Fanfic -> "Rewrite"

[Ruudo Burei 42]

I've uploaded both the Preface and Entry #1 today. The Preface should explain what I'm doing...kind of...So, I recommend reading that first.

I hope my format isn't too confusing, ^^;

I don't mind if you comment or give constructive criticism in either DeviantArt, FaceBook, or here...although I'm not sure how much criticism can be made for an introductory..."chapter". I suppose my writing format or something can be criticized.

 

If I get around with trying to draw, then I can show you what the appearing OC/s look/s like.

 

I hope ya'll can enjoy the first couples of entries that aren't rewrites just yet but are an introduction to the OC I'll be using. Eventually, I'll hit episode 3 and switch perspectives and such between him and the actual focal character(s) of the episode; but, for now, introduction/"back-story" for three "chapters"/"episodes".

 

DeviantArt: http://shin-ak1ra-sama.deviantart.com/gallery/60214046/MLP-FiM-Rewrite

FaceBook: https://www.facebook.com/groups/877549315713402/files/

Oh, right. I made a FaceBook version, because my friend wasn't able to view it in DeviantArt, for some reason. So, that's a thing, I guess...

Edited September 13, 2016 by Ruudo Burei

[Ruudo Burei 42]

Okay, I got a bunch of help from a Pegasister who's very experienced in writing.

Entry #2 is up ^^/

I hope you'll enjoy it!

 

DeviantArt: http://shin-ak1ra-sama.deviantart.com/art/MLP-FiM-Re-2-Fine-Feathered-Friends-634155151

FaceBook: https://www.facebook.com/groups/877549315713402/files/

 

Next thing to do is correct the mistakes in #1, then I'll work on #3. ^^

Edited September 12, 2016 by Ruudo Burei