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Hi, I wrote an MLP fanfic where my OC, Silver Star, goes to a fully-legal arena and fights the undefeatable reigning champion there for a shot at a lot of money. How did I do, and how can I improve?

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/244258/silver-star-vs-blood-banana

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I was dead until the moment I met you. I was a powerless corpse pretending to be alive. Living without power, without the ability to change my course, was akin to a slow death. If I must live as I did before then... -Lelouch, Code Geass - My NEW DeviantART: http://SilverStarApple.deviantart.com/Want to make money for being an AWESOME PONY? https://www.tsu.co/Epsilon725

My fanfic, starring Silver Star Apple: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/224996/the-shining-silver-star-of-the-apple-family

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