I need more opinions, please?

[Slice0Pie 815]

I need more opinions, please? I really want to improve, like I said before...

Anyways, Princess Fluttershy

[Vinyl Scratch (Filly)™ 936]

From what I've learned all yah gotta do is keep drawing and keep practicing. It may take a while but you'll get better at drawing as you learn new things and experience more styles. I'm not an art critic or anything, but I'm just giving some friendly words of encouragement.

[Zygen 6,066]

Looking better already!

 

Now for the critique.

 

First of all while the head shape is overall better it could still use some work, the muzzle seems kinda long, and make the head as a whole needs to be a bit more rounded, I'd look at some ponies and maybe others drawing ponies on YouTube, and practice some.

 

The mouth is a bit small look, and should probably be the same color as the coat but darker, as should the outline and any other facial features like that.

 

I don't think at that angle the nose has both nostrils visible, so they should look more connected as just one little line, look at a show ponys face if you wanna see what I mean.

 

The ear is a little bit awkwardly down, it needs to be put face more up, almost straight up really, and maybe moved up the head even, the shape might need some work, possibly slimed down, I forget fluttershys exact ear style right this minute.

 

I feel like her mane is a bit short, not totally sure though. There is also some parts where the mane has coloring stick out of the outline, if you want the messy look for her mane then I'd make sure you make the outline follow that shape so that nothing is outside an outline, so things look less awkward.

 

The mane has some sharp awkward curves in it that are kinda unnatural, try to be more rounded with it, don't make sharp curves really any with manes, and it doesn't even really need to be used even that much in ponies in general.

 

The mane outline is close to if not the right color, however the body and head outlines are brighter instead of darker, make those a darker color then her mane, more like the compared colors in the mane and mane outline.

 

You also forgot the eye highlights(the white portions in the pupils)unless you don't want it.

 

The neck is better, but it may start to far back or something? I'm not sure here I might wait to change that since I'm not sure, it's close but idk.

 

Overall good though! Your improving so don't worry! Keep up the good work! And look into some other drawings and show pony pictures for reference! Maybe look at some guides on deviantart or something to!

 

And take your time and do a great job! Keep improving and keep up the hard work!

[Strawberry Sunshine 17]

You did good and i agree with vinyl scratch  (filly) tm and keep that picture like that i still draw like you but yeah practice you will get there