Maxey 13 March 3, 2012 Share March 3, 2012 Yeah I know Im jumping on the bandwaggon here but this song came to me and I had to write it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t7Qjn1v3iaA&feature=g-upl&context=G229ae7aAUAAAAAAABAA All in all Im quite proud of it. I also did a cover of Smile smile smile which is currently my fav pony song. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cGwH_9izfNE&feature=context&context=G229ae7aAUAAAAAAABAA This was so much fun to do. Id love to hear any feedback you can give me. Im a guitarist who is writing pony songs amongst other things http://ciaranmaxey.minus.com/ <----I will post all produced pony music here http://www.youtube.com/user/CiaranMaxey/videos <---All produced music+live covers and demos http://soundcloud.com/ciaranmaxey <---All music including the crappy stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jokuc 8,173 March 3, 2012 Share March 3, 2012 You are very good on the guitar! I really enjoyed the derpy song! Would be epic if you could find an experienced singer to do that one! I don't know if you want me to say what I think but I think you might need to improve your singing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxey 13 March 3, 2012 Author Share March 3, 2012 You are very good on the guitar! I really enjoyed the derpy song! Would be epic if you could find an experienced singer to do that one! I don't know if you want me to say what I think but I think you might need to improve your singing. Cheers bro.Yeah singing is a fairly recent thing for me but i am working on improveing it. But thanks for telling me what you think, i encourage constructive critisism. Im a guitarist who is writing pony songs amongst other things http://ciaranmaxey.minus.com/ <----I will post all produced pony music here http://www.youtube.com/user/CiaranMaxey/videos <---All produced music+live covers and demos http://soundcloud.com/ciaranmaxey <---All music including the crappy stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaborer 164 March 3, 2012 Share March 3, 2012 Your song for Derpy was good but the recording isn't optimal and your voice sounds a bit nervous/untrained. Apart from that it's definitely amongst the better songs by our community. The rhythm is also a bit off. About your cover: your singing is off on the rhythm, you don't pronounce all the words properly and you sometimes sing a bit out of tune. you should definitely practice but it isn't bad. Also you should try to avoid breathing into the microphone. - Wow! I feel kinda mean after writing all that but I hope you get that It's all constructive criticism and that none of it is meant in a mean way. I really think that it was generally good. Thanks to Proenix on deviantart for the vector in my avatar and signature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxey 13 March 3, 2012 Author Share March 3, 2012 Your song for Derpy was good but the recording isn't optimal and your voice sounds a bit nervous/untrained. Apart from that it's definitely amongst the better songs by our community. The rhythm is also a bit off. About your cover: your singing is off on the rhythm, you don't pronounce all the words properly and you sometimes sing a bit out of tune. you should definitely practice but it isn't bad. Also you should try to avoid breathing into the microphone. - Wow! I feel kinda mean after writing all that but I hope you get that It's all constructive criticism and that none of it is meant in a mean way. I really think that it was generally good. Cheers, these were mainly done as a bit of fun and I may do a proper recording of the derpy song later. I was having trouble with getting each song done in one take so that may explain why the singing was a bit rubbish. And yeah i didnt notice the breathing untill after I had packed everything away. But thanks, these are good things to keep in mind for future recordings. Im a guitarist who is writing pony songs amongst other things http://ciaranmaxey.minus.com/ <----I will post all produced pony music here http://www.youtube.com/user/CiaranMaxey/videos <---All produced music+live covers and demos http://soundcloud.com/ciaranmaxey <---All music including the crappy stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZomBrony 347 March 12, 2012 Share March 12, 2012 (edited) Derpy song actually makes me kind of sad, to think we've all said all that about her for so long I look forward to hearing sing Smile * mischievous hand folding*wow, you're actually doing a lot better then I thought, lolin fact, you're quite amazing, notes seem perfect, and I can actually imagine Pinkie singing when I'm listening to you, only thin is I see what Maxey was saying about breathing into mic. Edited March 12, 2012 by XxZomBloxxorxX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxey 13 March 12, 2012 Author Share March 12, 2012 Derpy song actually makes me kind of sad, to think we've all said all that about her for so long I look forward to hearing sing Smile * mischievous hand folding* wow, you're actually doing a lot better then I thought, lol in fact, you're quite amazing, notes seem perfect, and I can actually imagine Pinkie singing when I'm listening to you, only thin is I see what Maxey was saying about breathing into mic. Thankyou for the positive comments, it really means a lot. Im a guitarist who is writing pony songs amongst other things http://ciaranmaxey.minus.com/ <----I will post all produced pony music here http://www.youtube.com/user/CiaranMaxey/videos <---All produced music+live covers and demos http://soundcloud.com/ciaranmaxey <---All music including the crappy stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fghik 360 March 12, 2012 Share March 12, 2012 I really like your mane Awesome work! I really love your Derpy song. I'll have to go by what everypony else mentioned; but yeah, the recordings weren't perfect. But they definitely are worth a whole bunch of gold stars! Keep at it! Hope to hear more! But what do I know? I'm just a stupid kid. ҉ .Eternal ¸.•'´¯Chaos¯´'•.¸Comes¸.•'´¯With¯´'•.¸Chocolate¸.•'´¯Rain ҉ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406 March 12, 2012 Share March 12, 2012 The Derpy song was great. And I agree with you about the "Smile Song". That's my fav, too! Good cover. 1 I HAD TO FALL TO LOSE IT ALL BUT IN THE END IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER /WRISTS On 4/28/2013 at 8:13 PM, gooM said: Djenty...man you are crazy, but an awesome sort of crazy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZomBrony 347 March 13, 2012 Share March 13, 2012 The Derpy song was great. And I agree with you about the "Smile Song". That's my fav, too! Good cover. smile is definitely in my top faves, but I still say the CMC Theme Song is my fave do you think you could do a cover for the CMC Theme Song Maxey? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxey 13 March 13, 2012 Author Share March 13, 2012 smile is definitely in my top faves, but I still say the CMC Theme Song is my fave do you think you could do a cover for the CMC Theme Song Maxey? It just so happens that im currently planning a hard rock cover of the CMC theme so hopefully that will be done sometime next week . 1 Im a guitarist who is writing pony songs amongst other things http://ciaranmaxey.minus.com/ <----I will post all produced pony music here http://www.youtube.com/user/CiaranMaxey/videos <---All produced music+live covers and demos http://soundcloud.com/ciaranmaxey <---All music including the crappy stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpy Whooves 77 March 13, 2012 Share March 13, 2012 YOU ARE A CHAMPION MY FRIEND! seriously though you did really well i like your shirt by the way . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZomBrony 347 March 13, 2012 Share March 13, 2012 It just so happens that im currently planning a hard rock cover of the CMC theme so hopefully that will be done sometime next week . awesome, I look forward to that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maxey 13 March 13, 2012 Author Share March 13, 2012 YOU ARE A CHAMPION MY FRIEND! seriously though you did really well i like your shirt by the way . Its a shirt for the band Sam and the Womp who are a gypsy dubstep band (yes it is just as awesome as it sounds) . Im a guitarist who is writing pony songs amongst other things http://ciaranmaxey.minus.com/ <----I will post all produced pony music here http://www.youtube.com/user/CiaranMaxey/videos <---All produced music+live covers and demos http://soundcloud.com/ciaranmaxey <---All music including the crappy stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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