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Sorry I came on this forum to improve my English. You are not rude at all in fact I'm really grateful that you did point out my mistakes. What didn't you understand? Also when I talk about gems it magically altering the structure of a gem to create a weapon if you need a bit more detail He can craft glyph if he has some paper and ink of the right color but he need to ask a unicorn to charge the glyph before the fight. He can also ask a skilled unicorn to magically change the structure of gems to create a more powerful version off a glyph, but he have to explain how to do it so the efficiency off the gem will change with how well it have been crafted. I will now list the spell for each glyph and gems: Blue Glyph or Sapphire gems: water bomb Red Glyph or Ruby: fire bomb Green Glyph or Emerald: goo bomb White Glyph or Diamond: flash bomb Black Glyph or Onyx: smoke bomb Violet Glyph or Amethyst: confusion bomb The Glyph can only target one person And here is the efficiency range of the gems Perfectly crafted: 6 target Averagely crafted: 3 to 5 target Badly crafted: 1 to 2 target And if the unicorn has no idea what he is doing it can backfire You know what lets forget about the first post, it was really badly writen

In combat he can use glyphs and gems but he need an unicorn to store magic in the glyphs and to alters the structure of the gems (and he need to be able to explain how to do it) so he usually will use the glyph and the gems as a thumb card, and there is some object or things or stuff that really stand out in the environment and i have the right state off mind maybe I can use them? if you let me.

Hi here i'd like to see if I can join Name: G.S Tuner Age: stalion Race: earth pony Cutie mark: a bared gear with a star on it Power and ability: he has no relation with the magical field of equestria that meas that he is a bit magicaly resistant but he don't have any advantage of being an earth pony hovever he have an incredible understanding of magics, their concept and theories, but he does know how to explain them to other. Personality:G.S Tuner he is rather lunatic he can be extremely extravagant and outgoing, he can sometimes be too energetic and try to lead or he can be must more observant and thoughtful following the group and just listening to the conversation without taking part in it. He is somehow brilliant but he has a lot of hard time trying to explain himself, that lead him to be thinking that he is not on the same wavelength as everyone and that cause him to have a little bit of self depreciation. Background: He didn't know why he followed that group. When he is lost in his thought he tend to follow everyone and end up on the other side of the earth, like this time where he wake up in saddle arabia ... No!! focus!! although he tried to explain that he was not interested in joining they didn't seem to listen or even understand what he was saying. Maybe he should have tell them his whole story before attempting to explain to some villain that what was wearing the guard was a coif and not a simple wiring. And maybe just maybe, if he didn't made an essay on the royal guard armory, he would have not been sailing to an extremely lethal island. Well ... at least Bubble his loyal golden fish was with him. for this description G.S Tunner is not that tall he have a golden mane and a brownish coat he gray woolly chiné sweater. i'm working on the art but i have the art for Bubble. I have still some background point to PM.

If so I have a special request that you might find interesting, actually two pony in one (read all plz ) : Bubble and Gold Star Tunner Bubble is a golden fish and he is kinda immortal but as a golden fish so it meas it can't talk or do anything in the first part of the plot related to my story I would do nothing but observe and if you happen to do the right thing My Oc could be free for a period of time depending on the situation. I understand that it's a request that is hard to fulfill but I would like you to read the rest if possible. Backstory: As far as we know bubble has always been there standing still in his fish tank on Celestia’s desk. Somme time turning round in this little space, but still living through the ages we don’t know why he is immortal but he is, and many people didn’t find out. But I always thought that there was more in his eyes like sometime a flame off intelligence. But after studying him for so long I still could not drawn any conclusion. He is and he will stay a wonder forever if nobody find out. It’s funny no? An immortal goldfish for an immortal princess. It’s a shame that the princess is dead now the poor thing must feel lonely, well golden fishes have a memory of 30 second so I’m not too worried about it. I will bring him with me to the stable, I guess he will survive this war anyway. This point is not mandatory: I have some more back story but I would not want to spoil how to free G.S but I still want to add some point :like I said a golden fish has a memory of 30 sec so if something happen in the room like a conversation or a question or something that can trigger G.S mind inside Bubble he will start to explain things or take part of the conversation in his mind for 30 sec or more if the conversation is active enough to keep him thinking actively if not he will reset after 30 sec and begging to panicking because he don’t know where he is or he will fall asleep. If he is free G.S is an earth pony with aboslutly no realtion with magic so he don't get the adventage of being an earth pony like more resistance and everything for the SPECIAL: STR:3 PERC:7 END:5 CHA:9 INT:9 AG:4 LUCK:2 I didn't find the trait list and the perk list but G.S can't explain his thought clearly and most of the time nobody will understand what he say. I want to remind you that from now on i'll follow the thread intensively and if a group happen to find Bubble i'll be there AND Bubble is the size of an actual goldenfish here is Bubble art I didn't make the art for G.S Tuner yet...

France here!!! On this good night

Hello everybody can I still join?

yeah you are right but i need to finish this as fast as possible because it's just the first step of my project. but thanks for the tip

Yeah you are right i don't know why i could not see that before Thanks

I have a project for a background I began to draw but the sketch feel a bit off and I can't find the problem. I don't know if I'm in the right post but it's still a request. here is the sketch and thanks for reading.

Thanks I put a lot of work in it but i think I can improve.

Great job I think you had a lot of work on this one. Just one little problem for me it's that the shades are not on the right side. Since the light come from the left i think they should be on the opposite side

So this is my second drawing I tried to add and use every critiques that everyone made but I've still some problem figuring out what to do on the head and I wanted to do something different for the end off the legs. I take every ideas, I'm still not fixed on the model for this character. Thanks

Thank you very much and i definitely love the art work

Thanks I will work on that too I tried the changes for the mouth and the head positioning and I think you were right

I must thanks you so very much for this comment. You make me want to work harder than ever. I'm actually speechless. Just thank you. Let's go back to work To Tsaritsa By 7 time better i'm actually referring to the shading, the light management, the figure, the background and maybe just maybe add more detail. I'm not afraid off spending 24 hours on each frame if that means i'm gonna do what i have in mind and even if it's not finished when mlp has ended i will continue.

Thanks for the critiques. for the blurred patterns when I made them they where too clear and it's was a bit off so i tried to blur them a little but i think i over did it. I tried to do lighter shading especially on the head but I could not find out how to do it. And my project is an animation I have the story board ready and the deadline, approximately 30 year, since it's the first time I've been so creative i need to go all the way and in my head the art is actually 7 time better than this.

Thank you for the praise. I guess that what i need the most now is practice

Hello everyone i'm new here, and actually totally new to the drawing activity. This is my first drawing. I spend 10 hour doing this trying to make that not totally crappy. I need your critiques to improve myself because I have a big project in mind and this is not this quality of art that i would like to put into. I need you all to be as objective as possible so I can do better. Thanks

Thanks a lot, i'm really happy that I signed in

So much love it's overwhelming. Thanks oh great moderator. And thank you too Stardust Balance

Thanks this forum seems really great