gaming Feedback for my gaming videos?

[Damonater 70]

*Sigh* I know what you're thinking... He's just looking for views isn't he? Well, my answer is a no and a yes. No being I want mainly feedback from the quality of the video. And yes being a few views would be nice.... But I am NOT expecting like 100 views or anything haha.

 

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=nsp45W3iFj4 1st video

 

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=q9Yh810XNPI 2nd video

 

Thank you for any kind of feedback! You are awesome for doing so! /)

[Adorkable 2,737]

Hey! How's it going? Just a few little things here and there I noticed. Maybe considering an intro? The name of the game with a little history before you begin playing, that's how some professional YouTubers do it. Also, I seen in the description of the first video: "I am really bad at doing this." You may want to change that a little, it just kind of seems like you're putting yourself down by writing that, and some people don't really want to watch someone who puts their self down like that so quickly. Just a thought or two, hope it helps.