writing Random fanfic writing at 2:00 AM.

[wintergoat 4]

Here is something random I wrote at 2:00 AM this morning. I'm not a good writer to begin with, and especially not when tired. Give it a read if you like, and I'd really appreciate some critique, because I'd like to expand and extend the storyline some. I know it's a bit OOC for the characters involved, but I had an idea, and had nothing better to do this early, so I wrote it.

 

===Start Fic===

 

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It was a fine day in Ponyville. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, and Derpy was, well, derping. Derpy was going on her morning mail route, whistling a tune to herself. She flew along from house to house, sometimes crashing into pony's mailboxes when trying to land next to them. Derpy wasn't usually this happy, this early in the morning. You might be wondering why Derpy was so happy. Well, I will tell you. Derpy was getting married that weekend.

 

== Flash back 1 month==

 

“Will you marry me?” asked the blue pegasus

“Of course I will, Dashie!” replied the grey one

 

== Flash back 6 months ==

 

Derpy was doing her job as a mailmare as usual. She had almost reached the end of her route, when she saw she had a package to be delivered to a “Miss Rainbow Dash” in the area. She saw on the package that this pony's house was in the sky. Derpy flew up to the house indicated on the package, and knocked on the cloud door. A pony almost immediately answered. Derpy had never seen so beautiful a mare. She could not help but be captivated by the perfect blue body, the wonderful rainbow mane, and those deep magenta eyes. Derpy snapped back to reality when she heard the pony whom she was delivering the package to calling to her.

“Miss? Um, Miss? Are you OK?” she asked.

“Err, yes, I'm fine” Replied Derpy

“I'm here to deliver a package for you. Are you Miss Beauti... I mean Rainbow Dash?”

“Why yes, I am, the one and only! Wait, what did you just call me?”

“Nothing, miss. Could you please sign on this line?”

Derpy handed the clipboard to Rainbow, but accidentally dropped it.

“Here, I'll get that for you, Miss. Do you mind if I call you Rainbow Dash?” Derpy reached for the clipboard.

“Thanks, and sure, you can call me that.”

Derpy could not help but stare at Dash's well toned muscles and body as she bent down and retrieved the clipboard. Her eyes lingered on her flank a little too long.

“Um, Miss...”

“Derpy.”

“Derpy, what are you looking at?”

“N-nothing” she stammered.

“Are you sure?”

“Yeah.”

Rainbow Dash signed the clipboard and handed it back to Derpy.

“Anyways, Miss Rainbow Dash, here is your package.”

Derpy dropped the package on purpose so she could get a better look at this pony.

“Ooops, sorry, I'll get that.”

“Here you go, Miss Dash.”

“Hey, you seem like a cool pony, Derpy. Do you wanna hang out sometime?”

“Sure” Derpy replied, not believing that she was going to get to spend even more time with this wonderful pony.

“Here, at my house, tomorrow afternoon, at 3?”

“Sure, that would be great!” Replied Derpy.

“Bye then!”

“Bye”

Derpy flew off, accidentally crashing into a tree on the way back home. That evening, Derpy was sitting on her couch, and thinking. She knew what she felt towards the pony she met on her mail route that day was a feeling she had not felt towards anypony in a very long time. It was love.

 

== The next day ==

 

Derpy woke up to her alarm clock, and tried to turn it off, but ended up accidentally smashing it with her hoof.

“That's the third one this week” she thought to herself.

Derpy got up, made breakfast, and went out to her mail route. The rest of the day was uneventful, up until 2:30 when she arrived home. She saw the time, and decided to get ready to go over to Rainbow Dash's house. She had a shower, and made sure to use here best-smelling shampoo. She hoped that her relationship with this mare would come out to be more than just friendship. She set off to fly to Rainbow's house. When she arrived after the uneventful journey, she knocked again upon the cloud door. Rainbow answered quickly, and said

“Hey Derpy.”

“Hi Rainbow!”

She entered Rainbow Dash's house and was gestured to sit down on the couch.

“What do you want to do?” asked Rainbow.

“How about we get to know each other a little better?” replied Derpy.

“That sounds like a good idea.”

 

Rainbow Dash and Derpy discussed about each other for a little bit, and by the end of it, Rainbow was feeling a little something towards Derpy as well.

 

“Should I make a move?” thought Dash.

“What if she doesn't feel the same about me?”

 

Despite being a normally courageous pony, Rainbow's courage was beginning to fade rather quickly. She decided that she would make a move.

 

“Umm, Derpy?”

“Yeah?”

“I think that we are meant to be more than just friends.”

“I think so too.”

 

Rainbow could not believe what she just heard. This mare who she barely just met wanted to be her marefriend. And she wanted to be Derpy's as well. Rainbow snapped back to reality as she found Derpy's mouth coming closer and closer to her own. They met, and the two passionately kissed for what seemed like hours, but was probably really only a couple of minutes.

 

“Wow!” said Derpy.

 

Derpy though that Rainbow should be known as the best kisser in all of Equestria, instead of the best flier.

 

“That was intense” said Rainbow.

 

The two ponies embraced each other, and fell asleep in each others hooves on that couch.

Derpy woke up first, and the previous night all came back to her. She had a marefriend! She had a marefriend! Surprisingly, they had managed to stay embraced throughout the whole night. She tried to slip out of the embrace without waking up Dash, but she was unsuccessful. Dash woke up, and she too was happy that she had a new marefriend. Dash felt a special connection between herself and Derpy.

 

“Good morning, Derpy.” greeted Rainbow Dash

“Morning, Dashie.”

“How did you sleep?”

“Perfect, with you in my arms.”

 

== Fast Forward 1 month ==

 

Derpy had just moved in with Dash, and was getting used to living in a cloud house.

 

To skip the lemon, CTRL (or CMD) + F and type “@SKIPLEMON@” without the quotation marks.

 

<Lemon not posted here due to the fact that it needs tweaking, and I believe it might be against forum rules possibly?>

 

@SKIPLEMON@

 

After the session, the two lovers lay in bed, panting.

“That was great.” said Derpy.

“I enjoyed it too.”

 

The two mares went to sleep, happy as they could ever be.

 

== Approx 5 months later ==

 

Rainbow Dash was getting ready for what she was about to do. Just like on the day they became marefriends, she was nervous. She was going to propose to Derpy. Rainbow went into the kitchen, and greeted Derpy.

 

“Hey there!”

“Hi”

 

She decided now was the time.

 

“I have something to ask you.”

“Sure, go ahead.”

 

“Derpy, will you marry me?” asked the blue pegasus, as she opened up a box with a ring (made to fit ponies) inside.

“Of course I will, Dashie!” replied the grey one

 

The two of them hugged, and kissed each other. They now had wedding plans to make!

 

THE END

 

===End Fanfic===

 

If I edit it when fully awake, I might add another chapter/sequel with their wedding and things.

[Chigens and Kay 3,832]

Nice and short, just how I like my reads. Good job.

[wintergoat 4]

Nice and short, just how I like my reads. Good job.

 

Exactly why I made it short, I like them short too.

[SrFrog 927]

Interesting, not very often that you see this pairing, have I even seen it before? Can't remember. Might actually like to see more of this

[wintergoat 4]

Interesting, not very often that you see this pairing, have I even seen it before? Can't remember. Might actually like to see more of this

 

If there's one person who would potentially like to see more, (that's you!) then I'll put my best into it when I'm fully awake later today. I have never seen that pairing before either, so I figured I'd mix it up a little bit.

 

Well, I'm awake now, and I'm going to spruce it up a little bit, and things, maybe write a draft of the next chapter. (the one I posted above is a draft)

 

There, I just made some minor edits and rephrasing, there's not much I can see that I can do to this chapter to make it better in any way, so maybe I'll work on the next one, a bit later.

 

==BEGIN==

 

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It was a fine day in Ponyville. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, and Derpy was, well, derping. Derpy was going on her morning mail route, whistling a tune to herself. She flew along from house to house, sometimes crashing into pony's mailboxes when trying to land next to them. Derpy wasn't usually this happy, this early in the morning. You might be wondering why Derpy was so happy. Well, I will tell you. Derpy was getting married that weekend.

 

~~~Flash back 1 month~~~

 

“Will you marry me?” asked the blue pegasus

“Of course I will, Dashie!” replied the grey one

 

~~~Flash back 6 months~~~

 

Derpy was out doing her job as a mailmare as usual. She had almost reached the end of her route, when she saw she had a package to be delivered to a miss “Rainbow Dash” in the area. She saw on the package that this pony's house was in the sky. Derpy flew up to the house indicated on the package, and knocked on the cloud door. A pony almost immediately answered. Derpy had never seen so beautiful a mare. She could not help but be captivated by the perfect blue body, the wonderful rainbow mane, and those deep magenta eyes. Derpy snapped back to reality when she heard the pony whom she was delivering the package to calling to her.

“Miss? Um, Miss? Are you OK?” she asked.

“Err, yes, I'm fine” Replied Derpy

“I'm here to deliver a package for you. Are you Miss Beauti... I mean Rainbow Dash?”

“Why yes, I am, the one and only! Wait, what did you just call me?”

“Nothing, miss. Could you please sign on this line?”

Derpy handed the clipboard to Rainbow, but accidentally dropped it.

“Here, I'll get that for you, Miss. Do you mind if I call you Rainbow Dash?” Derpy reached for the clipboard.

“Thanks, and sure, you can call me that.”

Derpy could not help but stare at Dash's well toned muscles and body as she bent down and retrieved the clipboard. Her eyes lingered on her flank a little too long.

“Um, Miss...”

“Derpy.”

“Derpy, what are you looking at?”

“N-nothing” she stammered.

“Are you sure?”

“Yeah.”

Rainbow Dash signed the clipboard and handed it back to Derpy.

“Anyways, Rainbow Dash, here is your package.”

Derpy dropped the package again, this time on purpose so she could have an excuse to get another look at this pony.

“Ooops, sorry, I'll get that.”

“Here you go, Miss Dash.”

“Hey, you seem like a cool pony, Derpy. Do you wanna hang out sometime?”

“Sure” Derpy replied, not believing that she was going to get to spend even more time with this wonderful pony.

“Here, tomorrow afternoon, at 3?”

“Sure, that would be great!” Replied Derpy.

“Bye then!”

“Bye”

Derpy flew off, accidentally crashing into a tree on the way back home. That evening, Derpy was sitting on her couch, and thinking. She knew what she felt towards the pony she met on her mail route that day was a feeling she had not felt towards anypony in a very long time. It was love.

 

~~~The next day~~~

 

Derpy woke up to her alarm clock, and tried to turn it off, but ended up accidentally smashing it with her hoof.

“That's the third one this week” she thought to herself.

Derpy got up, made breakfast, and went out to her mail route. The rest of the day was uneventful, up until 2:30 when she arrived home. She saw the time, and decided to get ready to go over to Rainbow Dash's house. She had a shower, and made sure to use here best-smelling shampoo. She hoped that her relationship with this mare would come out to be more than just friendship. She set off to fly to Rainbow's house. When she arrived after the uneventful journey, she knocked again upon the cloud door. Rainbow answered quickly, and said

“Hey Derpy.”

“Hi Rainbow!”

She entered Rainbow Dash's house and was gestured to sit down on the couch.

“What do you want to do?” asked Rainbow.

“How about we get to know each other a little better?” replied Derpy.

“That sounds like a good idea.”

 

Rainbow Dash and Derpy discussed about each other for a little bit, and by the end of it, Rainbow was feeling a little something towards Derpy as well.

 

“Should I make a move?” thought Dash.

“What if she doesn't feel the same about me?”

 

Despite being a normally courageous pony, Rainbow's courage was beginning to fade rather quickly. She decided that she would make a move.

 

“Umm, Derpy?”

“Yeah?”

“I think that we are meant to be more than just friends.”

“I think so too.”

 

Rainbow could not believe what she just heard. This mare who she barely just met wanted to be her marefriend. And she wanted to be Derpy's as well. Rainbow snapped back to reality as she found Derpy's mouth coming closer and closer to her own. They met, and the two passionately kissed for what seemed like hours, but was probably really only a couple of minutes.

 

“Wow!” said Derpy.

 

Derpy though that Rainbow should be known as the best kisser in all of Equestria, instead of the best flier.

 

“That was intense” said Rainbow.

 

The two ponies embraced each other, and fell asleep in each others arms on that couch.

Derpy woke up first, and the previous night all came back to her. She had a marefriend! She had a marefriend! Surprisingly, they had managed to stay embraced throughout the whole night. She tried to slip out of the embrace without waking up Dash, but she was unsuccessful. Dash woke up, and she too was happy that she had a new marefriend. Dash felt a special connection between herself and Derpy, unline any other she had felt towards anypony else before.

 

“Good morning, Derpy.” greeted Rainbow Dash

“Morning, Dashie.”

“How did you sleep?”

“Perfect, with you in my arms.”

 

~~~Fast Forward 1 month~~~

 

Derpy had just recently moved in with Dash, and was getting used to living in a cloud house. It was much different than living on the ground. She enjoyed it however, mostly due to the fact that she was living with her lover. Nothing eventful had happened between now and when they met, aside from the fact that Derpy was spending more time then ever with Rainbow. It was evening now, and time for the 2 ponies to go to bed, as they had to go to work the next morning.

 

~~Lemon alert!~~

To skip the lemon, CTRL (or CMD) + F and type “@SKIPLEMON@” without the quotation marks.

 

<again, lemon removed because I don't feel like tweaking it right now, and because I'm still not sure if the forum allows it.>

 

@SKIPLEMON@

 

After the session, the two lovers lay in bed, panting.

“That was great.” said Derpy.

“I enjoyed it too, as I always do with you.”

 

The two mares went to sleep, happy as they could ever be.

 

~~~Approx 5 months later~~~

 

Rainbow Dash was getting ready for what she was about to do. Just like on the day they first became marefriends, she was nervous. She was going to propose to Derpy. Rainbow gathered up enough courage, and went into the kitchen, where Derpy was eating breakfast. (Muffins, no doubt.)

 

“Hey there!” greeted Derpy.

“Hi”

 

She decided now was the time.

 

“I have something to ask you.”

“Sure, go ahead.”

 

“Derpy, will you marry me?” asked the blue pegasus, as she opened up a box with a ring (made to fit ponies) inside.

“Of course I will, Dashie!” replied the grey one

 

The two of them hugged and kissed each other, but they eventually had to set off for work. After work, it was time to get busy. They now had wedding plans to make!

 

THE END (for NOW)

 

==END==