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(Silver Star) I awoke with a surge of excitement. Wait,when are we meeting. Forget it, ill just go now. I grabbed some compimentary breakfast and my way out...

 

(Mr Critical) Iawoke with the usual feeling of dread. But more so today than usual. No idea why though. I went to the mail box and found my pay for my previous review. I made my way out and headed to town...

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@@Pelate,

 

"Well, whatever's nearest to the hotel!" Choco stated with a giggle. They then exited the hotel. "That's the flower shop. It's owned by a pony named Daisy, who's also friends with Roseluck and Lilly Valley. One thing to know about them is...they get freaked really easily." Choco stated.  

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As Pat walked out the door, placing his hat on his head, he thought, 'I'll go head over to the town square now and see if she's there now. It's a small town, so I guess it shouldn't be too hard to find her anyway.' and he began to make his way over there. 'I wonder were the grounds for the Hearts and Hooves Day Festival will be?' He wondered, while walking down the road looking at the many sights.


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(Silver Star) Wow, the festival is coming along nicely. I made my way to town square, passing all the atractions. Ill come back to those later...

 

(Mr Critical) This festival is... coming along nicely actually. Really bright colors. Chewing away my usual bitterness. Okay, where to first? How about... town square...

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  On 2013-12-13 at 3:23 AM, WildStar said:

Hmm, thought cade. I guess my charms dont work on all mares. he smiled, here was an interesting mare! however, he wasn't so sure she would be interested in him. still, interested in him or not, he was interested by her, so he decided to tag along. "id love to!" he said, sounding confident, but inside he was a little nervous. "so, Lightning Feather," he said curiously as they trotted along, "why haven't you ever been to pony ville before? I would think in your profession you would go many places." aw, man, that was the most boring thing i could possibly say. wait, calm down cade, its just a mare. yeesh.

Lightning Feather didn't look at him as she answered his question sternly. "I am second in command of a garrison on the border of Equestria. If my work were to ever bring me all the way to Ponyville it would mean I failed horrendously," she told him. "My CO sent me here because he said I needed to relax and 'socialize'," she added.

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"Ah here I am, the town square." He said to himself. He began to look around, when he noticed somepony familiar. Hmmm. AH! It was Silver's brother, What's-his-name. 'Dang it! I really should have asked his name.' He thought to himself. 'Well I might as well better aquaint myself with him' He then walks over to the stallion saying, "Hi! You're Silver's brother, right?"

 

@Mr. Critical


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  On 2013-12-14 at 7:06 PM, Half-Note said:

Lightning Feather didn't look at him as she answered his question sternly. "I am second in command of a garrison on the border of Equestria. If my work were to ever bring me all the way to Ponyville it would mean I failed horrendously," she told him. "My CO sent me here because he said I needed to relax and 'socialize'," she added.

yes, i was right! "well, it looks to me like you came to the right place." said cade as two lovers ran frolicking across their path. "looks pretty boring otherwise, you know, in the crime and criminal case. I came here to find that "small town, mass murder" routine. im a detective, kind of. problem is, i can only find enough things to detect to make for unnerving parlor conversations. still, i suppose i could have come here for the scenery."

he was silent for a little, then cade spoke. "do you have a problem when it comes to socalising? you dont seem to to me." he said politely.

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Ilooked to the stallion confronting me with a gaze of confusion

"yeah, can i help you?"

Idont really recognize him, but had a familiar face to him. Might as well see what he wants...

 

(Silver Star) I had arrived at town square and to my luck i found Pat(I forgot his fool name) talking with... DEMO REEL!?

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((OOC: "Fool name" HAHA ^_^ @Mr. Critical))

 

Pat closed the distance between them and replied, "I'm Patterson Rio Tacitus, we met yesterday, I went with Silver to check out places around Ponyville. Anyway I just wanted to meet you, your sister has told me a little about you. What is your name? I guess that is one of the things that your sister didn't tell me."

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(Mr. Critical) "Oh yeah, youre the stallion that went off with Silver Star..."

Just saying her name gives me a bitter taste in my mouth.

"... Well, my names Critical. Mr. Critical. And as for my sister, im suprised she even mentioned me.

 

(Silver Star) Itried to get close while remaining unseen. What were they talking about?

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C. CHALICE: chalice trotted into pony ville, wondering at all the color and happiness. "that wouldn't have been allowed at my school!" she said as she passed a tattoo shop. she looked around carefully, then went inside. when she came out, she had a small tattoo on her right foreleg, shaped like a small black heart with an arrow through it. it hurt a lot, but she was proud of herself. she was finnally out of school, and now maybe she could have some fun. she trotted into a small dance club and sat down on one of the couches awkwardly, then got up and started dancing.

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  On 2013-12-14 at 10:47 PM, Mr. Critical said:

 "Oh yeah, youre the stallion that went off with Silver Star..."

Just saying her name gives me a bitter taste in my mouth.

"... Well, my names Critical. Mr. Critical. And as for my sister, im suprised she even mentioned me.

 

'Ah! Finally, I know his name...sorta. Mr. Critical, interesting.' "Well, hello, Mr. Critical. Yeah, I kind of encouraged her on that part." Pat said in response. "So do you look forward to the Hearts and Hooves Day Festival?" He asked, trying to start some sort of conversation so that he could learn more about him. Though what he really wanted, was Mr. Critical's side of the story that Silver told him, but that was probably too personal, and possibly too emotionally painful for him.


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(Mr. Critical) Ha! Looking forward to the Hearts and Hooves day festal. How rich is that?

"A day celebrating the time with a close somepony isnt exactly my kind of day..."

I remembered to my first Hearts and Hooves day. Igot a pre-written suicie note. Baltimare fillies were dark.

"... But, its notexactly about me. Its about the."

I motion to the wandering couples in the area.

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  On 2013-12-14 at 11:42 PM, Mr. Critical said:

(Mr. Critical) Ha! Looking forward to the Hearts and Hooves day festal. How rich is that?

"A day celebrating the time with a close somepony isnt exactly my kind of day..."

I remembered to my first Hearts and Hooves day. Igot a pre-written suicie note. Baltimare fillies were dark.

"... But, its notexactly about me. Its about the."

I motion to the wandering couples in the area.

Pat looked around. He thought for a moment, and then asks, "If you were to have a very special somepony, do you think that you would feel differently?" 'Oh colt! I hope I don't upset him with that question.' He thought to himself while waiting in anticipation for Mr. Critical's answer.


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  On 2013-12-15 at 12:27 AM, Mr. Critical said:

(Mr. Critical) If i were to-... What in equestria is he up to?

"I have no idea. My out look is based on inexpieriance with the opposite gender. But, whats bothering me is, why so eager to know?"

 I looked to him with a cocked eyebrow as if saying 'Whats your game your playing?'

 

'Oh Dear! I've done it'  Pat thought, a little worried now. "I-I'm sorry I was just curious, I didn't mean to offend you. I, just, figured... I'll just go now." 'That's weird I don't often get into trouble while talking... I just thought I'd try to get to know Silver's brother.' Pat began to turn around feeling a little ashamed.


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(Mr Critical) "Now hold on aminute..."

he seemed saddened. Like i struck a nerve.

 

(Silver Star) Demo, if youve hurt him youre a dead pony. I remained hidden from the two. Still listening...

 

(Mr Critical) "I didnt mean any offense. Its just the curiosity. No pony really takes time out of there schedule to give me a second glance."

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  On 2013-12-15 at 4:02 AM, Mr. Critical said:

(Mr Critical) "Now hold on aminute..."

he seemed saddened. Like i struck a nerve.

"I didnt mean any offense. Its just the curiosity. No pony really takes time out of there schedule to give me a second glance."

Turning back around, in response to Mr. Critical, Patterson said, "I'ts just... *sigh* from what Silver has told me, you sound like, uh shall we say, an interesting character. And I wanted to learn more about you, but from your perspective, and not just her's." Pat sighed again, he didn't know exactly what else to say.


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  On 2013-12-14 at 12:39 AM, Thunder-Dash said:

@@Pelate,

 

"Well, whatever's nearest to the hotel!" Choco stated with a giggle. They then exited the hotel. "That's the flower shop. It's owned by a pony named Daisy, who's also friends with Roseluck and Lilly Valley. One thing to know about them is...they get freaked really easily." Choco stated.

He looked over at the small building he had already seen it on the way here*maybe I should go there later today* he thought, them looked to the left "um, hey!" He pointed at the market to the left of them "can we go that way?" He asked curious of what he could see there.
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(Mr Critical) Oh this is going to be one of those days, isnt it? Well lets get it over with.

"My story is not really... a happy one, to say the least. I have been abused physically, mentally, and emotionally for, Celestia knows how long..."

I look to the stallion.

"Look, you look like a nice stallion. But I think the less you know from my perspective, the better."

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  On 2013-12-15 at 6:04 AM, Mr. Critical said:

(Mr Critical) Oh this is going to be one of those days, isnt it? Well lets get it over with.

"My story is not really... a happy one, to say the least. I have been abused physically, mentally, and emotionally for, Celestia knows how long..."

I look to the stallion.

"Look, you look like a nice stallion. But I think the less you know from my perspective, the better."

 

"It's OK, I probably just asked too much of the wrong pony." 'Which doesn't happen often.' Pat thought, being usually a fairly quiet pony. 'Maybe he likes being alone.' "Well, If you ever, would maybe like somepony to just talk to, about anything at all, I'm uh, sure you can just find me, at least while I'm still in town. I...uh, I'll just let you be, if that's what you wish." 'I'm sure that this is getting just as awkward for both of us.' He figured


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  On 2013-12-15 at 4:23 PM, Mr. Critical said:

(Mr Critical) I gave pat a small nod of understanding, and was off to do... something.

 

(Silver Star) I saw my brother leave from Pat and came out of hiding. I casually made my way towards him.

"Hey, i finally found you. I got kinda worried sice we didnt set a time to meet."

 

Pat turned to look at her. "Oh, hi. I was just talking with your brother, but I am starting to wonder if maybe I shouldn't have. I thought that maybe he was just lonely, and that all he needed was a good friend. And maybe that really is what he needs, but he doesn't seem to want anything to do with it right now. He reminds me of this donkey who once visited my town. Everypony called him Cranky, not sure if that is his real name or if that was just what they dubbed him, but he was looking for something, and would have nothing to do with anypony. 


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(Silver Star) Oooh, yeah. Dem-uh, Critic isnt really a very trusting equine. He tends to keep to himself..."

 After what went down in Baltimare im suprised he even spoke to pat.

"He just needs time to warm up to ponies. Social interaction has always led to... bad things. But, enough of that. How are you?"

Itried to shake off the guilt and put on a smile.

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  On 2013-12-15 at 5:34 PM, Mr. Critical said:

(Silver Star) Oooh, yeah. Dem-uh, Critic isnt really a very trusting equine. He tends to keep to himself..."

 After what went down in Baltimare im suprised he even spoke to pat.

"He just needs time to warm up to ponies. Social interaction has always led to... bad things. But, enough of that. How are you?"

Itried to shake off the guilt and put on a smile.

"I-I'm fine," Pat answered. "I'm just always afraid of offending ponies or getting on their bad side. *sigh* I wish River were here. Suddenly I am in need of her warm smile." He sighed again, and turned to face Silver. "Anyway, where, uh,  would you like to try to go to next?" He asked, but he wasn't focused very well right now.


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