DashieHeart 63 February 20, 2014 Share February 20, 2014 (edited) These are my alicorn OCs Their names are in French, since I couldn't think of any interesting and original names, why not make them in a different language? So, here they are I will be redrawing them and improving on my drawing skills and such, and I will add the new drawings I make as I do them I encourage you to critique and give me suggestions, I would love to get some feedback that will help me improve Edited February 20, 2014 by DashieHeart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dedacct6 2,591 February 20, 2014 Share February 20, 2014 (edited) From the looks of it, it's pretty good. but like you said, the picture quality is pretty bad, so I can't really see it. Edited February 20, 2014 by Pelate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zhortac 1,474 February 20, 2014 Share February 20, 2014 Could try inking in the lines, or scanning it and loading it into a imaging program, and run a filter to darken the lines as well. Feel free to add me on steam if you want to play something. Also don't be afraid to message and talk to me. I've had bad luck when I start a conversation, so I more then likely won't start one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silverwisp the Bard 2,353 February 20, 2014 Share February 20, 2014 I would love if I could get some suggestions and critique since i am new at this and this is the first one ive done like this The linework is good, but the there are some hiccups in anatomy (the backside of the stallions neck, the shape of the mare's eye) and the pictures as a whole have a rather flat feel to them. My suggestion to you would be to practice pony anatomy (show style to begin with) to get a firm grasp on proportions and perspective: Ponies running, ponies flying, ponies lying down ect. My Art Thread, updated (almost) daily Tomorrow will take us away, far from home No one will ever know our names But the bard songs will remain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DashieHeart 63 February 20, 2014 Author Share February 20, 2014 The linework is good, but the there are some hiccups in anatomy (the backside of the stallions neck, the shape of the mare's eye) and the pictures as a whole have a rather flat feel to them. My suggestion to you would be to practice pony anatomy (show style to begin with) to get a firm grasp on proportions and perspective: Ponies running, ponies flying, ponies lying down ect. Yeah, thats what I have been working on almost all day I mean, like I said, I'm very new at this, so it will take me a little while to actually get some good drawings But, I will be practicing and -hopefully- improving on my skills 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yayayayayala 1,668 February 21, 2014 Share February 21, 2014 I like that mare, she's really pretty! Your style fits them nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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