Rainbow dash sketch

[Wicked Funky 2,956]

So, heres a Rainbow dash sketch. I don't like it...

 

I just lost interest in it, But I felt like sharing it anyway. It was meant to just be some figure drawing practice but turned more and more into an actual drawing.

 

So, Here it is

 

 

 

[green 331]

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Edited December 9, 2015 by green

[Mothra 776]

The hooves remind me of Franky's arms from one piece

 

http://www.onepiecegold.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/franky___one_piece_by_xxjo_11xx-d4bvi0l.png

[Wicked Funky 2,956]

Flame Flare, on 30 Oct 2015 - 12:38 AM, said:

Looks like she's been working out! I still really like it though, the coloring you did on the mane looks really good.

 

Thank  you very much! If you mean the legs, It was my attempt at foreshortening, Maybe it would have looked okay if I got to shadowing her

 

 

Battra, on 30 Oct 2015 - 12:41 AM, said:

The hooves remind me of Franky's arms from one piece

 

http://www.onepiecegold.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/franky___one_piece_by_xxjo_11xx-d4bvi0l.png

 

Heh, It was an attempt at foreshortening, Maybe it would have looked good if I got to shadowing

[PROJECT: Simon 3,955]

You may not like it, but I love it ^3^

[Wicked Funky 2,956]

PROJECT: Simon, on 30 Oct 2015 - 12:46 AM, said:

You may not like it, but I love it ^3^

 

Well it's nice to hear someone can find some enjoyment in it

[Kenshiro 13,499]

I think hooves needs to be smaller but still its a very good drawing '''

[IcefireInfinite 227]

Really cool drawing and style. Although, her tail isn't colored in, but that was probably from just getting tired of drawing. (I've felt that way before)

Even still, I love the details you put into her wings and the subtle highlights in her hair along with that slight shadowing. No doubt this would be one awesome drawing if you ever decide to finish it.

 

Oh, and about the way you did your foreshortening; she doesn't look quite right not just because of her slightly bulky legs, but because of the way she is angled. To the viewer it looks like she is shown like how you would normally see her standing straight up, but with bulky legs. What you want to do is get her upper body (the parts of her above the legs) to look slanted away from the viewer like she is taller and we are getting that view of her from a lower perspective. This, I believe, is what the main problem is (just her legs are shown with that shorter perspective, but not the rest of her body) and if you figure out how to correct her positioning, using my terribly confusing explanation, it should help solve your foreshortening problem and turn this into one epic drawing.

Edited October 31, 2015 by IcefireInfinite