Derpy.H

I'll keep all of this in mind, thanks.This will help me out in later poem attempts.

It wasn't really supposed to be an anger attack. It was more of a point. I forgot I used the caps lock at the time as well. I normally do that when I'm making a line. Forgot to undo that bit, I guess. I wanted repetition to be there, as well. I was fully aware of it. And looking at it, I realise my grammar mistakes (will be rectified now). But, thanks for the advice.

She, the one whom I loved. She, the one whom I loved. I, the one whom she loved. We, the couple of perfection. We, the couple with a connection. We, the ones who should've stayed together. We, the ones who were ripped apart. Evil, peril, DEATH. Death, hatred.. her. She, the one whom I loved. I, the one whom she loved. She, the one who didn't deserve it. She, the one who didn't want it. She, the one who was in happiness. She, the one who was in pure love. Love, couples, HAPPINESS. Happiness, joy.. us. She, the one whom I loved. I, the one whom she loved. Us, the couple who shouldn't have split. Us, the couple with a love thought to have been forever. Me and her. She and I. The couple. The happiness. Where did it go? Why did it end? When was this foretold to happen? Who planned all of this? How comes this must've happened? Where, why, when, who, how? The unanswerable questions of us. Me and her. She and I. By: Derpy.H

Ok, thanks all. I'll keep these. Thank you!

I am wondering. Will you be making a Derpy one? :3

Okay, so I am just making myself a little comic featuring Derpy Hooves and ONE OC. I want one of your OCs to be in this! A few rules I want to make. NO ALICORNS NO PEGASI (Im not great at drawing pegasi.. so.. it's hard enough having Derpy!) PONIES ONLY (So, earth pony or unicorn) Basically, First come First Served. The person who gets their OC in this comic will be informed of the comic's creation.

Oh. That kinda sucks, then. Shame. Thanks, anyway! First clip in! This is good, thank you "Parties like Pinkie"

Okay, you will receive the questions shortly. I said to isobel: "That's good. I'll add you to the list. Im just checking over all my questions and they will be sent to you, pronto! Also, quickly. Are you planning to do VIDEO or VOICE?" I just need you to answer that for me.

Okay, just before I send you the questions - are you using VIDEO or VOICE?

That's good. I'll add you to the list. Im just checking over all my questions and they will be sent to you, pronto! Also, quickly. Are you planning to do VIDEO or VOICE? Quick question: When you say "help", do you mean by participating or something else? Same thing as I said to isobelthegreat. If you wouldn't mind. Could you send me a quick clip so I can see what it sounds like, if you wouldn't mind.

Sure, if you don't mind. Hmm... I guess I could add some more questions fitted to pegasisters. So.. sure, I guess.

If you would like, I can send you a pm of some of the questions!