Harmony Destroyed: Part 2

[_~Soaring Heart~_ 45]

Fluttershy remembered the horrid stories bystanders had told them. Three Equestrian fatalities. Three disastrous moments in time. Three deaths that Equestria would pay for dearly. Applejack was trying to restore an old barn. But most old and used things could collapse. And that's exactly what the barn did. Poor Applejack's screams of pain and terror were muffled by the crashing of the olds barn on top of her. Apple Fritter neared the barn seconds too late. "A-Applejack! No!" Apple Fritter had shouted. Twilight's death. Twilight had been studying. While studying, the new Princess was oblivious to everything else around her. So Spike saying "Twilight! Get out! Fire!" was met with a "Mmm-hmm." and a wave of her hoof. Spike could not get her out. So he left, crying, as Golden Oaks Library burnt down. Rarity's death. The unicorn was trying to make dresses for a client. Rarity was so wrapped up in her dress that she shoved a fork into the toaster to grab her new snack. Her stupid action was responded to by a 'BOOM!' And a crackle, as a fire and explosion hit Rarity. Sweetie Belle and screamed in sadness and horror at coming home to find a huge hole and a ruined dress at Carousel Boutique. Fluttershy sobbed harder into Pinkie's fur, the memories hurting more than hearing it at first. Rainbow joined them in crying and hugging, aware that now, Discord, King Sombra, Nightmare Moon and Queen Chrysalis could destroy Equestria to their dark hearts' content. The three ponies cried harder than ever before. "P-Pinkie?" Fluttershy asked. "Yeah?" Fluttershy stared at her. "How are we going to survive now?" Pinkie stiffened. "I-I don't know."

[Cerise Hood 102]

This I rate: ★★★★★ out of ★★★★★! My only complaint is that each of the of the chapters/parts should be longer. Also, now that you have two chapters, I suggest giving a link to the first, previous, and next(when you're done) chapter.

 

Gee, I wonder who your three favorite ponies are .

[_~Soaring Heart~_ 45]

This I rate: ★★★★★ out of ★★★★★! My only complaint is that each of the of the chapters/parts should be longer. Also, now that you have two chapters, I suggest giving a link to the first, previous, and next(when you're done) chapter.

Gee, I wonder who your three favorite ponies are .

I am half happy half sad. First, thanks for the good rating. Seconds, I like all of the Mane Six, it just so happens that with the villians, everypony dies. I will post links and make the chapters longer, I just needed to get some good rates.

[Cerise Hood 102]

I am half happy half sad. First, thanks for the good rating. Seconds, I like all of the Mane Six, it just so happens that with the villians, everypony dies. I will post links and make the chapters longer, I just needed to get some good rates.

I wasn't trying to say you hate some of the Mane 6. I was mostly just joking. But, then again, you can't hear the tone through a computer screen.

 

I am glad that you'll be continuing, and can't wait to read the next chapter.