critique wanted Xada's newest pony art

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I decided to draw my secondary OC named Harmonious Percussion with his helmet by his side. After his place was secured in a luxurious fortress, so he was curious about what state old forts in Anocratic empire are.
Bye the way, my full art list is on my website, which is linked on my profile.

Edited January 14 by Xada

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Adoptive gootraxian parents with pony foals, i drew in GIMP. They are transformed humans who immigrated to Anocratic empire and were integrated into the pony society.

 

Edited January 14 by Xada

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Dumping mutagenic goo into the lake.

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Somewhere in Anocratic empire, a pony is chatting away with a gootraxian while they walk slowly. A kirin catches up to them while in a rush, she has to wait for them to move away from the door, so she can buy food from the distribution center.

 

 

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Kirinified Littlepip rescuing a transformed human, after they were hit by mutagenic missiles, during a nuclear/chemical exchange.

i illustrated my three unicorn astronauts, cornered fighting an insectoid queen. Next to an insectoid infested settlement on planet Acrab. See full dispatch here: https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1712840

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Anocratic empire's recruitment poster for humans.

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I see you're looking for criticism, all I can say for your work is make sure your characters stand out from the background. As for other stuff you're still learning and so am I so I can't really say. 

 

Your art otherwise is really awesome keep it up 

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"Silence brands" meme.

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Bat-pony delivering packages.