Guirdann

I know I just failed to notice I was in the wrong section

I failed so I will just type this this

hi, I'would like to join here is my OC Name: Gold Star Tuner Link: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/gold-star-tuner-r9034 Professor in magical artifact and or mythology Even tho my character sheet is not totally optimized, I've finished the development of this OC. so please give it a thought. And as a disclaimer my native language is not English

Thanks for the critique, I actualy saw those problems before but I did not realised that they were there. I will try to fix them later. I made some quick changes but I don't really know what to do about the tail if not redraw it completely and that do not really suit me that well.

OK, first I'm trying to learn to draw and i have no significant experience in it. second i spend 2 weeks and too much frustration on this one to be able to get to this point. i can proudly say that this is my greatest art I've ever done. And while i seek to improve, I still have some pride with this drawing. So I will politely take every constructive criticism with a smile and a burning rage like thousand sun within me? thanks greatly for your contribution.

@@Shift, I'm sorry I'm not realy active I have a lot of work and the little time I have to myself I spend it sleeping or closing the genetic gap between me and porridge. I'm going to try to be more active but the quality of my posts and my creativity might decrease. I really love this Rp and I don't want it to die... Sniff.. Sorry again. And it seem that I'm an idiot too I have edited my old post instead of quoting it. if you have any record of it, can please someone send it to me?

@@Shift, @@Reaver, Gold took a look at the icy fish-tank before him a glint of sadness in his eyes. He then shrugged and throw the frozen ball to the ground. The aquarium shattered in million pieces and disappeared in a cloud of smoke. "Well I can't be hurt by those curses and have a very good control over them. I have a lot off theories about that by the way. But you are right I guess having twentyish people in your mind can still affect you mental sanity" Gold said while opening his bag. The could off smoke standed still for a second before rushing inside the bag." Let's meet our guildmates, you seem like an interesting bunch" Gold began to walk toward them difficulty when he noticed Equinox worried look he tried to reassure her " Don't worry about me I'll be fine, Caramel parcontre seem a bit out, I think she took to many magical hit. She seem to have forget that it's really easy to die in a game and on this one it can really be problematic"

@@Shift, @@Reaver, Gold took a look at the icy fish-tank before him a glint of sadness in his eyes. He then shrugged and throw the frozen ball to the ground. The aquarium shattered in million pieces and disappeared in a cloud of smoke. "Well I can't be hurt by those curses and have a very good control over them. I have a lot off theories about that by the way. But you are right I guess having twentyish people in your mind can still affect you mental sanity" Gold said while opening his bag. The could off smoke standed still for a second before rushing inside the bag." Let's meet our guildmates, you seem like an interesting bunch" Gold began to walk toward them difficulty when he noticed Equinox worried look he tried to reassure her " Don't worry about me I'll be fine, Caramel parcontre seem a bit out, I think she took to many magical hit. She seem to have forget that it's really easy to die in a game and on this one it can really be problematic"

@@Shift, @@Reaver Gold was pale, practically white. Fury could be seen burning in his now red eyes. He slowly began to walk toward them. -I want to eat them, to feast on their body- His coat instantly went back to his normal brownish color and his face wore a totally shocked expression. Apparently revolted off his thoughts, he exclaimed:"NO! NO! NO! HOW CAN I THINK LIKE THAT! THAT'S NOT NORMAL!" His fur slowly taint it self of a sickly tone and his stare bloodied again as he whisper through the enchantment on his voice: "LOOK AT THEM...", he breezed heavily, "...CAN'T YOU SEE THOSE MEATY BODY... THESE FLESHY FORM... AND JUICY FLAN..." G.S cuts himself and gain normal appearance again. "I HAVE VALUES MISTER! I MAY NOT ENTIRELY RESPECT THE FRENCH KNIGHTHOOD CODE! BUT I WILL NOT DISHONOR THOSE DEMOISELLE BY THESE LUSTFUL WORD AND LOOKS" Gold mane pale again and a dumbfounded expression form itself on his face. "... ERR... ERR... I WANTED TO SAVAGELY "KILL" THEM AND... ERR.. "TEAR" THEIR FLESH APART AND "EAT" THEM TO ONLY LET BONES TO THEIR FAMILY" "OHH YOU ARE THE WENDIGO SPIRIT AREN'T YOU?" " YES... AND NOW YOU WILL FEEL MY HUNG..." "GOOD For you!! great, my voice. Now if you please, I have other mater to attend to. The others will give you a tour" Now a perfectly normal Golden Star trot back to his belongings in front of the confuse looks of his friends.

Yeah, but for a brony that just came out of his closet I expected a bit more passion toward the show, it feeled more like a reunion between friends with pony as the side theme than a brony convention. I feel like after all this time they are tired of ponies...

Hello everyone i'm back. Sorry for the wait I went to a brony convention and I lost my phone... Also sorry for the last post it is a bit rushed but I wanted to post as soon as possible. I guess I'll do better next time. Oh and don't kill me yet and we have the option to resurrect the hydra because logic.

@@Shift, @@Reaver Gold slowly came to his senses. Everything was cold around him. He looked to his tank-fish between his hooves and only saw a ball of ice. "I got the heart" he heard a pony say. Why does that seemed important Oh right the wendigo. G.S slowly got up and threw his saddlebags before him, potions were shattered and some of the fabric was dissolving. He took two bags that were clean and thier contents in another bag. The two bags were labeled "aluminum" and "oxide de fer III". Gold shock violently the bag as the silver and red powder mixed together. Now what do I do. He looked toward the fight: the hydra was in a bad shape and had a bruise to the chest that led to it heart. It was slowly healing. Caramel was perty beaten up too, and Equinox seemed a bit lost. Gold looked back to his bags and spoted a bloody red potion. FURY POTION LVL4, well better than nothing. G.S grabbed the phosphor bomb he made for the last fight and shouted,"CLOSE YOUR EYES AND STOP BREATHING", before throwing the bomb at the hydra. Moreover, he drank the potion in one shot. He then picked up the bag and his lighter. When the bomd touched the ground a white flash exploded in the room. And a big cloud of smoke blinded everything. All stood still for a second before the scream of a pony and the sound of gallop echoed throughout the cave. After ten seconds a bright flame erupted from where the hydra was standing. The room quickly cleared up as the flame consumed the white fog. Gold was standing next to the hydra, panting, a mix of fury and exhaustion on his face. The hydra was convulsing on the ground as a blizzard escaped the gaping wound on the chest.The room, heated by the recent ignition, began to freeze again. The white wind and snow took roughly the form of a pony and observed the room. When it took notice of Gold it rushed to him and entered his body. He collapsed and began to shake. "SO COLD..." He said, "YET... SO HUNGRY!!!"

Thank you very much. @@Shift And I want remember you two that Equinox still have my last fire glyph

You did no harm at all I just took you "lol..." for a "Err Idon'tknowwhattorespondtoyourcomment lol..." and since I really like self-depreciating joke and I have a wierd humour I end up writing things I don't even understand.

And also not for my humour I guess

I think reading "Fallout Equestria Project Horizon", "Your Human and You" and "Diaries of a Madman" in a row was not a good idea for my mental sanity

I don't what came to me. I... I could not stop writing...

@@Shift, @@Reaver "HOW IN TARTARUS CAN A HYDRA HOST A WENDIGO!!?" Gold instantly backed away when he saw the beast. A pale skin, slender feature, this frost aura and the feral attitude. -Gold remembered one of his conference. Somepony pushed a box inside the room and opened it. A tied up pony was inside. Gold began his lesson: This is a wendigo: an evil spirit which take over pony suffering from unger pushing them to eat meat.- G.S ran ot the end of the room, even a little shot off ice could kill him. -It's the worst kind of death, going in a trip inside a forest with your family, losing them, being lost alone and ungry and when finaly the grasp of death will relieve you from your suffering, you stand up in the cold looking for something. You don't know what it is but you want it, you need it.- He looked over his shoulder to see the ora approaching him and his tank-fish slowly began to froze. -And then come the realisation, when you finally found somepony, a pony that want to help you, to save you. You realize with horror that you crave for meat, thier blood; and the more you love them the more they will be delicious. There is a lot of way to separate a wendigo from its host but none to save him.- Gold looked through his bags. Silver will sever the link as well as alicorn tears and moon salt, it will force the spirit outside the body, but with the insane regenerative power of an hydra it's impossible to use them, we can't also use a ritual nor spell. We need to kill this parasite, to burn it. " WE NEED TO BURN ITS HEART. TRY TO RIP OUT AND BRING IT TO ME, I'LL USE THERMITE TO MELT IT" - There is one story of a Saddle Arabian Princess who resisted the unger because her love for her suitor was too strong.- An ice beam nearly touched G.S but the explosion blast projected him to a wall stunning him. Thankfully his bags took most off the shock and he had the time take his aquarium in his hooves to protect it. But the attack took him 75% off his life. - The wendigo which hosted her became enraged after realizing it could not eat. It riped through and dived inside the stallion. The poor Princess lived just enough time to see her lover feasting on her pregnant body.- "EQUINOX... THE GLYPH.." Gold painfully said. You could still hear the strain in his voice through the enchantment. -Some will say that wendigo are spirit that are created by the cupidity of ponies, or that his a curse for the ones that eat sapiens meat. But I have a theory, for me the wendigowak are vengeful spirits that punish the ponies who did not save it host from famine, because magical justice is always unfair and barbaric.-

sorry for being dead.. I mean late!! Ihad some problems

The rope dropped on the floor a truly sad scene for the ones that truly care. It looked like the world tryed to tell Gold a message, maybe this rope represented the threads of destiny falling inexorably to their doom at the speed of light but he was too close to them to see thier fate. Maybe this mission was truly a way to help this world to catch this rope before it's to late. He grabbed the rope before the last centimeter reached the boat. Then, G.S ran to Grell and violently glomped him. "I shall help you my friend. I'm sorry I did not trust you. Know I know that even if you are a dangerous psychopathic murderous criminal, I know you do that for the greater good."

I'm not going to let you die Snowy.... We'll find a cure, I promise..

Hey!! Drop that!!! He isn't gone yet. You'll all the feels and drama when we'll finish the rp

@@Shift, @@Reaver, "MY PHEROMONES REPLICA SHOULD HAVE WORKED BETTER, I NEED TO IMPROVE THEM." Glod voice was still distorted. He sighed, it was like a crowd of millions echoes expressed thier disappointment at the same time. "I GUESS YOU CAN ONLY GO SO FAR WHEN YOU DON'T HAVE MAGIC TO EMPOWER THE ORDER" G.S trotted to his new friends woth his fish tank on his back. His resignation rapidly faded away. "I WILL TALK LIKE THAT FOR A FEW HOURS. AND I'M SORRY BUT I'M ONLY ABLE TO SHOUT. I WAS WONDERING WHEN I'LL BE ABLE TO PUT THIS TO AN USE. IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE A POTION THAT ALLOW THE USER TO TALK EVERY LANGUAGES HE WANT, IN THE END IT MAKES ME SHOUT EVERY LANGUAGE EXISTING AT THE SAME TIME, EVEN VESPID THE CHANGELING'S LANGUAGE. AND IT'S QUITE DISTURBING FOR A CHANGELING SINCE IT USUALLY SPEAKS MULTIPLE LANGUAGES."