Luna Violette and Lune Trace (Violet Moon and Moon Trace)

[DashieHeart 63]

These are my alicorn OCs

Their names are in French, since I couldn't think of any interesting and original names, why not make them in a different language? 

So, here they are

I will be redrawing them and improving on my drawing skills and such, and I will add the new drawings I make as I do them 

I encourage you to critique and give me suggestions, I would love to get some feedback that will help me improve 

 

 

Edited February 20, 2014 by DashieHeart

[dedacct6 2,591]

From the looks of it, it's pretty good. but like you said, the picture quality is pretty bad, so I can't really see it.

Edited February 20, 2014 by Pelate

[Zhortac 1,473]

Could try inking in the lines, or scanning it and loading it into a imaging program, and run a filter to darken the lines as well.

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

 

 

I would love if I could get some suggestions and critique since i am new at this and this is the first one ive done like this

The linework is good, but the there are some hiccups in anatomy (the backside of the stallions neck, the shape of the mare's eye) and the pictures as a whole have a rather flat feel to them.

My suggestion to you would be to practice pony anatomy (show style to begin with) to get a firm grasp on proportions and perspective: Ponies running, ponies flying, ponies lying down ect.

[DashieHeart 63]

The linework is good, but the there are some hiccups in anatomy (the backside of the stallions neck, the shape of the mare's eye) and the pictures as a whole have a rather flat feel to them.

My suggestion to you would be to practice pony anatomy (show style to begin with) to get a firm grasp on proportions and perspective: Ponies running, ponies flying, ponies lying down ect.

Yeah, thats what I have been working on almost all day 

I mean, like I said, I'm very new at this, so it will take me a little while to actually get some good drawings

But, I will be practicing and -hopefully- improving on my skills

[yayayayayala 1,668]

I like that mare, she's really pretty! Your style fits them nicely.