Pony Fanfiction

[MistyGem 17]

hi every one im writing a fanfiction  duh well its about a pony that is transformed into a changling and ventures to find a cure to this curse it will be written like a play in a way for creative types that my want to make a animated or semi animated series based on it just ask first please cause i may want to do voices and feel free to comment about your thoughts if its a bore or you want more ill post as much as i can but writing isnt always easy hope you will enjoy

setting is unknown for it is to dark to see

???: so your finally awake.

SilverHooves:who are you !where am i ! why is it so dark ! why am i so light headed?

???: in go time my dear silver hooves but what you should be asking whats going to happen

SilverHooves:w-what do you mean!

???: let me give you an idea!

Blinding light floods the room with boarded windows and a dresser in front of the door with a red eyed changing standing directly in front of silverhooves

SilverHooves: AHHHHHHH-

the changeling puts her hoof in silverhooves mouth

changeling: now now we dont want to cause any.... accidents now do we little SilverHooves

SilverHooves-gulps and nods-uh huh

changeling: gooood there isn't much time to waste! LET THE TRANSFORMATION BEGIN !

Silver hooves: WHAT!?!??!

another changeling puts tape over Silvers mouth and knocks her out

 

                        to be continued

[Irish Mist 119]

I can see some area's where this could use some serious work: though the idea sounds rather interesting.

I'd also say to just focus on the fic rather than worrying if someone will translate it into another medium down the line as it somewhat cheapens the fic; at least in my opinion.

[MistyGem 17]

Thanks allot ill take it under consideration but the reason i have for writing it like this are beyond just make things easier for youtubers but test my own skill. You see im a very artistic type and i like to test my self with new things and styles and i like writing stories like this it really fun too when i go back and read then to myself 

 

                                                               thank you i love your opions

[Malinter 3,064]

i think you should focus on getting it fully done before thinking on animating and voicing it

[MistyGem 17]

thanks i so glad people read this unlike a certain fanfiction on a certain website THAT I PUT A CERTAIN AMOUNT OF TIME INTO

but lets not wallow in the past i mean its not anyone here would now what its about anyways well... some pony would

 

Before i start with the part 2 im saying this i moving to a normal writing style but i might switch over from time to time

 

"Were am i now ?" Silver Hooves mumbled. She opened her eyes looking around."The Everfree forest?" As she looked around with burled eyesight she heard"I-is it ok?" Silver Hooves wiggled around trying to see who said it but her sight was to bad."We should take it to the doctor!"A voice said"No no this is nothing a doctor would know to handle" another said . The first one silver heard said"We should take it to the Princes! she'll no what to do!"The three ponies said in unison "OK!" As they moved on Silver could see what looked like the Crystal Empire but she couldn't be shore with her eye's slightly blinded and a splitting headache on her forehead. As they entered a room her eye sight began to return and she saw Princes Cadence. She screamed but that wasn't why, she had looked down at her hooves and all she saw was a dark blue with intruding holes she knew what had became of her but didn't want to accept it.

 

to be continued

Edited December 1, 2013 by MistyGem

[MistyGem 17]

Dec 6

 

     "What have you've done!"A loud booming voice cried "Do you know how stupid you are!""Ahem, i believe i have done just as commanded my queen." The changeling said with a ton to his voice "When i said to "take care" of her, I DIDN'T MEAN THIS"The Queen boomed "Well you should have been more clear" He said sarcastically. The Queen placed her decaying hoof slowly down apon her face and mumbled "What will Chrysalis think" "M-my Queen?" the changeling stuttered "LEAVE NOW" The queen shouted "I have work to attend to, and in this case fixing your problems AGAIN!" The changeling puffed and went on his way "She'll see my "work of art" i just need to do some editing. Now first thing is first to find that pesky Pegasus and get this over with!"

[MistyGem 17]

lol sorry ive been gone so long but my computer blew up so now im on a laptop and since it Christmas im taking a break so don't expect anything soon

[MistyGem 17]

Wow I forgot all about this but here is the next episode p.s. this one is in script form (its a talking scene)

 

Cadance: So, the messages you have sent are true.

???:Correct...

Cadance: I was afraid of that.

SilverHooves: uhhhhh, my head....

???: She is coming to!!!!

SilverHooves looked around seeing Cadance and a Cherry red pony with a white mane. They seemed to be in some sort of doctor's room with machines beeping and chord hooked up to her

SilverHooves: Wha what were am I?! Who are you!? Is there a draft in here? WHY CANT I STOP ASKING QUESTIONS!

???: SHHHHhh do you wake the ENTIRE crystal empire!

SilverHooves: Welll MABEY! wait.....

SliverHooves patted her forehead and up to her newly earned horn

???: Now I know you aren't used to your new body but-

SilverHooves: AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHh

???: WOULD YOU STOP YELLING

SilverHooves: WOULD YOOOOU STOP YELLING

Both of them stopped and looked at cadence who the entire time had been laughing her plot off in the corner of the room

Cadance: Hahahaha im sorry im sorry its just AHAHAhAhAHA (Cadance rubbed a tear from her cheek)ahaha oooo well I guess you should know this is cherry drop and I guess you know who I am

CherryDrop: well duh

 

                                                       to be continued

"Date Umm..... well who the plot cares anymore." Blackheart said to herself "I mean how dare Queen Beta say that to me its be year since a pony was successfully transformed!" Blackheart stomped her hoof down as she walked along 'Well maybe she was just frustrated I mean, there's a lot problems going on for our kind in general at this time." Her brother suggested "Well I don't care, she has to be blind to not see this work of true art, I mean, I've been here apprentice for years yet she expected me not use the knowledge I have learned" Blackheart declared. She began to speak again but had walked into an outer wall of the crystal empire "Oh were Here !"

 

 

 

                                                                                                To be continued 

[MistyGem 17]

any questions or comments fill free to ask I love your guys opinion

[MistyGem 17]

ok here is the next part one day pinkiepie ate a frog.... no for now this project is closed im working on a story witch name will not be told so  till then see yall later