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yes, I think it looks much better now and encase you want something the compare the proportions to a bit I have a few drawings i did a while ago here.

Well since you asked... The most prominent problem that I see is that while twilight appears to be at a 3/4 view her snout is drawn like it is at a side view, also her one eye seems to be a bit to low. Other than that I think it's pretty good and if you would like any help or advice with anatomical correctness I would be happy to give any assistance I can.

I could do fine without a Cellphone but without the internet... I think I would actually go through withdrawal

Looking about the station Onyx approached a young women who appeared to be looking around for someone. "Excuse me miss do you know ow to get to the local guild from here?" Being in a conversation Onyx did not notice Ahiko when he got off the train and began running after Kenji and Glitter.

As the train came to a stop Onyx closed the book he had been reading and neatly tucked it in his bag, Glitter had already exiting the train car by the time he stood up. making his way out of the train he noticed that Glitter had already been lost to the crowd of people moving in and out of the station. Waiting for the others to exit the train behind him he turned and addressed them. "It seems Glitter has gone off on her own. I shall be going to talk with the local guild for information before heading to the park to survey the area, if any of you wish to join me you are welcome to do so."

Onyx watched as the train pulled up, Glitter and Tabris were the first two on-board with him in third. Deciding it was better for them to stay in the same area in-case someone thought up an idea, heading into the same car as the other two he sat down one row behind glitter and on the opposite side of the car. Over-hearing what Tabris had said to Glitter, Onyx Watched as Tabris moved to a seat near the rear end of the car. Turning back to Glitter, Onyx spoke up. "While it doesn't seem like you two mix very well I would like to point out that you are not the only one with an elemental advantage here, fire does not move against the wind. I realize it is not my place to tell you who to get along with and I am not telling you you should try to get along with him, but giving how dangerous this mission is and Because the odds are high you will be fighting beside him I think it would be best to try and find the reason he is in Phoenix Wing, after all each of us must have had a reason as to why we were accepted into the guild in the first place." leaning back into his seat Onyx took out one of his books about magic and proceeded to flip it open and begin reading its contents a small smile forming on his lips.

chewing on the gummy that Glitter had offered him Onyx replied to her question. "I have been thinking this guy is terrorizing a town so to go up to him and start an all out fight could end up with a lot of collateral damage. the surrounding property and anyone still in the town would be put at risk. So I think I could set up a trap around the perimeter of the towns park or square then we could lead him into it and the fight would be contained inside, letting us be a bit more liberal about how much power we are using to fight."

Inwardly sighing at the instant hostility that formed between Glitter and Ishu. He began to listen intently to the masters explanation, wincing slightly when he said that they had been chosen at random. "it feels like this whole mission has trouble written all over it." he thought once Master had finished giving them a summery of the job that they were being sent off to do. Exiting the library he began to make his way towards his home to pack some light provisions before going to the train station to meet up with the others.

Onyx nodded at Ahiku and pulled out his own magic pen. "I use letter magic so if you need a trap, prison, or even a shield I'm your guy." Stowing his pen in the pocket of his dull gray jacket he followed Ahiku as he approached the master for information about this S-class job and more importantly he wanted to know why he was picked to be one of the ones going.

A look of shock appeared on Onyx Palecaller's when his name was called. His mind began to race. "Why would the master pick me to be in this group? their are plenty of other wizards who would be suited much better..." before quickly shaking his to try and dispel his doubts. "If he truly believes that I am a fit for this job then I should trust his judgement." Standing up with a new look of determination across his face Onyx quickly made his way to meet his team for this mission. as he entered the library he noticed he was the fourth one to arrive, Glitter and two others he hadn't been introduced to before were already talking inside. He swiftly approached the group to introduce himself. he smiled. "Hello my name is Onyx Palecaller. I assume you are some of the members I will be working with?"

Love doctor who, the first Episode I ever saw was Blink and that episode forever made me a David Tennant fan.

Well I don't usually enter things like this but why the heck not I have a PS3 so sign me up! Edit* I just got my ps4 back so if you want you can enter me in either of the drawings

Alright here it goes I finally worked up the courage to show some of my fan art for the first time Unfortunately my scanner stopped working after the first image was scanned onto my computer so the other one I had to take a picture of. both are OC's that I drew for some friends of mine, it was fun to find use for that old box of crayons I had laying around.

I don't know whether to react like this: or this:

I have minecraft for the pc and wouldn't mind playing, but I don't usually do live chats on skype (Mostly because the only mic I have makes a ton of exess static wich is really annoying to everyone)

Ok first I am going to admit these all pretty good and the only things I could spot were minor things that only bug me because I am nit picky about proportions when I draw ponies. now usually I don't get very harsh when I give my opinion on fan art but I also know how annoying it can be when everyone keeps saying "It looks great" when you asked so that you can improve your art and as a heads up I always avoid the word perfect because their will always be room to improve upon, so here it goes. Rainbow dash: this one seems just fine in most aspects the only flaw that I find apparent is how her stomach gets so thin past her rib cage it makes her look malnourished. AppleJack: the legs that are bent they seem to be to thin near the bottom they need to gradually get thicker as you get closer the the bottom of the leg. Fluttershy: I can find no real fault here that I can point out . Rarity: Neck is a bit two long otherwise it is really good. Twilight: really good no apparent faults here. Pinkie pie: again no outstanding faults. Celestia: while the solar monarch does have long slender legs you may have over exaggerated that trait a bit here. Luna: nothing huge but the legs should again get a little thicker towards the bottom of a leg. and for that last one I think it's great the way it is. overall I think you have done a wonderful job especially if this is your first time showing off your work keep it up and practice a bit with a ponies proportions.