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Critique wanted - oc color and design


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I was wondering if I could get some feedback on the color scheme and design of my OC, Pantone Vector. Here is the short bio I wrote for him, which I don't want to make huge changes to unless need be. Also, here is the link to the Tumblr. Thanks!

Hello, my name is Pantone Vector. I am a professional graphic designer living in the suburbs of Canterlot. I'm always looking for a job and love freelance work as much as I do my friends and the city.

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  • 3 weeks later...

This OC sounds really great! The only few things that struck out to me was his coat color. Maybe make the blue a little lighter and less saturated to even out the yellow. And maybe change his cutie mark up a little to correspond with his loving and hardworking personality

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I think the colour scheme is very good! :D The only thing I would say about it is the out line is are a bit wobbly.You could try and vector it or use a base.Also if you are trying do do show-style I suggest outlining it in a darker shade of what it's outlining it. But it does look very good!

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Your OC sounds pretty good.  I don't know if that's just your style but you colored the eyes strangely. It's not bad but you left white between the black pupil and white outside, and colored the white of the eye that people usually leave blank.  If this is just how you color than I apologize, it was just a bit strange.  Since your character does freelance work, I would tweak the cutie mark a bit to match that sort of thing... maybe a telephone, to symbolize people calling him for help? :)

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