RandomSelect 36 February 4, 2015 Share February 4, 2015 What’s up folks? Last month or so, I placed a thread (Link: http://mlpforums.com/topic/118421-to-review-or-not-to-review/), asking what stuff I should review. Unfortunately, no one replied. Despite that, I’m going to carry on doing that. I also asked for opinions about my temporary reviewing OC, which currently looks like this... Made at http://www.signgenerator.org Yeah, not the best design but still... Anyways, I’ve made some progress about it. Here’s a couple of them... This one here is made using Chibimaker 1.1 Link: http://gen8.deviantart.com/art/Chibi-Maker-1-1-346025144 This one’s made using Pony Creator: Link: http://www.deviantart.com/art/Pony-Creator-Full-Version-254295904 I need to do some work with those two, with the emotions and all. So, what do you think? Opinions please! See ya! I'm your friendly neighbourhood voice actor and singer! My Youtube Channel: Brian Random Latest Videos: Anthropology / Character Voice Reel 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DormantAccount 308 February 4, 2015 Share February 4, 2015 I'm not a huge fan of the chibi style, but the human looks alright. I think the pony could use some work. I would get rid of the grey muzzle. It looks like he has a beak. Go a bit bigger on the eyes. They look really small. I'd also tone down his coat color. It is a little bright. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Valkyrie 525 February 4, 2015 Share February 4, 2015 Human is good but i would make fingers little bigger(i know you cant do thet but it would be nice),but ponys head is litle off.Color it full red it look like he have costume(or if you whanted to look like thet you coud make 1 bleck line just litle b4 his mouth). My oc: Awilix Blair Jacqueline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RandomSelect 36 February 5, 2015 Author Share February 5, 2015 Thanks guys. Been working on it. I think the pony could use some work. I would get rid of the grey muzzle. It looks like he has a beak. Go a bit bigger on the eyes. They look really small. I'd also tone down his coat color. It is a little bright. Grey muzzle looking like a beak... I was going for a ‘beard-like’ effect. ponys head is litle off.Color it full red it look like he have costume(or if you whanted to look like thet you coud make 1 bleck line just litle b4 his mouth). Cool. Okay. Taking everything into consideration, here are the results... ...Is it me or does it remind anyone of ToonKritic's OC? How about this? Personally, I prefer the partly black mane one but what do you guys think? I'm your friendly neighbourhood voice actor and singer! My Youtube Channel: Brian Random Latest Videos: Anthropology / Character Voice Reel 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowking58 1,137 February 5, 2015 Share February 5, 2015 Thanks guys. Been working on it. Grey muzzle looking like a beak... I was going for a ‘beard-like’ effect. Cool. Okay. Taking everything into consideration, here are the results... Ponyver2.png ...Is it me or does it remind anyone of ToonKritic's OC? How about this? Ponyver3.png Personally, I prefer the partly black mane one but what do you guys think? I like the one with the partly black mane, too. All My OCS Quote “The only time a lawyer can cry is when it's all over." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Odyssey 5,716 February 5, 2015 Share February 5, 2015 Thought I'll may help with the mane. If you're concerned with your Pony OC being similar to Toon Critic's black and red pony, then I'd suggest you'd modify the mane a little more. I'd recommend making your pony OC's mane and tail a darker red with white streaks instead of black, although don't go too crazy with the white streaks. The rest of the pony looks good so far, however. It's all up to you whether you want to modify the mane or not. I think it looks better with a black and red mane and tail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DormantAccount 308 February 5, 2015 Share February 5, 2015 I'm not familiar with the oc you're referring to. I think it looks great except I'd put back the old mane and tail coloration. The red is a bit too much red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drystan 36 February 5, 2015 Share February 5, 2015 I personally dont like the colors at all. I prefer the sort of basic colors, for example white / grey body with darkish colored hair, it works better than really bright colors imo, if you are going to make his skin red then have dark hair I would suggest. Legion Gaming http://www.legiongc.enjin.com/ Check out our Recruitment video here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kW0F6nIT0xE.Apply on the site if interested! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordSwinton 759 February 5, 2015 Share February 5, 2015 The pony has a bit too much red in it it's too strong. Red and black is a tad bit overused but if you like it it's fine. The shaggy hooves look a bit out of place. Click here to boop that snoot, or here to request boops from Felix! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RandomSelect 36 February 5, 2015 Author Share February 5, 2015 (edited) I'm not familiar with the oc you're referring to. I think it looks great except I'd put back the old mane and tail coloration. The red is a bit too much red. ToonKritic looks like this... http://www.deviantart.com/art/ToonKritic-474338544 Never thought I'd have a topic with this much replies. Thanks you guys. I've made some improvements here and there. Here's the red, like I previously decided... No? How about some blue? No? How about some shades of grey? *Looks around* What? Edited February 5, 2015 by RandomSelect I'm your friendly neighbourhood voice actor and singer! My Youtube Channel: Brian Random Latest Videos: Anthropology / Character Voice Reel 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyzecat 350 February 5, 2015 Share February 5, 2015 (edited) I like that light blue one. The other blue is too saturated, and I don't particularly like the red coat coloration. Edited February 5, 2015 by Wyzecat Semper ubi sub ubi Wyzecat supra omnia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Valkyrie 525 February 6, 2015 Share February 6, 2015 If i was on your place i would go wit frst grey one he have thet nice shade and black/white hair is sweet wit grey bodyOnli one wit who i would go wit is second blu one.He have too strong blu color My oc: Awilix Blair Jacqueline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DormantAccount 308 February 6, 2015 Share February 6, 2015 I think the red looks great now. You should get it done in one of the request shops so it looks a bit better than the pony maker. The style and color are good as they are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RandomSelect 36 February 8, 2015 Author Share February 8, 2015 Hiya folks. I’m happy to say that I made my decision... Thanks for the help guys. Now, to look around for some further help, make some emotions, better human OCs and emotions for this guy. I'm your friendly neighbourhood voice actor and singer! My Youtube Channel: Brian Random Latest Videos: Anthropology / Character Voice Reel 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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