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dark Princess Twilight Sparkle's Dark Secret [Part Two]


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Rainbow Dash had entered her home and started writing a letter to Princess Luna. She wrote.

 

' Dear Princess Luna,

 Twilight had an outburst today, Its either stress of royal duties. Or there is something up. I dont know what has gotten into her. he started to use her own hoofs to drink some water. Which she uses magic normally. I'm quite scared of Twilight. She is never this mad. Me, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie need your help.

 

Sincerely 

Rainbow Dash - Element Of Loyalty. '

 

After rainbow Dash had written the letter, she flew back to the castle where she asked spike to send the letter to Princess Luna. Spike does as requested and uses his flames to send the letter. RainbowDash talks to Spike about why Twilight gets mad to see if there is any reason for this outburst.

 

Rainbow Dash: "Hey Spike, Do you know some reasons for why Twilight gets mad. She had a outburst today and we need your help"

 

Spike: "I don't know Twilight usually gets mad because of her not getting space, her things being misplaced and in general in a bad mood. Thats all i know of"

 

Rainbow Dash: "Thanks for the help Spike"

 

As Rainbow replied she walked to the throne room to nopony in sight but just Twilight cleaning a royal sword with her cutiemark as the emblem. Quietly Rainbow Dash had gone to the balcony and sat there. Twilight still full of anger has placed the sword back in its place with her discoloured magic. Rainbow Dash notices the change in Twilight's magic and asks.

 

Rainbow Dash: "Twilight??....hy is your magic no longer purple. Your magic has gone grey. Whats going on with you Twilight"

 

Twilight: "Nothing is going on, its just the light. It changes the colour of one's magic. Ohh and one thing. Tell the others i'm going to The Crystal Empire then the south of the empire for a few things."

 

Rainbow Dash: "Ok, But Twilight. You've changed so suddenly. Are you alright. Why did you say those things back there."

 

Twilight: "Because all of you are using me for your selfish gain. No one liked me in canterlot. They pretended to like me because i lived in the Canterlot Castle. Its the same here. Your using me for your selfish and pitious gain."

 

As twilight finished that she canceled Rainbow Dash out and had walked to her Quarters to pack her things. While Twilight does her business, Rainbow Dash felt the darkness in her. RD felt sad because she would never of thought that Twilight considered her and her friends as fake. 

 

Twilight continued to back her things and said to Spike.

 

 

Twilight: "Spike, i want you to be in charge while i go do something in the Crystal Empire. I want all of them out of my castle and don't let anypony inside except yourself. Advise the guards that if Fluttershy, Rarity. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie try to come in. Have them noted that there never allowed to enter the castle ever again by my order."

 

Spike: "Ok Twilight. But you seem a little off."

 

Twilight had left Spike with the orders and flew to the crystal empire with her bag on her back. It took Twilight a few hours but she got there just in time. Twilight went to the Crystal Castle located in the centre of The Crystal Empire and had went inside. Twilight walked through the corridors and had found Shining Armour. Twilight asked.

 

Twilight: "Hello brother. Can i stay at your residence tonight. Sorry there wasn't a warning before coming here. I just needed time away from everything."

 

Shining Armour: "No problem Twily. You can have the Second Main Bedroom. How long will you be staying here for."

 

Twilight: "A few days the most. That is all i ask of you my brother"

 

Shining Armour: "Twilight, Are you ok. You seem a little off."

 

Twilight: "Yes im fine Big Brother. Can you lead me to my quaters to rest for a while"

 

Shining Armour: "Sure sister"

 

Shining Armour lead twilight to her room where Twilight said her fair doos. Twilight had laid on her bed and had written up a plan of action to try and find the missing horn of Sombras. Twilight finished her planning with a few steps and had hit the hay for the night. Cautious Twilight had locked the door before she even closed an eye. To prevent her plans being seen and her items that have magical properties being stolen from under her grasp. Including the book that Sombra is sealed inside.

 

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That is all for now for the part two. I hope you enjoy this part. If you have any suggestions. Please submit them in the comments below.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


·٠•●♥ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♥●•٠·˙˜”*°•.   All Light Dies   ·٠•●♥ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♥●•٠·˙˜”*°•.


·٠•●♥ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♥●•٠·˙˜”*°•.   But One's Darkness·   ٠•●♥ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♥●•٠·˙˜”*°•.


·٠•●♥ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♥●•٠·˙˜”*°•.   Can Become One's Light    ·٠•●♥ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♥●•٠·˙˜”*°•.

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My only suggestion is to continue this series, I really like your writing, it gets the reader intrigued with how it is going. Using the Second most unsuspecting pony to turn dark, it makes the reader want more, and i am here to support in any way i can with this :)


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