A song for Derpy + Smile smile smile cover

[Maxey 13]

Yeah I know Im jumping on the bandwaggon here but this song came to me and I had to write it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t7Qjn1v3iaA&feature=g-upl&context=G229ae7aAUAAAAAAABAA

All in all Im quite proud of it.

 

I also did a cover of Smile smile smile which is currently my fav pony song.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cGwH_9izfNE&feature=context&context=G229ae7aAUAAAAAAABAA

This was so much fun to do.

 

Id love to hear any feedback you can give me.

[Jokuc 8,172]

You are very good on the guitar! I really enjoyed the derpy song!

Would be epic if you could find an experienced singer to do that one!

I don't know if you want me to say what I think but I think you might need to improve your singing.

[Maxey 13]

You are very good on the guitar! I really enjoyed the derpy song!

Would be epic if you could find an experienced singer to do that one!

I don't know if you want me to say what I think but I think you might need to improve your singing.

 

Cheers bro.

Yeah singing is a fairly recent thing for me but i am working on improveing it.

But thanks for telling me what you think, i encourage constructive critisism.

[Kaborer 164]

Your song for Derpy was good but the recording isn't optimal and your voice sounds a bit nervous/untrained. Apart from that it's definitely amongst the better songs by our community. The rhythm is also a bit off.

 

About your cover: your singing is off on the rhythm, you don't pronounce all the words properly and you sometimes sing a bit out of tune. you should definitely practice but it isn't bad. Also you should try to avoid breathing into the microphone.

 

- Wow! I feel kinda mean after writing all that but I hope you get that It's all constructive criticism and that none of it is meant in a mean way. I really think that it was generally good.

[Maxey 13]

Your song for Derpy was good but the recording isn't optimal and your voice sounds a bit nervous/untrained. Apart from that it's definitely amongst the better songs by our community. The rhythm is also a bit off.

 

About your cover: your singing is off on the rhythm, you don't pronounce all the words properly and you sometimes sing a bit out of tune. you should definitely practice but it isn't bad. Also you should try to avoid breathing into the microphone.

 

- Wow! I feel kinda mean after writing all that but I hope you get that It's all constructive criticism and that none of it is meant in a mean way. I really think that it was generally good.

 

Cheers, these were mainly done as a bit of fun and I may do a proper recording of the derpy song later. I was having trouble with getting each song done in one take so that may explain why the singing was a bit rubbish. And yeah i didnt notice the breathing untill after I had packed everything away.

 

But thanks, these are good things to keep in mind for future recordings.

[ZomBrony 347]

Derpy song actually makes me kind of sad, to think we've all said all that about her for so long

I look forward to hearing sing Smile * mischievous hand folding*

wow, you're actually doing a lot better then I thought, lol

in fact, you're quite amazing, notes seem perfect, and I can actually imagine Pinkie singing when I'm listening to you, only thin is I see what Maxey was saying about breathing into mic.

Edited March 12, 2012 by XxZomBloxxorxX

[Maxey 13]

Derpy song actually makes me kind of sad, to think we've all said all that about her for so long

I look forward to hearing sing Smile * mischievous hand folding*

 

wow, you're actually doing a lot better then I thought, lol

 

in fact, you're quite amazing, notes seem perfect, and I can actually imagine Pinkie singing when I'm listening to you, only thin is I see what Maxey was saying about breathing into mic.

Thankyou for the positive comments, it really means a lot.

[Fghik 360]

I really like your mane

 

Awesome work! I really love your Derpy song. I'll have to go by what everypony else mentioned; but yeah, the recordings weren't perfect. But they definitely are worth a whole bunch of gold stars! Keep at it! Hope to hear more!

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

The Derpy song was great.

And I agree with you about the "Smile Song". That's my fav, too! Good cover.

[ZomBrony 347]

The Derpy song was great.

And I agree with you about the "Smile Song". That's my fav, too! Good cover.

 

smile is definitely in my top faves, but I still say the CMC Theme Song is my fave

 

do you think you could do a cover for the CMC Theme Song Maxey?

[Maxey 13]

smile is definitely in my top faves, but I still say the CMC Theme Song is my fave

 

do you think you could do a cover for the CMC Theme Song Maxey?

 

It just so happens that im currently planning a hard rock cover of the CMC theme so hopefully that will be done sometime next week .

[Derpy Whooves 77]

YOU ARE A CHAMPION MY FRIEND! seriously though you did really well i like your shirt by the way .

[ZomBrony 347]

It just so happens that im currently planning a hard rock cover of the CMC theme so hopefully that will be done sometime next week .

 

awesome, I look forward to that

[Maxey 13]

YOU ARE A CHAMPION MY FRIEND! seriously though you did really well i like your shirt by the way .

 

Its a shirt for the band Sam and the Womp who are a gypsy dubstep band (yes it is just as awesome as it sounds) .