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A tale ofsyfy and of ponies on a journey through a dimension full of chaos and insanity,and their fight for survival. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I can't think of anymore to addddddddddddddd contains action romance Survival syfy and of course ponies im terrible at this ok


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(OOC: Okay, this is how it works. You will roleplay in the 3rd person point of view. Roleplays are basically stories driven by the players themselves. They can even have plot twists. But we'll keep it straight forward. This is how it's done.)

 

Thunder Dash was flying high above Equestria doing his daily patrol. After, he landed in Ponyville for a snack. He stopped by the cafe and had a burger to eat. 

 

(OOC: Now, have your OC come and meet Thunder. Alternatively, have her roaming around close to where Thunder Dash is.)

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Chaotic flier wakes up in ponyville,after looking around a bit. chaotic flier notices she's hungry so chaotic flier steps into the cafe to ask for a muffin and some tea.she then sits down to eat at a table nearby thunder dash.

(Ooc: how's that.I think I did pretty hood.)


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(OOC: It's good, but, you need to change tenses from present to past. Also, you don't have to start every sentence with your OCs name.)

 

Thunder Dash noticed a mare come and sit close to him. He then gathered some electricity and disappeared. He reappeared in the seat across from the mare with a poof. "Hi there. The names Thunder Dash." Thunder stated as he continued to eat his burger.  

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shocked by the sudden appearance of a colt right across from her. Chaotic fell backward with a small squeak. She then noticed the colt introduced himself as thunder dash. "my name is Chaotic Flier" answered chaotic "and who are you?" her hair starts to change colors.

(OOC. just in case your wondering her hair changes color depending on her emotions)

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(OOC: So terribly sorry for not replying. I'm just so used to people metioning and quoting my posts. Hope you understand, and a little tip: To mention me, simply highlight any piece of text in any posts I make. You'll then see two options. Click on "mention".)

 

"Well...I just said my name, Thunder Dash. I'm from Cloudsdale, a storm wrangler at the weather factory, and the patroller around these parts." Thunder stated. 

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(OOC: So terribly sorry for not replying. I'm just so used to people metioning and quoting my posts. Hope you understand, and a little tip: To mention me, simply highlight any piece of text in any posts I make. You'll then see two options. Click on "mention".)

 

"Well...I just said my name, Thunder Dash. I'm from Cloudsdale, a storm wrangler at the weather factory, and the patroller around these parts." Thunder stated. 

(its okay ive been wondering why you havent replied well i know now also thanks for the tip)

 

 

  " well nice to meet ya im new here and i dont have a job yet" chaotic said in very sad tone.she then stared into space in deep thought."where am i from....hmmm" mumbled chaotic.


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"Well...there are plenty of jobs here. You can work with me up in the weather factory. It's fun to work up there, especially when you're a storm wrangler." Thunder stated. "And since you don't have any place to go...you can stay with me at my place." Thunder stated with a smile.   

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"OH REALLY! oh thankyou thank you. hm hm i mean thanks that would be nice."Chaotic said with a smile.[hair becomes bright blue] chaotic then asked" is there a ruler or someone whose in charge?"

 

 

( sorry if i am confusing you lightning my oc is so comlicated to find the right mind set for her)

 

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"Well...there are plenty of jobs here. You can work with me up in the weather factory. It's fun to work up there, especially when you're a storm wrangler." Thunder stated. "And since you don't have any place to go...you can stay with me at my place." Thunder stated with a smile.   


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"I can take you to Princess Celestia. She is a very nice pony. She also raises the sun. And don't forget about Princess Luna. She raises the moon at night. They rule over Equestria and make sure everything is in perfect harmony. We can go see them after you get settled. Does that sound good?" Thunder asked.  

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"that sounds like a plan they seem like amazing ponies to ooooooo i just cant wait to meet them! soooo where do you live?!" Chaotic exclaimed in excitement.took a bite out of her muffin and sipped her tea."is it here in ponyville?" guessed Chaotic whose eyes sparkled with excitement.

 

 

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"I can take you to Princess Celestia. She is a very nice pony. She also raises the sun. And don't forget about Princess Luna. She raises the moon at night. They rule over Equestria and make sure everything is in perfect harmony. We can go see them after you get settled. Does that sound good?" Thunder asked.  


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"We would have to fly up to Canterlot. It's not that far, unless you want to take a more scenic and slower method. The train is another way, which ever one you choose." Thunder stated as he gathered some electricity and made a cupcake appear from the blue. He then started to munch on it. 

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"i would love to fly there with you." chaotic answered happily.

was about take another bite of her muffin when a grey streak blew past and swipped her muffin.

"what was that?"said the confused Chaotic flier.

(Bet you know what stole her muffin dont ya Lightning

 

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"We would have to fly up to Canterlot. It's not that far, unless you want to take a more scenic and slower method. The train is another way, which ever one you choose." Thunder stated as he gathered some electricity and made a cupcake appear from the blue. He then started to munch on it. 

 

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"I don't know but it's something." Thunder stated as he gathered some electricity and made the same muffin reappear from the blue. "There you go." Thunder stated as he continued to munch on his cupcake. He then spread his wings after he finished. "So...ready to go?" Thunder asked.  

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"yeah sure lets go lightning dash onward to Canterlot." Chaotic Flier said with enthusiasm. "time to go see your house lightning dash"

(by the way derpy/ditzy doo was the grey blur that stole chaotic flier's muffin.) she then spread her wings and leapt into the sky.


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"It's Thunder Dash." Thunder stated as he spread his wings and took to the skies. Thunder made sure that Chaotic was behind him. He flew at a slower pace than usual. 

 

(OOC: I'm gonna be RPing as Celestia and Luna and other supporting characters that don't include the villan.) 

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" oh ooopsy sorry wrong name he he" Chaotic said." so thunder dash how big is your house?" Chaotic started to fly faster."by the way how did you just appear out of nowhere when i met you"

 

(okay sounds like a plan.but there is one character i have to rp as and its chaotic's friend dramatic effect who lives in the dimension of insanity)

 

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"It's Thunder Dash." Thunder stated as he spread his wings and took to the skies. Thunder made sure that Chaotic was behind him. He flew at a slower pace than usual. 

 

(OOC: I'm gonna be RPing as Celestia and Luna and other supporting characters that don't include the villan.) 


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(Okay.)

 

"My house is pretty big. It's in the city called Cloudsdale, a city here up in the sky." Thunder stated. "Oh, and that thing I did, that's just one part of my amazing ability. I can wield electricity and convert it into magic." Thunder stated. He then gathered some electricity and disappeared. He then reappeared with a poof while still flying. "See?" Thunder asked.  

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"well thats cool i bet it comes in handy."said an impressed Chaotic" i wish my powers were like that."

(yes Chaotic Flier had powers but their linked to her necklace the Chaos pendant.) she starts to slow down.hm "when do we get there" chaotic asked impatiently.

 

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(Okay.)

 

"My house is pretty big. It's in the city called Cloudsdale, a city here up in the sky." Thunder stated. "Oh, and that thing I did, that's just one part of my amazing ability. I can wield electricity and convert it into magic." Thunder stated. He then gathered some electricity and disappeared. He then reappeared with a poof while still flying. "See?" Thunder asked.  


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"Almost there. See that castle up ahead? That's where Princess Celestia is. It's the middle of the day so she isn't really that busy." Thunder stated as he began to descend. "So...where is this necklace and what kind of power does it give you?" Thunder asked curiously.  

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"Oh its around my neck silly.it gives me the power to teleport just like you but i have no controll of it.it also gives me telekinesis which is saddly something i cant controll.and acording to legend it is said to hold the power to controll time.but that only happens when the fear charm is around."

 

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"Almost there. See that castle up ahead? That's where Princess Celestia is. It's the middle of the day so she isn't really that busy." Thunder stated as he began to descend. "So...where is this necklace and what kind of power does it give you?" Thunder asked curiously.  

 

 

(sorry if it sounds like i op my character.there is a negative side effect)


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"Hmmm....maybe...I can help you unlock your true potential!" Thunder stated as he landed right in front of the castle. The guards noticed Thunder and opened the door. There, Princess Celestia was sitting right on her throne. "Why hello there Thunder Dash! And who is that pony you have with you?" She asked. "This is Chaotic Flier." Thunder stated.

 

(OOC: Now that we're at Celestia's castle, she'll give us the info on the dimension, which is where the adventure will officially begin.) 

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" um hi there." Chaotic said to princess Celestia with a bow." It is an honor to finally meet you thunder dash said you and your sister princess Luna rule Equestria together.which is pretty amazing."

(oh i so excited to start the adventure.by the way the negative effects of the chaos pendant is a multipersonality disorder

 

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"Hmmm....maybe...I can help you unlock your true potential!" Thunder stated as he landed right in front of the castle. The guards noticed Thunder and opened the door. There, Princess Celestia was sitting right on her throne. "Why hello there Thunder Dash! And who is that pony you have with you?" She asked. "This is Chaotic Flier." Thunder stated.

 

(OOC: Now that we're at Celestia's castle, she'll give us the info on the dimension, which is where the adventure will officially begin.) 


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(OOC: Ooh, that could make for some great plot twists. But you gotta execute those right.)

 

"Nice you meet you too...oh! Perfect timing! A new dimension has just been discovered! And I'm going to send you too to explore it..." Celestia said. "Sister, couldn't you send somepony else with them in case?" Luna asked. "Oh I'm sure they will be alright. Thunder is a great pony and these two will protect each other." Celestia stated.  

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"ooooh sounds like fun maybe ill make a new friend in this new dimension yay"Chaotic said."im always up for a good adveture too."chaotics wings start to stick up from all the intense excitement about the idea of going on an adventure into anothef dimension.

 

 

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(OOC: Ooh, that could make for some great plot twists. But you gotta execute those right.)

 

"Nice you meet you too...oh! Perfect timing! A new dimension has just been discovered! And I'm going to send you too to explore it..." Celestia said. "Sister, couldn't you send somepony else with them in case?" Luna asked. "Oh I'm sure they will be alright. Thunder is a great pony and these two will protect each other." Celestia stated.  


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