The Pack- The epic pony war!

[KTP Pretorius 16]

Yup, KibaThePony here, and i am now a fanfiction writer. The Pack, will be my first one that i will be doing. It is about mainly about these two Packs of ponies of all ages, and in two very large seperate groups, fighting against one another. The Pack you're supposed to root for is Fire Clan, in which our hero, Twilight, (and the others) are in. There will be a cast of other characters that will be sure to grip you,and after the whole thing, i think that you will feel deep hatred for BrokenFang because he did something to you fav. character. Things happen in this, like Pinkie has her name shanged to Dianne, Rainbow Dash is now going onto the air force with other warriors, Twilight takes down an ursa minor, and the way the dogs to it in GNG. She may be just as she says an average everyday pony, but may become the greatest warrior of them all.

Here is a link that can give you 1/2 Fire and Ice.

 

 

http://www.fanfictio...2/1/The_bPack_b

 

 

Hope you like it! Please reveiw! Now, i am done with Fire and Ice segment! "Whew!" Now i have to do the next segment, Into The Wild. Hope you din't get bored with it.

Edited August 3, 2012 by KibaThePony

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

tis a good book my friend! can't wait to see more of your work.

[KTP Pretorius 16]

tis a good book my friend! can't wait to see more of your work.

 

Thanks! I'm sure you're the only one who took time to read it. I hope i can get more reviews soon, and i have more of 2/2 Fire and Ice done! That might spark something, or maybe i should change the name and beginning plotline. Yup.

KibaThePony

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

Thanks! I'm sure you're the only one who took time to read it. I hope i can get more reviews soon, and i have more of 2/2 Fire and Ice done! That might spark something, or maybe i should change the name and beginning plotline. Yup.

KibaThePony

 

Oh, don't be hard on yourself... if it makes you feel better, i had like 4 friends here when i read it outloud, so they read it too......kinda :3

[KTP Pretorius 16]

Oh, don't be hard on yourself... if it makes you feel better, i had like 4 friends here when i read it outloud, so they read it too......kinda :3

 

 

Thanks! It's great to know that people know of my work. When i get 2/2 in, maybe more people would like it, because that's when the Mane 6 are doing some neat things that might be pretty cool. It will get better in Into The Wild. Please keep reading when i get 2/2 up. We should talk a bit more as well. As always,

KibaThePony