Lektra Bolt

http://mlpforums.com/topic/119002-anypony-going-to-ponycon-nyc-on-feb-141516/

I made a thread about this, in the right section. And yup I'm going.

You can practice on my character. I always appreciate more art. She's in my signature. Might be a challenge. Do note she's not an Alicorn.

How's mine doing? Taking longer cause she's complicated?

I'd be grateful even for an attempt.

Thank you Dex for the wonderful feedback. It was exactly the right questions I was looking for.

*jumps out a window* I'm ok!

Speaking of which, I've done some edits to Lektra with help from Dextrous. He pointed out some issues.

I'll include that she was seeking solitude if I can fit it. Not sure if I can include it and still maintain the flow of the backstory.

Thank you for the advice in case I need to drop Sparky for EQE. I will keep that in mind.

Anything else you can think of while I go edit?

Well yea, but like if I was forced to not have Sparky in her profile for EQE how would a workaholic character like this get along without him? Should I include he takes care of her, or it's assumed?

I like how you she's a solitary individual, but I don't really wanna sound redundant.

The deaf can usually learn to speak, they just can't hear. The problem would be talking to the deaf, since ponies can't sign with hooves.

Let's see who else joins.

Oh that. Yea I'm not going with her trying to find work until she gets on the road and starts patenting.

As for the magic robot, well worst case scenario I'll just have to settle for not using him in the EQE version. It would mean that she would be very disheveled, tired all the time, smelly, thin, and always needing water. Sparky cleans up after her, reminds her to do the basic life stuff, and cooks food while she's working. Lektra will work herself to death without an assistant. What do you suggest? Also where do you think I should include this information, if I should at all?

I swear I'm not trying to hog all the advice. You're being really helpful and I appreciate it. This is the kind of feedback I'm looking for, so I can improve her.

The only thing that bothers me about this is there will be no game registration bonuses for a while until they get their new program up and running. I have about 200 coins. Time to start thinking what I'll get with them.

Thanks! And please call me Bron.

Her first name is derived from the word Electric and is a rearranging with some letters removed entirely. Does that help?

How about Lektra Bolt? The first name isn't a standard word in English.

Most? What's missing? Please elaborate and I'll fix that up too.

Actually she never had coworkers to begin with. She's always been a one mare thing.

Are the weaknesses explained well enough?

Going to wait to post again. Some people haven't posted once yet.

Got home and updated her, mirroring to EQE while I can. I figured people could infer weaknesses, but I put them in now. It was a bit hard to make her leaving home make sense, and that part feels a bit fudged to me.

What do you think now Dex?

Elder Scrolls. My friend can't stop talking about it and he constantly RPs it on Facebook. Not only does it bore me cause I don't know enough about it, but there seem to be all these things they throw in that by the sound of it I'd totally miss and not care. Meanwhile a "true"  fan of it should foam at the mouth.

Sigh. I tried to like it, but I just couldn't be bothered to play all the games and look at the same tapestry for an hour to see the fan call out.

I definitely do not want people to think she's overpowered or close just cause I don't list her weaknesses.

I'll work on that. Thank you Dex.

Thanks for mentioning about reasons to leave. That's a good reason and I'll add that in.

As for her magic, I expect people to ask about weaknesses but perhaps I should include them? The main weakness us she gets tired and can't just jkeep using her powers. Should I include this you think?

The robot is purely mechanical with magic for artificial intelligence and transforming is also magic. Maybe I should explain it better?

Why not. Maybe getting another opinion will help me pass the time waiting for the Equestrian Empire mods to get back to me on that version. The character is designed from the ground up with combat in mind, not just social stuff. Take that into consideration please.

Google Store and Apple Store have them legitimately as far as I know. Also streaming services might, but I heard Netflix is taking it down. Pick your poison.

It's definitely not our world. I don't agree with people calling the inhabitants humans. I call them humanized ponies, or humonies. They have skin like their pony counterparts and yes, they're a bit too accepting of magic, something that isn't supposed to exist there. 

I just edited my request slightly. Hope it's not too late.

I think Marble meant melting himself, as in once he does it he dies.

The ability to run at the speed of sound........backwards. You can't see where you're going very well so this power is almost useless.