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He looks kind of short (probbably is legs) his wing is too small, he has no nostril, and his eyes could use a little more work (like eylashes, eyebrows, glare, etc.). But I've never drawn with a tablet and I can only imagine it isn't very easy. Anyway I think its great and keep it up :)

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On 2012-06-23 at 5:39 PM, 'Jarrettlicious' said:

He looks kind of short (probbably is legs) his wing is too small, he has no nostril, and his eyes could use a little more work (like eylashes, eyebrows, glare, etc.). But I've never drawn with a tablet and I can only imagine it isn't very easy. Anyway I think its great and keep it up :)

 

I dissagree and I wont take that into consideration but thanks anyway 

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cool! though his flank is a bit bare,

 

I like it with color, only the blank flank bothers me.

 

nothing wrong with blank flanks =3 Edited by Ravager

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Good work, I'm having trouble producing anything good on my tablet :blush:

He (she?) leans back on his legs a bit too much: The frontlegs should go straight, bringing front and hindhooves almost together), the hindlegs' backside should cave in slightly not bulge out. The snout could be a bit slimmer. Also, think about changing the outlines too grey (see your avatar).

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On 2012-06-24 at 6:56 AM, 'Silverwisp the Bard' said:

Good work, I'm having trouble producing anything good on my tablet :blush:

He (she?) leans back on his legs a bit too much: The frontlegs should go straight, bringing front and hindhooves almost together), the hindlegs' backside should cave in slightly not bulge out. The snout could be a bit slimmer. Also, think about changing the outlines too grey (see your avatar).

 

yeah I agree but also dissagree but I think it's amazing and pretty much flawless so you shouldnt really criticize me

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