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yes, I think it looks much better now and encase you want something the compare the proportions to a bit I have a few drawings i did a while ago here.

Well since you asked... The most prominent problem that I see is that while twilight appears to be at a 3/4 view her snout is drawn like it is at a side view, also her one eye seems to be a bit to low. Other than that I think it's pretty good and if you would like any help or advice with anatomical correctness I would be happy to give any assistance I can.

I could do fine without a Cellphone but without the internet... I think I would actually go through withdrawal

Looking about the station Onyx approached a young women who appeared to be looking around for someone. "Excuse me miss do you know ow to get to the local guild from here?" Being in a conversation Onyx did not notice Ahiko when he got off the train and began running after Kenji and Glitter.

As the train came to a stop Onyx closed the book he had been reading and neatly tucked it in his bag, Glitter had already exiting the train car by the time he stood up. making his way out of the train he noticed that Glitter had already been lost to the crowd of people moving in and out of the station. Waiting for the others to exit the train behind him he turned and addressed them. "It seems Glitter has gone off on her own. I shall be going to talk with the local guild for information before heading to the park to survey the area, if any of you wish to join me you are welcome to do so."

Onyx watched as the train pulled up, Glitter and Tabris were the first two on-board with him in third. Deciding it was better for them to stay in the same area in-case someone thought up an idea, heading into the same car as the other two he sat down one row behind glitter and on the opposite side of the car. Over-hearing what Tabris had said to Glitter, Onyx Watched as Tabris moved to a seat near the rear end of the car. Turning back to Glitter, Onyx spoke up. "While it doesn't seem like you two mix very well I would like to point out that you are not the only one with an elemental advantage here, fire does not move against the wind. I realize it is not my place to tell you who to get along with and I am not telling you you should try to get along with him, but giving how dangerous this mission is and Because the odds are high you will be fighting beside him I think it would be best to try and find the reason he is in Phoenix Wing, after all each of us must have had a reason as to why we were accepted into the guild in the first place." leaning back into his seat Onyx took out one of his books about magic and proceeded to flip it open and begin reading its contents a small smile forming on his lips.

chewing on the gummy that Glitter had offered him Onyx replied to her question. "I have been thinking this guy is terrorizing a town so to go up to him and start an all out fight could end up with a lot of collateral damage. the surrounding property and anyone still in the town would be put at risk. So I think I could set up a trap around the perimeter of the towns park or square then we could lead him into it and the fight would be contained inside, letting us be a bit more liberal about how much power we are using to fight."

Inwardly sighing at the instant hostility that formed between Glitter and Ishu. He began to listen intently to the masters explanation, wincing slightly when he said that they had been chosen at random. "it feels like this whole mission has trouble written all over it." he thought once Master had finished giving them a summery of the job that they were being sent off to do. Exiting the library he began to make his way towards his home to pack some light provisions before going to the train station to meet up with the others.

Onyx nodded at Ahiku and pulled out his own magic pen. "I use letter magic so if you need a trap, prison, or even a shield I'm your guy." Stowing his pen in the pocket of his dull gray jacket he followed Ahiku as he approached the master for information about this S-class job and more importantly he wanted to know why he was picked to be one of the ones going.