KBz 498 April 19, 2014 Share April 19, 2014 (edited) Hey you guys. I'm happy for a good trade for this song I made you! Tell me what you think!! BPM: 140 Genre: Uplifting Trance Time Spent: 8 hours Edited April 22, 2014 by Anisakis185 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow-Crash 101 April 29, 2014 Share April 29, 2014 You should set a stall up next year and trade your songs becuase that was awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shred Guitar Brony 85 April 29, 2014 Share April 29, 2014 I loved this song man, it has a great melody! Trance isn't something I generally listen too, but I still really enjoyed this. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Courageous Thunder Dash 7,809 April 29, 2014 Share April 29, 2014 It's an....okay listen. The one thing that I complain about when it comes to electronic music is the lack of variance. You had the same cadence going on through the entire piece. I really didn't catch a melody in there, it was more like a beat rather than an actual song. You could've done something with the piano, like at the padded sections of the piece, where there was no percussion, you could've added arrpegiated lines sweeping through a filter. Alternatively, you could've had a synth bass making licks after every 3 bars in that section. There's so much more you could've done with this piece. When you brought the percussion back in, you could've brightened it up with some high-hats on double-time and some cool sweeping synths. All in all, I feel that this piece could've had more into it. It just felt like the parts were copied and pasted. Please don't take offense in this review. I am a musician of 15 years experience. PM me if you have any further questions. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KBz 498 May 9, 2014 Author Share May 9, 2014 It's an....okay listen. The one thing that I complain about when it comes to electronic music is the lack of variance. You had the same cadence going on through the entire piece. I really didn't catch a melody in there, it was more like a beat rather than an actual song. You could've done something with the piano, like at the padded sections of the piece, where there was no percussion, you could've added arrpegiated lines sweeping through a filter. Alternatively, you could've had a synth bass making licks after every 3 bars in that section. There's so much more you could've done with this piece. When you brought the percussion back in, you could've brightened it up with some high-hats on double-time and some cool sweeping synths. All in all, I feel that this piece could've had more into it. It just felt like the parts were copied and pasted. Please don't take offense in this review. I am a musician of 15 years experience. PM me if you have any further questions. 3/10 I unfortunately have to say ouch to this opinionated review. I really understand the truth kinda hurts though, I'm still learning about this stuff so there are stuff out there that I never tried.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Courageous Thunder Dash 7,809 May 10, 2014 Share May 10, 2014 @, Yeah. I see what you're saying. But you sometimes gotta face the truth, because after all, we all want to strive to become better at our craft right? I can help you if you need it. PM me if you want to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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