one.

 

 

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First one colourd.

 

 

 

 

 

Skylight version [MY OC]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My second

This one is OK i guess. Got a little stressed and hyped so that probably why some parts are off!

[NOTE: THIS IS A SKETCH! LINES AND MORE WILL BE IMPROVED IN THE FULL VERSION]

 

 

 

 

 

 

Coloured

Note: I really cant draw tails-.-

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Third! Fluttershy. And this is also my first attempt to draw a pony body, so lines may be a little....Off?

 

 

 

 

 

Colourd

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Forth! So this is Filly AJ. Uhh, yeah xD

[THE TAIL WILL BE REMADE!] [sketch]

 

 

 

 

 

Final Version!

 

 

 

 

 

Please. Tell me what i can improve on, and yes. These are my first serius images i've made.

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The first two are good, but the lines are really "shaky". You should work on making the lines more smooth.

 

Now about the third one. Well, it's quite good, but the proportions are off. What I'm trying to say is that you should make the head smaller, or the body bigger.

 

So yeah, good job. Practice makes perfect.

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The first two are good, but the lines are really "shaky". You should work on making the lines more smooth.

 

Now about the third one. Well, it's quite good, but the proportions are off. What I'm trying to say is that you should make the head smaller, or the body bigger.

 

So yeah, good job. Practice makes perfect.

 

Thanks for sharing your opinion!

And im having a really hard time getting those lines right, i think im too hyped when i draw them.

 

Yeah i noticed that with the body and the head, but it was more of a ''test'' since well, my first time xD

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The first two are good, but the lines are really "shaky". You should work on making the lines more smooth.

 

Now about the third one. Well, it's quite good, but the proportions are off. What I'm trying to say is that you should make the head smaller, or the body bigger.

 

So yeah, good job. Practice makes perfect.

 

This, so much this... another thing I noticed was, that the front legs were really really small compared to the hind legs. :) Edited by ProjectRKA

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This, so much this... another thing I noticed was, that the front legs were really really small compared to the hind legs. :)

 

They have been choped off!

Kapow!

 

Okey they have not..

But yeah, thanks, even tho i've noticed it ^^




 

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I don't know how to explain it but filly AJ just looks off somehow :/

Lol, but its a good job :)

 

Nah, its just my head. Its really good :)

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I don't know how to explain it but filly AJ just looks off somehow :/

Lol, but its a good job :)

 

Nah, its just my head. Its really good :)

 

Maybe because her tail is missing?

Well, Trixie ate it... Thats why its missing.

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I meant other than her tail, Lol! :P

 

Please.

If you can find anything... Let me know, becuase im having a hard time figuring something out.

Cant see anything wrong./

Well exept the tail ^^




 

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All I can say is they look really awesome! :D

 

Sorry I'm not much of a help as far as critiques go.

 

P.S. What did you use to color the images?

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All I can say is they look really awesome! :D

 

Sorry I'm not much of a help as far as critiques go.

 

P.S. What did you use to color the images?

 

I used a tablet and Photoshop ^^

 

Thanks :D




 

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The last one looks really good :) You're getting better and better I see ;)

 

Hye thanks.

Well.... My goal is to be come better after all, but i still think my first one was the best xD




 

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You're really good at coloring, and specifically eyes. If you use a tablet, in Paint Tool SAI there's a "stabilizer" option you can use to fix the shakeyness of the lines.
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You're really good at coloring, and specifically eyes. If you use a tablet, in Paint Tool SAI there's a "stabilizer" option you can use to fix the shakeyness of the lines.

 

Hey thanks!

 

Yeah i will try it out.

Heard alot about it ~




 

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