deathmetalbr0ny

I had one creepy experience that I will never forget, although I'm sure it was my mind playing tricks on me. I was starting to get into creepypastas, I always liked horror movies and never got scared by them but theses stories finally got to me, it was something about the subtly and ambiance that really put me on edge that even when I wasn't listening to them every little noise that I heard freaked me out. One day I was setting home alone and I was on my computer watching a few of them. It was running slow because it was storming so I closed all of my tabs and was going to unplug my router and modem but for a moment, I just sat there looking at my screen I sighed and collected my thoughts because that day wasn't going so well. Again I must stress that all of my tabs were closed on my computer and every tv was off. But as I was slipping into my thoughts I heard what sounded like an evil laugh. It felt so real and so close I actually panicked and fell out of my chair. I checked every part of my trailer and of course nothing was there and every door was locked but something about the atmosphere felt completely wrong so until my mom got back from work I held a knife the entire time. What set me of the most was that when I heard the laugh, this was my desktop background.

I've also had this weird irrational thing with odd numbers, It drives me crazy sometimes. Lets say I'm playing mario 64 or some other collectathon I have to have an even number of items before I get the star or go to the goal.

My friend started watching Degrassi: The Next Generation after I told him that I watch it. It's funny because he used to make fun of his mom and brother for watching it because he thought it was stupid and over the top(which it can be) but now he loves it and is already at season 4 and decided to purchase seasons 1 through 10 off amazon. Unfortunately for me Drake plays one of the main characters on the show and when he first appeared my friend sent me a message saying "You used to call me on my cellphone." and I "Please don't tell me you're going to send that every-time Jimmy is on screen." and he "I probably will." That continued for a few days till I broke responded with this. We had a good laugh with that one and he stopped after awhile thank god.

Just try to resist this one..

When I'm alone I watch all sorts of music videos and am constantly fighting the urge not to poorly imitate the dancers out of fear of somebody walking in,

@WiiGuy2014 Yep it's one of my favorites because of its developments of fluttershy's character, she used to be my least favorite but recent episodes have changed that.

@Esom I've only seen most season 5 and later episodes once with a few exceptions, right now I'm doing a re watch of all the episodes. Season 6 from what I read seems to have gotten a bit of detractors and I really don't get why with episodes like The Saddle Row Review, Flutter Brutter, and Newbie Dash(I will never understand the dislike for that one) It really got me back into it so much that I actually watched the episodes when they air on tv instead of waiting to watch on Kimcartoon.

@Kitsune* https://mlpforums.com/topic/167876-tips-for-writing-an-unlikable-but-sympathetic-character-and-fleshing-out-the-story/ Not the story itself but the general idea I have so far.

Oh boy got a bit of a long one here but some help would be nice. Not so much writing the backstory as I’ve posted a good bit about that, but I would like a second opinion on a certain part of the backstory that's supposed to foreshadow coming events but I think it may be either too subtle, or might spell it out too much for people who pick up things easily on visual storytelling. The scene starts out with the two characters playing with sticks as if they were weapons a sword and a scepter. Then one of characters sets on top of a hill proclaiming that one day he will be a king himself.Then his best friend plays along, so she gets on her knees and puts her stick in the ground and holds the top of it like the hilt and swears an oath to protect him and see his dream come to pass. But then he starts ranting on and going a bit to far saying that he would love to have total control and that there would be total peace. She stands up with a eyeroll and disinterested look on her face and asked him to come down to so she can tell him something. When he does,she with a grin on her face,lightly hits him on the head with her stick knocking off a paper crown he is wearing saying “No no no.” He falls down and has a playful angry look on and says “Well I can't believe it you just said you would protect me, but here you stand striking me instead!’ She holds out her arm to help him up “I said I would help you be a king, not a God my friend I really will have to stay along side you to remind there are times that ponies can still tell you no.” He takes her hand and gets up and says “Maybe your right.” he holds on to her a bit longer and begins to blush and says “You'll be with me through it all, right?” she blushes as well “Of course, why do you ask?” He stutters “We-well I was thinking, that maybe once I have everything I’ll need somebody to share it with so ma-maybe it could be you.” “You could be more than a sword to me you could be my qu-queen too.” She giggles and I picture her saying one of two things “You’ll have to keep dreaming on that one for now!” or “Only if you're willing to chase that dream down!” and then runs off calling him to go after her. Then we see there two sticks laying in the ground in a cross shape with the crown next to it symbolizing that eventually they do rule together but also that he will get too stuck in his ways and that they will someday clash. I would like to know if should work with that as is or if there is anything I should leave out or expand more on in that scene.

@WiiGuy2014 always wanted a rival/frienemy maybe it'll be like one of those long running shounen ones lol

I am endeavoring to misappropriate the formulary for the preparations of affordable comestibles! WHO WILL JOIN ME?!...oh god that's going to be what I introduce myself with. Oh I cant help it I've always wanted to use that line since i first heard it so why not now.

@Kronos the Revenant Sounds like a good story, I would like to read it if its still up. I had the idea of my characters fall being something more on the lines of Griffith from Berserk or Stannis from Game of Thrones if you've seen either of those. Though he doesn't do any actions nearly as evil as those two but is just as pragmatic.

Regal Zeal is a young colt living in a village with his best friend Shining Dawn. One night after playing camping away from the village they hear loud noises that wake them up and they return only to find their town destroyed. After exploring the town they over hear the army behind the attack and the plans for attacking other territories near by. In a fit of rage they begin to attack everyone but are quickly over powered and make a run for it and barely manage to escape. Eventually the two make it somewhere safe and he recalls a legend of a treasure in a cave on the outside of the village deep within the caves, it is said to be a jewel that grants the one who wears it great power and can make ideals a reality.After finding it he and his friend spend the next few years training and building there own army to reclaim what was lost to them. Soon they have there home and happiness back, Regal Zeal and Shining Dawn return to a normal life but this time they are the leaders of a small kingdom, he is able to act a bit like his old self again in private awkward and fumbling over his words. He asks his childhood friend who has stayed with him throughout their long journey to not only be his sword and protector but his queen and she says yes and all seems well. But soon he starts to have a dream that he hasn't had since he was a child of the entire world in ruins and he hears a voice warning that a great evil will soon awaken and he must be the one to save the world. This is the part where I get stuck the next part of the story is where he is supposed to become obsessed with power and that his way ends up being the only way and ultimately falling from grace. Granted at this part the audience is not supposed to like him anymore but there not supposed to hate him either but I'm having trouble thinking of what could go to far with that aspect of his character. And I'm having a hard time figuring out how it should play out, plus I've only really thought out the overall big story I'm still struggling with writing out the scenes with dialogue. I have these moments where I have the scene play out entirely in my head but when I go to write it down it completely falls apart.