critique wanted Happyhardcore WIP

[Vinyl Scratch. 605]

I was in the mood to make some Happy Hardcore so I did a Happy Hardcore; still a serious work in progress; more or less just wanna show off what I have so far

https://clyp.it/ewbcoxhb

[Driz 1,552]

Oh wow... To be honest, I had no idea this style existed. But I can totally get into it!

Great job! Can't wait to see the completed work. 

[Shadow Beam 1,180]

'Critique wanted' prefix has been added according to the sub-section's function.

Have a lovely day!

[Vinyl Scratch. 605]

11 hours ago, Driz said:

Oh wow... To be honest, I had no idea this style existed. But I can totally get into it!

Great job! Can't wait to see the completed work. 

Thanks It's not as well known as it was in the early 2000's but it's still around It's tonnes of fun to make

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

Ok. 

It's an ok start. There's too much gating, even if it's soft gating. Make sure not to flood your piece with so much gating because it can also interfere with your percussion. That first line staled out quickly. You may want to change the pattern of those notes. EDM is a genre where staling is very vulnerable, and subgenres make no difference.