no critique The Race

[Flying Pencil 3,024]

 

 

 

 

Hello their every creature, looks like Rainbow and Fireball are having a "friendly" race. The Element of Loyalty versus the Element of Treachery, who's going to win?

 

[Flying Pencil 3,024]

Thanks mate, have a nice day

[Splashee 28,564]

You have a really cool future ahead of you in art, @Elements of Chaos

This one has a lot of good stuff in it, yet being very simple. Just the color of the sky is very good! Their expression and poses, and angles they are flying!

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@Elements of Chaos

Okay, okay... I don't want to be this person...

But it's "Hello there." Not "Hello their."

Their is a possessive word, used in a sentence like "You trashed their own house!"

Ugh...

My grammar police instincts are too strong to resist. 

[Flying Pencil 3,024]

@Emerald Heart sorry, I kinda have trouble between there and their. I know that 'there' can be use a location like 'over there'. But their is a different story. But thank you for notifying me about it, I'll keep a close eye on my their and there. Yet again, I probably use there wrong again.

[Splashee 28,564]

1 hour ago, Elements of Chaos said:

@Emerald Heart sorry, I kinda have trouble between there and their. I know that 'there' can be use a location like 'over there'. But their is a different story. But thank you for notifying me about it, I'll keep a close eye on my their and there. Yet again, I probably use there wrong again.

I learned my English grammar on a forum similar to this one. I liked it better than learning in school, heh