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"Hmm, you are a a very interesting unicorn you know? I sense chaos magic in you, similar to the one Discord have. Are you his son? You apperar however not to be able to acces it all, it seems to be limited by your lack in knowlege upon how to use it. Anyway, name's Missklang. Glad to meet you! I have urgent news for the princess Twilight, I sence her presence near..."

No Mr, I am not his son, merely his student, also, do you mind if I follow you to Twilight? You seem really cool, also, I can't believe I'm talking to a real life, living draconquus, that's yellow, AND red, oh my gosh oh my gosh, we should totally hangout sometimes, do you know magic? Because I know magic...

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"If I know chaos magic?"

 

Smiled Missklang as his head detached from his head transforming into a baloon. The baloon had eyes and a mouth and flew a few steps away, freaking out a yellow unicorn with an orange mane and blue eyes who walked out of the bakery. It then slowly flew back to Missklang and popped on his neck, bringing back the head as if it was inside it the whole time.

 

"I spent years studying it. I will be more than happy to share my knowlege, espetialy with someone with that kind of magic. If you don't mind, I will study you in the process. It could help me figuring out how Discord tics (clockwork referrence). I have many theories on his subject. Sure you can follow me to Twilight, do you know were she is?"

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 Sure you can follow me to Twilight, do you know were she is?"

Umm believe she's just right inside Sugarcube Corner, I think. But wait, how did you do that? I mean, I know a few Chaotic spells, but that's about it, if I do say for my self the most advanced spell I can cast is a mutation transformation spell, but even that fired out the window and went SOMEWHERE, I sure hope any pony didn't get hurt from that beam, wherever it went...

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Umm believe she's just right inside Sugarcube Corner, I think. But wait, how did you do that? I mean, I know a few Chaotic spells, but that's about it, if I do say for my self the most advanced spell I can cast is a mutation transformation spell, but even that fired out the window and went SOMEWHERE, I sure hope any pony didn't get hurt from that beam, wherever it went...

 

"I sure hope it too. Could do some damage if it hitted somepony. Ah the balloon thingy? It's realy quite simple. Do you know the basic portal chaos spell? The one with separate exits? It's just that. I create a portal right through my neck, so I can in some sort detach my head by moving around the second exit of the portal while the blood flow isn't interrupted. It's like I stick my head through a portal which other exit is moving. Then I create a simple illusion of a baloon around it, because a floating head on it's own is creepy, then I simply levitate around the other end of the portal, that's what moves it around. Then, for the esthetics, I approach the head back to it's position and simply pull it through the first portal. So it's easy, just dont let over the portal spell otherwise your head will be chopped down..."

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Façade put up his stuff, wondering how it the world the alicorn was going to manage his plan. "Eh, not my problem then." He then ask Fuchowa, "am I still needed here? Because I believe there is a train I need to catch." Façade pulled a sword out of his bag of tricks and decided to sharpen it up until he was needed. It was getting a little dull.

 

"Actual there is something very important I need you to do. Since I am forging the Elements of Disharmony, Twilight will no doubt be finding bearers of the Elements of Harmony. I need you to find out how far she has gotten in finding them. When you have finished you will report back to me in Canterlot." Fuchowa began to fly off but stopped. "and most importantly," he said to the grey Pegasus. "Do not engage."

 

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"Come," he said to the blue and grey Pegasus that was flying beside him, "we head to Canterlot." Fuchowa took off towards Canterlot without saying another word.

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"Actual there is something very important I need you to do. Since I am forging the Elements of Disharmony, Twilight will no doubt be finding bearers of the Elements of Harmony. I need you to find out how far she has gotten in finding them. When you have finished you will report back to me in Canterlot." Fuchowa began to fly off but stopped. "and most importantly," he said to the grey Pegasus. "Do not engage."   @SpikusFyre,   "Come," he said to the blue and grey Pegasus that was flying beside him, "we head to Canterlot." Fuchowa took off towards Canterlot without saying another word.
 

 

"That worked better than expected"

 

"No it certainly did-not! Don't you see that we are on the verge of cataclysm?"

 

"I see a certain lack of black alicorn"

 

"...Who is seeking the elements of DISharmony?"

 

Enzo furrowed his brow in thought. "The elements of disharmony... Now where have i heard of them before?" . He shook his head. "Eh, I'll learn about them when the Alicorn inevitably gives his damn monologue."

 

"Point is, we should do everything we can to thwart his plans."

 

Enzo nodded in slight agreement:He didn't know what he was getting into, but he learned from experience that pissing off others was a hell lot of fun. 

 

"We can start off by preventing that gray pegasus from fulfilling his mission"

 

The stag allowed a small grin to grace his features.

 

"Sounds good to me."

 

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The stag trotted up to the gray pegasus, thinking up ways to stall him.

 

"Yo, pegasus: Whatever your name is. You up for tea and chill?"

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"Come," he said to the blue and grey Pegasus that was flying beside him, "we head to Canterlot." Fuchowa took off towards Canterlot without saying another word.

"Here I was thinking I was the biggest jerkwad you'd ever see...He shook his head and shrugged following after the alicorn. {What the f*** are the Elements of Disharmony? I guess they're probably the opposite of the Elements of Harmony seeing as how the prefix 'dis" is in the title. So which one does that make me?... Cruelty definitely cruelty seeing as how I'm basically the opposite of kind. Ah s*** that means I actually have to deal with other ponies.}

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I create a portal right through my neck, so I can in some sort detach my head by moving around the second exit of the portal while the blood flow isn't interrupted. It's like I stick my head through a portal which other exit is moving. Then I create a simple illusion of a baloon around it, because a floating head on it's own is creepy, then I simply levitate around the other end of the portal, that's what moves it around. Then, for the esthetics, I approach the head back to it's position and simply pull it through the first portal. So it's easy, just dont let over the portal spell otherwise your head will be chopped down..."

Oh, you use portals too? I make dimensional rips but it drains my essence, SOOO much, I could probably make make a rip but would probably put my self into a coma for about a few hours, but hey, why not?

As Alpha focused his essence and concentrated all his chaotic power, and finally rips the dimensional plane, and puts his hoof through the portal.

He pulls out a sharp shiny blue sword, and told Missklang, See, I'm not really sure what dimension this came from but, this is made of two diamonds and a stick, I don't know how thats possible but, Uhhhggghh, I don't feel so well...

And then Alpha faints, and blacks out.....?

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Oh, you use portals too? I make dimensional rips but it drains my essence, SOOO much, I could probably make make a rip but would probably put my self into a coma for about a few hours, but hey, why not?

As Alpha focused his essence and concentrated all his chaotic power, and finally rips the dimensional plane, and puts his hoof through the portal.

He pulls out a sharp shiny blue sword, and told Missklang, See, I'm not really sure what dimension this came from but, this is made of two diamonds and a stick, I don't know how thats possible but, Uhhhggghh, I don't feel so well...

And then Alpha faints, and blacks out.....?

"Oooops! Catched ya!" 

 

Shouted Missklang, catching Alpha and the sword. He turned towards the bakery and saw Twilight looking at him. Realising that he was holding the sword, Missklang dropped it on the ground.

 

"I didn't kill him I swear! He just mindlessly opened a gap to a different universe! I just suggested a simple teleportation spell! And in the mean time, it was totaly not me who messed up the bakery if you were concerned. Ummm, this is ankward....ahem....uuuugh......erm....... fun?"

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Flamestreak was flying all over ponyville, he had been getting prepared for the wonderbolt academy for sometime now. He was actually surprised he got an invite, Considering how bad it went the last time he was there, Flame had been kicked out the first time, And for good reason he was mouthing off to the ponies there representing the wonderbolts. Constantly showing up late to drills, oversleeping, drinking, starting fights, just overall bad behavior. That Pony was a splitting image from flame now. He had decided to get his life back on track and became a better pony for it. The old Flamestreak was lazy, irresponsible, angry, and arrogant. The new Flame was active, reliable, content, and humbled. The flamestreak of old would have took the invite with a grain of salt and go drinking in celebration. Flamestreak now took this as a chance of redemption. A second chance to prove he belonged to be in a official wonderbolt uniform.

 

 

After awhile he had worked himself to the bone, Flame was exhausted he need to recharge. Flamestreak decided to go to sugarcube corner, Not because he wanted to eat but really to mingle with some of the other ponies and try to make a few friends in the process. Flame took towards sugarcube corner. He saw two ponies that stood out in particular one unicorn and.... a draconquus? Whatever not the weirdest thing he's seen. Flamestreak approached the two and began to speak. "Hello my name is flamestreak but you can call me flame3 as well. What are your names?" He said.

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"Hello my name is flamestreak but you can call me flame as well. What are your names?"

 

"Ow hello Flame!" Said Missklang turning his head at a 180° angle.

 

"My name is Missklang! And this pony that I totaly dind't kill at all is my friend Alpha. Well, you came just in time! Fun things are happening lately, like an evil alicorn plotting to murderise Twilight. Trivial routine and stuff."

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Soon enough Fuchowa reached Canterlot. He used his ability to track disharmonic entity he soon found the location of another Element of Disharmony.

 

@@Pripyat Pony,

 

Fuchowa landed outside a small building in Canterlot. He could sense Dark Magic inside. Without waiting for the blue and grey Pegasus he burst inside. He soon found himself facing a unicorn, "Hello there," he said to the unicorn, "how would you like to help me take over Equestria?"

 

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@, @@Missklang, @,

 

As Twilight waited for the yellow pony to answer her she spied a group of ponies in the distance, well two ponies and a  draconquus. She recognised one of them as her old friend Alpha. She turned to the yellow pony, "I'm sorry but could you excuse me for a minute?" Twilight left the pony and walked over to Alpha. "Alpha," she said happily, "Alpha it's me Twilight. How have you been?" she looked at the pony and draconquus standing with him. "And are these friends of yours?"

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"Alpha it's me Twilight. How have you been?" And are these friends of yours?"
 

 

"Why yes indeed! We are his friends! I'm Missklang and this is Flamestreak." Said Missklang, twisting his head back to it former place.

 

"It appears however that Alpha is broken. I don't now how to fix ponies. I'm not a vet. But you should have a look. I had great news! We should make a huge party! More people is coming! Less then ten minutes ago I met a friedly black Alicorn named Fuchowa. I was in that castle over there in the forest, minding my own buisness, looking for some flowers and some grass, then I saw him coming inside and making friends with two gray pegasus. He will be joining us later." 

 

He rubbed his head

 

"Ah, and I almost forgot, he was kinda planning to kill you and the other princesses too. But it's ok, he can still be invited. I should warn you however. He seems a bit shy as he didn't wanted me talking to him at all, but he still made new friends! Amazing right?"

 

His tail began wobbling around in joy, as he gazed with a happy smile on the princess.

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His tail began wobbling around in joy, as he gazed with a happy smile on the princess.

 

 

 

 

As Alpha groggily opened his eyes and moaned, he said in a confused tone W-what happened? Missklang, why are you smiling like that? Also Twili- He realized that he's talking to the princess and remembered he forgot to write her a letter about the studies of magic last week, but he also realized he blacked out, because of the portal which took almost all of his energy, and he looks like a bucking mess, he quickly fixes his face and mane, and said Twilight, hello, how can I help you? My studies with Discord are going great, if your wondering. Also who are you?

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As Alpha awaited their replies, he thought to him self   Man, I have to stop portal rippling in public, maybe I'll be better if i got some more practice...

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@@Dapper Charmer, Jinx looked up from, her book with mild surprise at the alicorn stallion. "I would like that very much," she said. "I have often desired to take over the rule of Equestria; if I could only gain access to the library within the castle, perhaps then I might gain my heart's desire."


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"Princess twilight!" Flame said he gave a bow directed at the princess and then got back up. "Princess what are you doing here? Shouldn't you have royal duties to attend back in canterlot?" He said. After getting out the initial shock of seeing the princess in person he realized she had asked him a question. "Yes I do know him we just met, and as missklang said I'm Flamestreak. Is there anything you need princess?" He asked

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"Princess twilight!" Flame said he gave a bow directed at the princess and then got back up. "Princess what are you doing here? Shouldn't you have royal duties to attend back in canterlot?" He said. After getting out the initial shock of seeing the princess in person he realized she had asked him a question. "Yes I do know him we just met, and as missklang said I'm Flamestreak. Is there anything you need princess?" He asked

Yea Princess, what brings you here today? Please tell me your not here because I forgot to send you a letter about magic, I swear, I learned, I forgot to send it, please Princess, don't end my studies...

Alpha quickly thought of a letter, and what he should write, Umm, let's see, I could write about how chaos magic uses a ponies essence, or that I made new friends, or that I learned the new portal trick Missklang taught me, or... He quickly thought, as sweat beads down his mane.

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Yea Princess, what brings you here today? Please tell me your not here because I forgot to send you a letter about magic, I swear, I learned, I forgot to send it, please Princess, don't end my studies... Umm, let's see, I could write about how chaos magic uses a ponies essence, or that I made new friends, or that I learned the new portal trick Missklang taught me, or...
 

 

"Aw Twilight!" said Missklang with accusitives notes in his voice while he began patting Alpha's head

 

"Don't tell me that you did't say to him that it's ok not to write a report every week! Now, now. We don't wan't another "lesson zero " insident do we? Espetialy with his type of magic. Not that I'm against though, could be realy fun but we realy don't have the time right now..."

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@@Dapper Charmer, Jinx looked up from, her book with mild surprise at the alicorn stallion. "I would like that very much," she said. "I have often desired to take over the rule of Equestria; if I could only gain access to the library within the castle, perhaps then I might gain my heart's desire."

 

Fuchowa smiled wickedly at the unicorn, "then it is settled. You help me take over Equestria and the library and all its contents will be yours." Fuchowa turned to exit the building, "come," he said to the unicorn, "there is much that needs to be done."

 

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Twilight smiled, she remembered when she was in a similar situation, "do no fret," she said to Alpha, "my presence here has nothing to do with your letters to me." Twilights smile faded, "however the matter that brings me here is troubling. An old enemy of Equestria has returned. He is a Dark Alicorn Prince from the east known as Fuchowa. He plans to form the Elements of Disharmony and rule Equestria. As Princess it is my duty to protect Equestria so I to have set out to find the Elements of Harmony." as Twilight said those words she sensed something in each of the three ponies she was talking to. She didn't know what it was but strangely it was similar to something she sensed in her old friends. "In fact," she said to Alpha, Flamestreak and Missklang, "maybe you can help me."

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Spikus landed behind the alicorn shortly after he began talking to the unicorn. {Oh good another pony this is going to be just fan-tucking-fastic! She doesn't seem nearly as bad as the last guy though. Not that I care really. It's not like I'm really going to actually socialize with any of them. I couldn't give a f*** what they think about me. I'm just here for the ride.}


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@@Dapper Charmer, Pausing only to collect a few items and some of her more important spellbooks, Jinx followed Fuchowa out of her house. She locked the door and turned to face him, noting the pegasus stallion accompanying him. "Are there more ponies in this?" she asked, a smile curving her face.


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"(sarcasm) Gee what do you think it's not like I'm standing right behind him or anything! (/sarcasm)" He rolled his eyes at the question posed by the unicorn. "Let me guess dark magic?" He raised his eyebrow as he asked the question almost as if he already knew what to expect.


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Façade noticed the two ponies before him, and then gasped. "I do think some tea would be nice, particularly while I have some setting up to do. Do you prefer black or oolong?" Motioning to a not quite so broken table near the end of the throne room. Façade pulled out a a table clothed and laid it over the table, he then proceeded to make tea.

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@@Pripyat Pony, @@SpikusFyre,

 

Fuchowa looked at the unicorn, "Ignore the Pegasus. Yes there are indeed more ponies. Three to be exact. And each represents a different Element of Disharmony. You've already met Cruelty." he said motioning to the Pegasus. He turned back to the Unicorn. "and you my dear are the Element of Dark Magic, your command will be second only to me." He looked off towards the Everfree, "Now anymore Questions?"

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@@Dapper Charmer, @@SpikusFyre, Jinx ignored the pegasus, too. She turned to the alicorn, instead. "None at this time," she replied. "My name is Jinx, and as you might already know, I am a dark mage. I have achieved much in my life, but there is always more to strive for, I believe. And one of those would be the rule of Equestria."


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