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adventure The 30th Tiger, an alternate timeline World War II fanfic. Criticism needed.

yisetab28

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  1. 1. Are the character well designed?

    • Yes, keep them that way
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    • No, they need some changes
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  2. 2. What do you think of the events?

    • They are nice, keep going
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    • They happen too fast, maybe slow down the pace a little bit
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    • They're not good, you should change some things in how they happen
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    • They're awful, change the plot entirely
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yisetab28

yisetab28 89

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So, my fanfic has been going on a little bit longer, and now it's published and chapter 2 is on its way. Are there any things to change? Did I write this right?  Leave the criticism in the comments in Fimfiction or directly here on the thread.

 

Story link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/256918/the-30th-tiger

Edited by Blitzkrieg

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