slice of life Dusk.

[Its Rainbow Dash 151]

Well here is one of my short Fan Fics about Spikes' thoughts of Rarity.

 

I have another short fic about Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie called " Birthday Wishes." But let us see how this goes first.

 

 

                                                       Dusk.

 

 

 

The sky above was turning a Dark Orange color clouds wafted across high above lazily with no destination merely dancing across the sky to the music of nature.

 

Spike sat alone atop a large boulder that had rolled off a nearby hilltop and toppled down into the empty valley below.

 

Alone with his thoughts' he spent most of his time thinking about her., A sweet pony who spoke her mind and was never afraid to stand up for what was right.

 

 

Her long wavy mane always in an elegant wavy style shimmering in the sunlight., Dark blue hues that had a light within them that would shine for miles she was indeed special.

 

Though he noticed her she never took a second glance at him but how could he blame her for that?., He kept to himself most of the time silently watching her Graceful movements & enjoying the sound of her lovely voice.

 

Staring up to the orange-colored sky above he laid back on the large boulder to get a better view., He had always loved Dusk it was silent and calm much like himself.

 

Yet he thought some would stop with the Challenges' of their day and gaze upon the sky with wonder and that just maybe somewhere out there in the world somepony else watched it too feeling the same way.

 

He silently thought whether she watched the sunset at dusk as well finding its' beauty calming and enchanting., that perhaps maybe through the daily grind of the busy day she allowed her thoughts to fall to him.

 

Sighing he knew better than that she was his secret a distant thought in the back of his mind that echoed out always never leaving., His flash of light in an otherwise dark world.

 

The sun began to fall into the sky once more vanishing just as soon as it had come., Dusk was over the sky slowly became dark and silent stars' gently coming out to dance in the sky above.

 

And just like that the thoughts of her were gone for another day., She was his light she was everything he wished he could have.

 

A Beauty that was untold to most that showered the world in its' Heavenly Light day after day yet few would stop to appreciate it., While other's would notice it and find its magic entrancing.

 

A Beauty forced to be hidden and seen by few., A love to never be captured but only once a day shared.

 

Be it a passing smile in town , A simple caress of the hoof across the shoulder or the sharing of a laugh between an inside joke.

 

She was his haunting memory.

 

She was his Dusk.

[BassBrony 33]

That was a great read! it felt very unique because it read like a fan fiction but gave a bit of a poetic aspect as well. I like how you creatively set Spike's mood into the setting of the story. Also the literary descriptions like "shimmering in the sunlight" and "Dancing across the sky" i felt added to the setting well as opposed to just blandly naming a color.

[Its Rainbow Dash 151]

Thank you so much.

 

Yeah I like to add detail to the surroundings and character when I write., opposed to just focusing on Characters a little more work but flushes out the environment.