Two paths of fate

[Finesthour 7,287]

This is what I wrote about the girl I was madly in love with. Yes, it is the one who crushed my heart into pieces.

 

Seeing as we have no general writing thread, might as well put it here.

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That horrible feeling growing at the back of my mind.

 

The feeling that you never want to feel, but it creeps back to you as a bug in the night, with you never seeing it coming.

 

As was the reason for my troubles came my way.

 

The problem showed its ugly head in 7th grade, slowly overtaking my sense of mind without me taking notice.

 

Two years later, I discover I was overtaken in the feeling, knowing that there were only two roads out of this feeling.

 

The left road led to despair and loneliness, while the other clear path led to happiness and life.

 

But, as the world works, you soon realize that the path to the right is hazy and difficult to pass, while the route on the left was clear while dark, but you know that is the easier path.

 

But, as stubborn teenager, I venture to the path on the right.

 

Soon I realize that the path on the right collided with the left, mixing the two feelings together.

 

Soon realizing that you could realize one without the other. Intertwining the two paths, you try to venture on, gaining in difficulty as time passes.

 

Soon the path on the right grows on you, and you do not way to venture away.

 

But as you try, you realize the pain growing in your stomach.

 

A feeling worse than pain, worse than most things.

 

With pain, you know what had happened to you, but with uncertainty, you have no clue what had happened or what will.

 

Knowing very well that the path's will soon come together again, you venture on.

 

Than as you go, you discover you have dug yourself a hole of your own feelings.

 

As we keep speaking, I fall deeper and deeper in the hole of love, and you know this very well, as the feeling of uncertainty returns once again.

 

Not knowing what will happen from the pit you have put yourself in, you keep going.

 

Forever strong, Forever venturing, making sure to keeping to the path on the right, the path I hope we will experience not alone, but together.

Edited December 13, 2011 by FinestHour

[Lady Rarity Pony 4,892]

That was beautiful ;___;

[FLARE 952]

Its thinks like this that sorta turn me off girls because I sorta know the end will be a waste of time, and I would prolly be nice to her and do something nice like what you did, writing a page of words and get dumped .

[Apple Bloom 2,933]

That was beautiful ;___;

 

It was indeed, though I've never been in love so I can't really relate.

[Lady Rarity Pony 4,892]

It was indeed, though I've never been in love so I can't really relate.

 

me niether or at least not a serious relationship

[Finesthour 7,287]

Let me just say, I am jealous of both of you.

 

It is the worst pain I have ever felt.

[Ezynell 2,037]

It's incredible how you took your emotions and wrote them out instead of acting upon them. I know it probably doesn't mean much, but if I knew you in person, I would be incredibly proud of you.

[D1SC0RD 987]

beautiful analogy. I'm sorry about why you wrote it, though. If I had been through heartbreak, I'd know exactly what to say to you.

 

Unfortunately, I don't. But I hope things get better for you.

[Finesthour 7,287]

Heh, thanks guys.

 

I was in a pretty bad state when I wrote this.