dark Princess Twilight's Dark Secret [Part Four]

[Burning Dusk 46]

Thanks to TwilightFan28. I would not have continued this fanfic.

 

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(Its getting fancy now)

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Me and King SOmbra kept on flying through equestria to the forbidden south. We had used our somberfied forms non stop till we got to Queen Chrysalis's kingdom in the southwest of equestria. As i flew, i noticed myself losing consciousness. I had gone into my pony form and i fell to the ground at a significant rate. I used a spell before hoof (Hand) to cover my appearance, just in case if it was any ponies doing.

 

In my subconscious

 

Luna: "Twilight!!, are you ok. Where are you"

 

Twilight: *I get Irritated* "Im somewhere ok. I am having time off ok. I've been nothing but stressed"

 

Celestia comes into my subconscious. She looks at me with suspicion. Id ignore that and i continue as normal.

 

Celestia: "Hello Twilight, So you are stressed. Well, we need you. There is another problem in the Crystal Empire. It's turned dark again. We suspect Sombra is back and in full force".

 

As soon Celestia had suspected Sombra, my eyes widen. Id try to force myself not to have a reaction.

 

Twilight: "Well, i'll be there in a few days. I will have to fly back. I apologise for not being there to help you like i always do"

 

Celestia: "Twilight. Is there something wrong. You seem off. According to your friends, you've locked them out of the castle. Also spike is concerned".

 

Twilight: "IM FINE FOR BUCKING SAKE!!!"

 

Twilight had used a spell to get herself out of her subconscious and had woken up from her coma like state. Sombra was on his knees holding my back and head. He looked shocked and a little scared, like he lost his life. 

 

Sombra: "Twilight, are you ok. You just collapsed mid air."

 

Twilight "Yes sombra, i'm ok. Luna did a spell to make me pass out so she could talk. Plus. What have you done to the Crystal Empire"

 

Sombra: "I used a spell to absorb the magic of the land and give it to me. A advanced dark spell, it will make the Crystal Empire dark. But ohh well."

 

Twilight: "Celestia and Luna suspect you're alive."

 

Sombra: "Well, i dont care. Lets just continue with our plan"

 

Me and Sombra go into our shadow forms and we get to the Changeling Empire. We are slightly tired and frustrated when we get to the main guard of the empire. We go into our pony forms, when the guard sees sombra, he gets scared.

 

The Changeling Guard: "Hello Sombra. What are you of need"

 

Sombra: "I am of need of the Queen. We have a plan that will hopefully work"

 

The Changeling guard nods and a guard guides us both to the castle. The castle was black and green, it gave me chills down my spine on how elegant but evil it was, i liked it. We go into the castle and we get to a door, the changeling guards open the door with there horn. I thought about why it was needed to be this secure. 

 

We get into the room, where our plans will be put into action. The taking over of equestria is half way there. We just need Queen Chrysalis to be with us, and Princess Luna. If she wants to have revenge. But i guess we'll have to find out if Luna has still got the corruption.

 

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[twilightfan28 52]

These fanfics are getting better by the part, i really like what you have done with twilight, she has darkness within her that i feel she cannot control. But as it goes on, i think it'll be much clearer, and i hope to see and cant wait to read a fifth part .

[MLPFanPony 380]

Ima new fan with your fictions!!!

There really interesting and full of suspision

Can't wait till Part 5^^

[Burning Dusk 46]

 

Ima new fan with your fictions!!!

There really interesting and full of suspision

Can't wait till Part 5^^

 

 

 

Im glad you enjoy the fanfiction. Tomorrow i will release a two parter. Due to TwilightFan28 enjoying it so much. Im glad that you have taken your time to read my fanfic. I will hope that you will enjoy part 5 and 6.