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An awful poem I wrote about teenage couples

Le Kvlt Dawn

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Well I haven't writen anything in months, so here I go.

 

There he stands, like he's all game

Here she comes, that mindless dame

Falling for his tricks yet again

She hasn't learned from the other "men"

Together and blessed with a curse

I hope you both end up in a hearse

She deserves to be hanged

He deserves to be hanged

Now you can both hang together forever

But you ignorance won't end ever

Because seeing the both you decaying and lifeless

Is the only way I can smile and not feel any hatefulness

 

Eeyup that's about it for now.

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Fanned

So basically they both deserve to die for being a couple in that.

And then you smile because you're twisted or something. Dafuq

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King

Its a poem. Lots of poems are depressing works, designed to express inner feelings in a projected level, usually exaggerated...buut yeah.

Personally I think this was well written, despite its nature

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Yes-Man

You should show this to the people in middle-school, "relationships."

But anyway,

Great poem, 10/10.

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Acoustic Cloud

You summed up every kid at my High School.  Them and their petty relationships.  One day they'll figure out what love truly is, and look back ashamed they couldn't figure it out sooner.

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