critique wanted Please help..

[AquaMinty101 59]

 

These are a couple of my OCs and I was wondering if they all the colors looked well together. For the stallion, I forgot to add his wings, as he is a pegusus. The alicorn is Twilights Daughter. The twins with opposite colors are Pinkie Pies daughters.

The curly haired one is Raritys daughter. The others will be in a separate post. But please tell me what you think of the colors.

[AquaMinty101 59]

This pony will end up as Fluttershys Daughter.. With an older sister as opposite colors.

This pony will be Fluttershys Husband.

This pony is Derpys Daughter (oldest)

Pony with out parents (it will prob. End up being an OC I make up or with my other male OC )

Does everything on it look good? Could anything be better?? Again, I have a few more but they aren't on this forum at all where I can save them to my tablet cuz I made them yesterday.

[BlueBrony 388]

1st stallion: general color scheme works for me, but I think it is a little too "loud". It may look better if the hair had more muted shades of red and blue

 

twins: the first one is not easy on the eyes- it is hard to pull off a pony whose coat color is darker than its mane color. I would go with a lighter shade of pink (closer to pinkie)

the second one works better, but the pink hooves don't really work for me. I would also go with more pastel shades of the colors

 

Twilight's Daughter: I think this would work better if the coat color was a little lighter, or if the mane colors were more muted

 

Rarity's Daughter: The colors on this one works. The red eyes come on a little strong, maybe magenta would look better? I'm not sure, red eyes aren't necessarily bad.

 

General comment: Having striking contrast can help your character stand out, but ponies tend to look better if they have some pastel colors in them

[BlueBrony 388]

At lot of my comments from part one apply here as well, so I will be more brief:

 

Fluttershy's Daughter: I would go with a lighter coat color. pastels.

 

Fluttershy's Husband: Too bright- I would darken the yellow hair and/or lighten the coat

 

Derpy's Daughter (I thought that was Dinky ): colors are fine, but maybe make something a little grayer?

 

Tricked out orphan pony: Kind of a wild color scheme, but it also kinda works (reminds me of Vinyl Scratch). I can't put my finger on it specifically: maybe make his coat off-white?

[scribblepatch 13]

I'm going to be honest, the first two ponies don't have a very good color palette. I'd personally change Fluttershys daughter color palette to a much lighter color, since Fluttershys is basically pale and light pink. For her husband, the colors don't really... contrast? I don't know how to explain it, aahh...

But I think the other two ponies are good!

[AquaMinty101 59]

I'm going to be honest, the first two ponies don't have a very good color palette. I'd personally change Fluttershys daughter color palette to a much lighter color, since Fluttershys is basically pale and light pink. For her husband, the colors don't really... contrast? I don't know how to explain it, aahh...

But I think the other two ponies are good!

*agresivly scribbles punnet squares*

1st stallion: general color scheme works for me, but I think it is a little too "loud". It may look better if the hair had more muted shades of red and blue

 

twins: the first one is not easy on the eyes- it is hard to pull off a pony whose coat color is darker than its mane color. I would go with a lighter shade of pink (closer to pinkie)

the second one works better, but the pink hooves don't really work for me. I would also go with more pastel shades of the colors

 

Twilight's Daughter: I think this would work better if the coat color was a little lighter, or if the mane colors were more muted

 

Rarity's Daughter: The colors on this one works. The red eyes come on a little strong, maybe magenta would look better? I'm not sure, red eyes aren't necessarily bad.

 

General comment: Having striking contrast can help your character stand out, but ponies tend to look better if they have some pastel colors in them

I agree in a way, but also *agressivly does Punnent Squares*

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Hi @AquaMinty101,

 

Just letting you know that I merged your 2/4 thread with this one to be more organized.