Phaeston-e12 173 July 15, 2012 Share July 15, 2012 (edited) This is one of the five experimental sketch I've done after doing some in-screen character study yesterday. I am fairly happy with the form and the under-sketch but my experiment really didn't pay off that well since Rarity's line-work turned out to be too bright for 'anything'. Lesson learned, going to use much darker line on my four other sketches. Edit: click the image to view it as it is I suppose. Edit2: next time, going to omit line-work on anything that's small; pins and scissors for this case. Edited July 15, 2012 by ein12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dj Manjaro 393 July 15, 2012 Share July 15, 2012 I like your line work, and you're right, the line's are a bit washed out. But that's easy to look past. As for some pointers, you say you're trying to make an older version of Rarity. I would recommend adding some lines on her face, not too many, as she does go to the spa every week, but enough to show some age. I Nitpick Because I Care Ask Brainy Twilight - My art blog - My Music Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phaeston-e12 173 July 15, 2012 Author Share July 15, 2012 I like your line work, and you're right, the line's are a bit washed out. But that's easy to look past. As for some pointers, you say you're trying to make an older version of Rarity. I would recommend adding some lines on her face, not too many, as she does go to the spa every week, but enough to show some age. Thanks, she isn't supposed to be 'that' old however. I've decided to set the time around what would be considered a prime age in terms of body development; 26~29 for case of a human being. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jokuc 8,174 July 15, 2012 Share July 15, 2012 I love it It looks awesome! Good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jammo 986 July 15, 2012 Share July 15, 2012 I was expecting Rarity with walker, saggy hip and an oxygen tank carted behind her. I used to beautiful. You foals today and Nu Poni Metal. I used to sing the cabaret. You would never appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Illusion 100 July 16, 2012 Share July 16, 2012 She looks so elegant! I love it! Every great dream begins with a dreamer. But always remember, you have within you the strength, the patience, and the passion to reach for the stars to change the world. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest July 16, 2012 Share July 16, 2012 There's not much else to say other than... #Fabulous Oop -- I SAID IT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roi 100 July 16, 2012 Share July 16, 2012 Cmon ,cmon Where is that Critic Girl? She can think for me so i dont have to write my reviews! Oc: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/frost-valkenhayn-r3552 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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