Minty_The_Sweet

Thanks for the welcome! I really like this forum so far and hope to explore it to the fullest

Can I join? I sent you my OC but if you don't like it I can change it to my other OC

Um can I join the RP? my OC is an Alicorn but she was created by mistake during Luna's banishment. Celestia tends to ignore her but does treat her like her child. Because of her creator's constant ignoring and disappointment she has a need to be accepted by others and will go to extraordinary lengths for approval but often most ponies look down upon her for not being born though natural or normal means. She also hates to fight and if anyone tries to push her around she often just lets them. I would like to join? if thats ok with you

I made a new Rp and was wondering if anyone wanted to join. Your character can be any race or species, because in the resort of love and tolerance is all about accepting other ponies/sentient beings. I made this RP to be all about being able to give you tons of room for your OCs to be sculpted. Heres the link for the rp https://mlpforums.com/topic/152484-the-hotel-of-love-and-tolerance/

Link to the OOC: https://mlpforums.com/topic/152485-anyone-want-to-join-the-resort-of-love-and-tolerance/ A new resort has just opened and it has been called "The resort of love and tolerance" for its acceptance of all races. Changeling, Breezie, animal, Pony all are welcome to the resort of love and tolerance! in fact a few lucky sentient beings have been sent exclusive tickets to this luxurious and welcoming resort!​ can't wait to see you there! Princess Butterfly stood in front of the hotel doors, feeling very anxious about going in. She had found the invite in-between her favourite book that she always borrowed from the library. She was a royal changeling who loved ponies and had dreams of becoming one, one day. She didn't need her pony form and if she was in her changeling form she wouldn't have to feed as much but she felt better in her pony form. Butterfly sighed and sucked in a deep breath before walking into the resort with a practiced smile. As she walked up to the receptionist Butterfly noticed that the pony behind the counter was a bat pony. "Um... I got a invite saying I was invited to the resort of love and tolerance? p-please tell me I got the right resort" Butterfly said before pushing the invite onto the desk. The bat pony examined Princess Butterfly carefully before sighing and handing her a golden key. "4th floor, room 466" the bat pony said before going back to fiddling with her wing. Butterfly ran to the closest elevator and poked the button for 4th floor. She relaxed and brought out a book from her saddle bag to read. She was currently reading 'Snow White and the seven breezies' her latest conquest over the fairytale world. The door pinged and opened letting Butterfly out in the fourth floor. Being the skilled navigator that she was Butterfly eventually found her room in 2 hours. After opening the door Butterfly gasped at how beautiful the room was with its silk sheets and glitter covered kitchen. This room screamed Butterfly and with a high pitched squeal she flew onto the couch and sighed at the softness.

Butterfly was terrified of going inside this secluded hotel in the mountains. She didn't know how many ponies were going to be in their and the fact she had just gotten coordinates from a slip of paper that had fallen out of her regular book didn't give her high hopes. She was extremely worried of any pony finding out who she really was and what they might do if they wondered why she never ate or maybe why she seemed tired so often. "Just focus, you sneak into the royal libraries all the time how can this be any harder?" Butterfly spoke to herself out loud before fiddling with her pink scarf. Butterfly took in a few deep breathes before walking into the resort timidly.

I have made two non mary sue Alicorn OCs (At least to me they certainly aren't) and I do think that this character is very much a mary sue. Just because somepony is a mary sue doesn't mean it can't be redeemed into a good pony. Maybe give him more flawed aspects like he doesn't want to let any pony down but always seems to make mistakes?. I do think he has potential to be a good character but he needs to have something that brings him down to relatable.

Well Iv wanted to write since primary but I only started writing last year with a Fnaf fanfic. After that I got into MLP and started making my OCs in my story. to answer your question I don't know how many but if they top of my head I can list the names of my MLP OCs Minty, Pepper, Red, Hannah, Spike, Atlantia, (5 un-nameed OCs), and I have made some future OCs for a sequel to my MLP fiction Crystal ball, Odd ball, Loose screw and a few that I have forgotten the names of

I have many but my favourite is Minty Sparkle She was my first ever pony Oc and when making her I couldn't decide weather to make her a pegasus, Unicorn, or earth pony. I made her a Alicorn and in one of my fan fictions it explains why (Very complicated story involving a cloning spell and Celestia and Luna). She was stolen out of her crib and brought to peace valley, a place far from Equestria where this pony though she would be safer. As she grew up she was often bullied by other ponies because of her strange appearance. In peace valley most ponies consider Alicorns to be very dangerous beings who should not be trusted. Minty is very easily distracted and tends to get involved in her studies of magic and alchemy to the point where she might pass out during an experiment and wake up with strange side effects. She also can be too trusting and easily gives in to peer pressure because she wants to be accepted. I do have many better ones but she is one of my first ever OCs so I feel a special connection with her.

Your OCs are actually quite good. I really like the last one; wolf heart from the picture she strikes me as a curious and playful sort. Wolf heart is a good OC but maybe try to make more then her curse define her as a character like what her hobbies are? maybe she still carries a little bit of the wolf with her and she likes fetch. Also who are her friends? maybe she is friends with wild winds and they have a secret hoof shake. Your OC Dusty Embers looks really cool and slightly reminds me of a cowboy of some sort. Maybe his cutie mark can be about his untameable spirit and how it burns wild and brightly like fire. I can't give the best OC advice because I don't know exactly what you want but make sure that they can be relatable in some way and that they have weaknesses. Iv been making OCs since I first started playing games and looking back on them they were all mary sues but as I started reading more I found out what a good character is and slowly they became better and better. Always keep in mind that they are your OCs and that they are yours to shape into good strong characters.

I have written 1 published mlp fiction (And have many sketches and side projects) and I do feel like I am pretty good with making ocs. I can help with backstory, name, personality, talents, and a few things. Feel free to ask me any oc advice

My Favourite Mane 6 Pony: Pinkie Pie How did you find MLP Forums?: I found the mlp forums while searching for some where I could talk about my ocs and discuss how alicorn ocs don't deserve the dissing How you became a fan of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: I became a fan after going over to a friend's place. They were watching mlp the two first episodes of season 2. At first I was like "That show is for 6 year olds!" but eventually I started watching mlp and immediately rooted for Discord. I am a massive fan of mlp, undertale, fnaf, Steven universe, and pokemon. I have written two fanfics which I posted on fanfiction.net and I write a lot of side fan fictions for fun. I embody the character Pinkie pie crazily so. I can give backstorys, names, and sometimes maybe a small fiction for any ocs you make. Um bye?