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crossover Ever After High/My Little Pony: Sweetly Ever After


Cerise Hood

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i]*•*Chapter 1: the Mirror*•*[/i]

"Delivery for Rarity," a skinny mailpony called.

"Oh, the mirrors have arrived!" Rarity cried. "After somepony so rudely broke them." She walked to the door, rudely glaring at the other resident of the house.

 

"Cutie Mark Crusader mane stylists?" Sweetie Belle commented weakly.

 

As innocent as it sounded, the project had ended with three dresses destroyed, one smashed window, four mirrors broken, all Crusaders grounded, and Rainbow Dash not being able to sit down for a week.

 

"Hmph." Rarity carried the package into her inspiration room, leaving an unthanked (and depressed) mailpony at the door.

 

@•@•@•@•@•@•@•@•@•@•@•

 

The bell rung.

 

"Coming!" Rarity opened the door, welcoming in a tan pony with pink and blue curls in.

 

"Welcome to Carousel Boutique, where every dress is..."

 

"Chic, unique, and whatever else pleases the stupid, stupid COSTUMERS!!!! ARRRGHHHH!!!" Sweetie Belle swung her forelegs around violently. "So...BORED! Why do I have to be grounded? It was Scootaloo's idea anyway! I didn't even participate! All I did was let them into our stupid home!"

 

Sweetie Belle stomped out of her room, sulking. If Rarity was occupied enough, Sweetie might be able to sneak a few minutes of Minecraft. Buttons might be on. Sweetie proceeded to creep towards the stairs.

 

"Wedding gown? So tell me what you're you looking for..."

 

Good. Wedding gowns took a while, so Sweetie could easily sneak on to the comput-

 

Something from Rarity's inspiration room was sparkling and shimmering. Bright gold.

 

Sweetie walked over to it, as if attracted to it magnetically.

 

She approached a mirror. The mirror, however, was different. Its frame was oval, and glittered golden, with a heart shaped gem on top, with was either red or purple, depending on how you looked at it. The mirror's glass was tinted gold, and Sweetie could barely see her reflection in it.

 

Dazed, Sweetie stuck her hoof out to touch it. It reacted by slurping her up.

 

*•*Chapter 2: Ever After High*•*

 

"Where... Am I?"

 

Sweetie Belle rubbed her head. Only... she didn't have her hoof anymore. Instead, it was one of those 'hands' Twilight and Lyra had talked about.

 

She had ended up in front of a sign, which said:

Ever After High

School of the Future Fairy Tales

Half a moment later, a bunch of students went in, saying something about 'Book-to-School'.

 

With no better plans, Sweetie decided to follow them.

 

Walking, on two legs, (as it was done) was harder than expected.

 

Sweetie stumbled like a bad quality doll into the school. By the time she managed to stumble into the building, everyone was in the building, except for one girl with a red hood who was leaving.

 

Sweetie just shrugged, and thought nothing of it. She continued to stumble until she reached the bathroom.

 

She could now see her reflection. Her mane and eyes had stayed the same colors, though her hairstyle was different. Her coat-or rather, skin had become a few shades darker. Her clothing consisted of a dress, with a white blouse and skirt, and a black overskirt on top. In her hair was a sparkly black bow, and her shoes were black high heels. That would explain the walking troubles.

 

As she tried to take off these strangely uncomfortable shoes-

 

Excuse me? I'm the narrator here! Go back to your own story!

 

But there's nothing to narrate!

 

He is right.

 

Just couldn't go without interrupting my lunch break, could you?

 

I'm sorry, but whose story is this?

 

You can't just barge into my story! We just did! Apple White is better than Raven Queen! This is my story! Raven shouldn't be evil! It's her destiny! Go argue somewhere else, this is MY story-

 

"Excuse me," Madeline Hatter interrupted. Since she is the daughter of the Mad Hatter, she has the strange (and creepy) ability to hear the narrators.

 

"I heard that!" said Maddie,who had spontaneously set up a tea party in the hallway.

 

Yes, sorry. Alright, Let's try that last part again.

 

Can we-

 

NO!

 

Aww...

 

@•@•@•@•@•@•@•@•@•@•@•

 

While Sweetie Belle tried to figure out how to get the shoe off, Maddie was heading towards the restroom as well.

 

"Hi there!" Maddie said cheerfully, skipping into the bathroom.

 

"Gah!" Sweetie jumped. "Oh, sorry, I didn't see you there!"

 

"Tea?" Maddie held a teacup in front of Sweetie.

 

"Um... Okay," In what sort of world do creatures offer each other tea to each other as a greeting? "My name is Sweetie Belle, and... I'm new here... Could you help me around?"

 

"Sure! I am Madeline Hatter, daughter of the Mad Hatter. Who's your fairytale parent, a castle's maid?"

 

"Um... Yeah." Sweetie decided to stick with that, since she knew what a maid was.

 

Maddie continued talking, pouring tea whenever Sweetie's cup was empty.

 

And that's how Sweetie's first tea party in a restroom with an extraterrestrial went.

 

(Please review!)

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Overall good, but i get very confused about the multiple narations that came out of nowhere, the colors helped i guess but still, i don't know who this people are or why are they arguing. Nor i care really.

 

Also she seems to be very calm about what just happened.

 

"I just entered a mirror and now im in a whole diferent body entering a school in two legs. Yeah, sure, i roll with it"

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Overall good, but i get very confused about the multiple narations that came out of nowhere, the colors helped i guess but still, i don't know who this people are or why are they arguing. Nor i care really.

 

Also she seems to be very calm about what just happened.

 

"I just entered a mirror and now im in a whole diferent body entering a school in two legs. Yeah, sure, i roll with it"

The multiple narrators might be hard to understand if you don't know what ever after high. So will some things, because that just how a crossover works.

 

Her choses are to be grounded or have the wrong number of legs. Also, the CMC do like adventure.

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The multiple narrators might be hard to understand if you don't know what ever after high. So will some things, because that just how a crossover works.

 

Eh... i guess, not knowing the sourse material i can't tell.

 

 

Her choses are to be grounded or have the wrong number of legs. Also, the CMC do like adventure.

 

I guess? But the thing is she didn't even flinch about what just happend. At all.

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Wow, the multiple narrators made me giggle. I should say, Good story so far. It could go for a bit more length, but that's just how I do mine. Anyways, good job. Keep it up. Kinda feels like EQG with Sweetie Belle instead. Also, nice concept.

I didn't just randomly pick Sweetie Belle. There's a background character that looks a lot like her. (Search: 'sweetie belle ever after high')

When I can, I'll post a short video that tells you a little about the characters.

 

VIDEO:

 

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