visual art Looking for feedback

[Wicked Funky 2,955]

So I'd just like some feedback Before I start with the line art and coloring on this sketch.

 

I haven't really been training on human anotomy all too much so I guess it's about time

 

By the way, The character is Nidalee from League of legends.

 

I did a version with a bit of color just to kind of make it a bit more clear ^^

 

 

[Guest]

Dang, you must be talented! I love it! 

[Wicked Funky 2,955]

Malloy, on 24 Aug 2015 - 12:00 AM, said:

Dang, you must be talented! I love it! 

Thanks ^^ Nice to that you like it ^^

[Mr Unknown 132]

Wow, that looks pretty good! Way better than anything I could draw, for sure XD

I do have some criticism, though, and I hope you can use it to make it even better! 

 

1. I think the nose is a little too small, maybe it's supposed to look that way, but it looks a little off to me...

2. When it comes to the hand holding the spear, I think you made a mistake with the layering. Wouldn't the spear go in front of the bottom of the hand, so we'd see the lines of the spear instead of the bottom of the hand? 

3. The pinkie of the hand holding the spear looks detached from the rest of the hand.

 

I'm not trying to be hurtful or anything, but you wanted feedback, so I thought you'd like to know what you can improve upon with the drawing