private Torn: A Dr. Whooves RP

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Link to OOC: http://mlpforums.com/topic/76176-torn-a-dr-whooves-rp/

 

As the fabric continued to tear, the Doctor tried his best to keep the good in him alive, yet the darkness had a grip in his soul. "Time will stop and the world will be all mine!" The Dark Doctor sneered. The Doctor tried to fight the darkness, as it pulled him the east side of the fabric of time. 

 

Thunder Dash was up in the skies doing his daily patrol around Equestria until he saw a figure roaming to the east side. He descended a little to make it out. When he came close, he made it out to be The Doctor. "Huh, what's he doing all the way out there. When Thunder Dash tried to come close, The Darkness took over The Doctor and made him disappear. "What the hay? How'd he?" Thunder Dash asked. "I've gotta find Derpy to see what's up." Thunder Dash said as he flew back to Ponyville. 

[The Cynical Lone Wolf 615]

Derpy was walking around Ponyville and singing the smile smile song 

"Okay got some muffins", she checking her bag

Later that night,she looked at the stars,she found them fasating to look at it,even when she was in the orphanage.She saw metorites going down and huge grin on her face 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

@@COBLoneWolf,

 

(OOC: As DM, I've got control over day and night)

 

By time Thunder Dash arrived back in Ponyville, it was late at night. He saw Derpy stargazing. "Oh Derpy, thank Celestia I've found you. I've got some news. The Doctor, the one you assist...something's wrong with him. It's like he's...possessed...with some...mysterious dark power. I saw him walking to the east side of Equestria, which...is where the east side of the fabric of time is. I don't know what he wants but we've got to work together to find out." Thunder Dash explained. 

[The Cynical Lone Wolf 615]

(Sorry,my bad.)

Derpy looked very concered when ThunderDash said that because even though he didn't know it,she loved him and would help the Doctor no matter what.True,she did know that The Doctor is immortal,but she married The Doctor and died old,that would be fine 

"Take me to him", she said llokg determined 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

@@COBLoneWolf,

 

"I'll do my best." Thunder Dash said as he took to the skies again. "In order to find him, we've got to enter the east side of the fabric of time. We will thus be taken to the future, in which it'll be very hard to find the doctor." Thunder Dash explained as he started to fly east.  

[DarkDarsi 124]

The dark gray griffin enters his home, tired after another long day of teaching ungrateful, uninterested and some vaguely racist pegasi adolescence the 'wonders of the pony mind' and how to understand it.

He quickly flips through his mail,

"Bill, bill, junk, junk, Scout, I mean, Soarin's desperate attempts to get me to teach him how to seduce somepony, junk, junk, junk, Soldier wanting me out of retirement and finally, coupons, joy."

throwing most in the bin he goes about his business in a disinterested manner, before finally flopping down on the couch, his gaze wanders the lounge, seeing a photo of him and his old Heavy, massive smiles on their faces along with a mess to put even gravelpit to shame, they had just won a team pie eating contest in Ponyville.

"Ponyville, didn't I see that on the news recently? Hmm, and in the coupons, some day spa. I think the Doc mentioned it once" he scoffs " haven't seen that old coot for a while now, wonder if he ever did settle down"

He looks over to a calendar on the wall, got a break coming up, maybe I'll go check, finally make use of one of those discounts" 

He chuckles before settling down and drifting off to sleep.

 

(Imma hope this isn't dead already, if it is, I wanna act a defibrillator)

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

@@DarkDarsi,

 

(OOC: Sorry, but you need to sign up in the OOC Thread. You can't just join an RP just like that. Did you even notice that the RP was marked "private". I need your OC if you're gonna join)

 

Meanwhile, The Doctor was struggling hard to control himself, yet his dark side had a firm grip on his soul. 

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

dawn runs around her house looking worried but really shes just looking for something "no,no,no,no! Where is it! Ugh" she says and then looks at a box that's labeled 'DO NOT OPEN' " ah!" she says opening it and looking inside. "There it is..." She says calmly taking something out "i never got over this problem...but desperate times comes with desperate measures....." She takes out a screwdriver "the sonicscrew driver. "Heh doctor gave it to me but never asked for it again" she chuckles " now where the heck is he?" 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

With Derpy still on his back he looked everywhere around Ponyville. He then spotted a house that kind of resembled some sort of laboratory. Thunder Dash landed in front of the house. "This kinda reminds me of The Doctor's place. Of course, he would keep the Tartis in the house in his basement!" Thunder Dash thought to himself. He then knocked on the door. "Anypony home?" Thunder Dash asked. 

 

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[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

dawn looks at the door "what?" she mutters to herself "what?" she says opening the door "two things one: the doctor isent here and two: this was his old home....now what would you like?" she says angrily and then calmly at the end "and also if your trying to sell something to me go away!" 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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"First of all: I ain't tryin' to sell you anything. Second of all...about The Doctor...he's been possessed by some mysterious dark force and is tearing the fabric of time. If the the fabric of time is torn, the entire world will be frozen in time." Thunder Dash explained. The pony looked angry that he answered her door.  

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

dawn looked confused and worried and takes a deep breath "i'll help you....but only because i still care and i want to travel with him again! nothing less and nothing more! now let me just grab something and i'll come back!" dawn says mostly calm and runs backinside and grabs her sonic screwdiver "alright! now where are we going?" 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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"We've got to head over to the east side of the fabric of time. This way, we can automatically warp to the future. The Doctor has the Tartis, which is a giant obstacle, for we're gonna have to literally squeeze ourselves through the fabric of time; unless we bump into Colgate or Princess Twilight, because those two know time traveling spells." Thunder Dash explained as he took to the skies with Derpy still on his back.  

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

"well...SOUNDS GOOD TO ME!" dawn yells cheerfully and locks her door "i know usually ponies dont lock their doors but  have a lot of enemies and i don't want them barging into my house..." she explains " i used to travel with the doctor! very interesting....then something happened im not sure what...but any ways what about you? How do you know him?" dawn says lost in her thoughts

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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"Oh, we used to time travel for fun a lot to revisit the past times of Equestria. One time, we went back as far as when Discord ruled. He was like "Allon-sy!" When he peeped out the window of the tartis. I was laughing so hard. Oh those good days." Thunder Dash said as he continued to fly. 

 

Meanwhile The Doctor, possessed with the dark force was wreaking havoc in future Equestria. 

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

dawn smiles "yes...the good days....but after a while every one gets left behind but cant expect him to stay for to long cant expect anyone to stay for long....but he was nice to travel with" dawns smiles more "now lets get on with it before anything bad happens! Well something bad probobly has happened....i dunno just lets move on!" dawn says with  a fake anger in her voice

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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"Yeah. Something bad HAS already happened. The fabric of time has already been torn and things can go from bad to worse if we don't speed up." Thunder Dash said as he increased his speed. He then saw what looked like a white light. "There it is! The fabric of time!" Thunder Dash said as he continued to speed his pace.  

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

"any one who has traveled with the doctor would see thats the fabric of time! So what has he done? or do you not know....Or whats happening???" dawn says confused and smart at the same time " because really i havent been keeping track of him!" dawn says "well actually sometimes i spy on him but thats only because i dont want anything to happen but other wise i dont keep track of him!" 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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"Derpy you better hold on 'cause we'll be sucked in and transported to the future." Thunder Dash warned as they neared the portal. Thunder Dash increased his speed as he could feel the energy of time pulling him in to the dimension. Soon, he was in between the dimensions of time. All that surrounded him were auras of energy. 

 

 

 

@@COBLoneWolf,  

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

" being in the middle of time can be very weird.....it can make you feel dizzy,worried,random emotions,hate,stress and so on....i learned that from major studying on time and space...i spent two days in the library looking at books that were related to time and space hoping that i'd find origins of the doctor....or maybe even the master! but i dident succeed...." dawn says "its very dangerous"  

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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Thunder Dash looked all over but saw no sign of the doctor. "Well, I guess we should head on over to the future. There absolutely no sign of The Doctor here." Thunder Dash said as he kept on going. Soon he was sucked into the fabric that led right into the future. Thunder Dash landed on his stomach with a thud on the ground with Derpy still on his back.  

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

"luckily we can touch anything in the future.....but...we cant see ourselves as long as we dont look at each other we are FINE!" dawn says "oh sorry im very controlling" she continues and looks around "its very different even though its only a few years in the future" 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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"Huh, look at each other? This isn't some sort of curse." Thunder Dash stated as he got up and made sure Derpy was okay. He looked around as saw the ruins of what was Ponyville. Ahead of him, he saw the train station where the Friendship Express used to run. "Boy, this is sure abandoned. I just hope that Equestria in our time won't be like this, 'cause this is sure depressing..." Thunder Dash stated.  

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

dawn rolls her eyes at thunder dashes comment about the curse "it will create a paradox! You should know if you traveled with the doctor! So why dont you? Its impossible that you dont because well hes the doctor! he travels orward in time backward it time EVERYWHERE! so how come you dont know that it would create a paradox!?!" she yells angrily at him 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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"Ugh! You think I'm stupid?! With the fabric of time tearing, the possibility of a paradox is pretty slim. If the fabric was repaired, then there will be a paradox in time. Remember when Twilight's future self appeared? That was from her own thoughts." Thunder Dash said. "And you don't have to be so sharp all the time. We're a team in this one after all." Thunder Dash added.