My First Fanart

[Derpy Dash 233]

My first fanart of Fluttershy

 

 

Please enjoy and leave feedback!

[FortyShadows 217]

Yay for firsts!

Critique so second drawing's >20% cooler than this one. ^^

-Eyes should be smaller

-Cuts off at top and sides, draw smaller or scan the whole pic in ^^

-Body should be rounder

-Front legs should be thicker and closer together

-Tail could go left (The hind legs are left of the front legs so I'd put the tail on the left)

-Wings should be aligned

-Some strokes could be cleaner

Also, did you use pen and pencil crayons? O_O

[Derpy Dash 233]

Well done!

 

Thanks!

Yay for firsts!

Critique so second drawing's >20% cooler than this one. ^^

-Eyes should be smaller

-Cuts off at top and sides, draw smaller or scan the whole pic in ^^

-Body should be rounder

-Front legs should be thicker and closer together

-Tail could go left (The hind legs are left of the front legs so I'd put the tail on the left)

-Wings should be aligned

-Some strokes could be cleaner

Also, did you use pen and pencil crayons? O_O

 

Thanks for the feedback! I'll make sure to keep that in mind next time! And it was pencil and crayon. I'll probably use colored pencil next time. Edited July 11, 2012 by *Rainbow Dash*

[snizox15 14]

Not bad. *applause*

[Azura 1,107]

Looks like her eyes are about to pop right out, good job though.

 

*Cuteness Seizure*

[Jokuc 8,174]

Maybe you should make the back of her body and the eyes smaller. Other than that, it's good